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Her hand whispering up to lightly trace a path down the cheek of each
woman hovering over her, looking at her with such absolute love Alice
released a tiny wrenching sob at it. Then she pulled them to her,
kissing Dana first, desperate and needy, to then switch over to Helena,
opening her wide and deep, trying to take everything there for her own.
While this occurred, Dana’s hands moved a lingering path down Alice’s
body, making her shiver and quake into her touch as her tongue lightly
trailed along as well. Arriving at the junction of the blonde’s thighs,
nudging her legs apart and lifting her gaze up in time to lock it with
Alice’s before lowering her mouth for the first sweet taste. Laughing
and smiling into the jump from bird like hips and holding them steady
as she settled in.
The gasps and groans and whimpers from Dana’s tongue, flicking her
*****, kissing her outer folds, and finally deliciously pushing inside,
were swallowed by Helena’s mouth. Warm and lush and loving, feeding on
Alice in a sensual momentum that left her senses drowning, delicate
hands cupping her *****, tweaking the nipples and sliding down her
abdomen.
At the feeling of a hand pressing against her head, Dana grinned,
thinking it was Alice but when she saw carefully and highly expensive
manicured nails she knew differently. For a moment she was irritated
but she realized the intent and sliding off to one side, she went back
to work, licking and kissing and pressing deep inside for the meal she
had always loved best, allowing Helena to press and tease and torture
Alice’s throbbing clitoris in hopes of soon causing the ***** they
were both working so very hard to create.
They didn’t have to wait long.
Alice came with a strangled cry and moan, lost in the press of Helena’s
lips and when it was over, her body a shaking mass, both women slid
upwards to be beside her. Once again, the right of her covered in
Helena and the left of her covered in Dana. Her brown eyes were dark
and drowning in emotions too complex to properly discern and
comprehend. But all that mattered to them was the love they could see
there.
Hands reached upwards to rest flat against their cheeks and the women
leaned into the touch, making her smile and release the smallest cry of
joy. “I love you,” was all she could say.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!