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Turn About Is Fair Play – CH80
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Tinas feeling of nervousness subsided and she now relaxed in Russells company, thankful for his compassion. If you insist Ill
Yes, I insist and dont want to hear any more about it, Russell said firmly and walked to the door. And thanks again Tina for covering the meeting, Russell closed the door behind him.
Tina couldnt believe the turn of events and called Eric to let him know of her itinerary change before reviewing the package for the meeting.
Midday in Malibu
Youre so gonna get it, James voice echoed through the phone. And if you dont get here ASAP Franklins gonna send the National Guard for you. Hes so beyond pissed. Bette pressed 7 to delete the message and sat on the bed wondering what to do next. Rayne was in the shower and Bette knew Rayne had things to do for the day. Bette too had things to do although facing the real world was not something she was looking forward to. So, she decided to slip into the shower and distract herself with Rayne one last time before she went back to LA.
Uh, uh, no, no, Rayne giggled as Bette toyed with her. Hmm, no, Bette. Giggle. This is a workday you know, Rayne eased Bette off herself. We cant do this now.
Bette pouted and wished she could rewind the clock and relive breakfast at least. Oh come on Rayne, you know you can afford to take some time off, Bette coaxed.
Good point; I can, Rayne stressed, but can you. Youve got that fire breathing ***** to deal with at the CAC dont you?
Yeah and hes looking for me, Bette cringed at the thought. James left a message for me, Bette added before Rayne could ask.
Well, Miss Lady, Rayne spoke in a mock tone, you need to wash your ***** and high tail it outta here and deal with that maniacal man, Rayne said without stopping her shower.
You dont let up do you? Bette asked, perplexed by Raynes demeanor.
What do you mean, let up? What did I do?
Youre acting like you want me to leave, Bette bordered on frustration. Im having a hard time figuring out where I fit into your scheme of things, Bette lathered up.
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Love this story! I have been waiting for it and it was worth the wait. Please post again soon. I am interested in where this is leading. Great Job!
It’s interesting to see Rayne talking about control with Bette. Is Bette able to understand that ? Does she want changes that ? Maybe, with Rayne, she has no choice, if she’ll continue her relation wih her.
Yes, Tina knows better Eric than Nya. Is for that, she wants to see him ?
Thank you for this chapter.
Phenomenal read, Blu. I just loved Rayne calling Bette on her shit and not taking any backtalk or squirming out of it. Bravo!
Personally… I always find a chapter structured with lively dialogues very engaging to read and you did exactly that with this chapter. Sometimes I get a tad bit upset when I don’t understand why a story line goes like this or like that but it always helps a reader in my humblest of opinion when the writer pays close attention to details and is consistent in her efforts presenting her case by providing her readers with a solid supporting back ground stories like I find in your story Blu. I love B&T stuff and truthfully much as I love to be lulled with sweet B&T mush I find myself continuously reading this particular story simply because the writer consistently provide me with a very strong argument why she chooses her story to be where it is at this point. Are you going to bring them back together? I’m clueless. If they are not back together do I let this affect my opinion of this story… hell no! Either way, I’m intrigued and that’s reasons enough for me to continue reading whatever exactly it is that you have in store. Thanks for sharing this… now on with the next chapter shall we please.
Was jumping for joy when I saw you had posted again.
Well worth the wait.
Nya is there waiting in the wings for Tina and hopefully Eric may help Tina see the wood for the trees.
As for Rayne and Bette (even as a diehard B+T fan) am luving this interaction. It is brilliant how Rayne has the total measure of Bette and with any luck will bring out the best in Bette and help her redress some of her control issue.
Am sure that this will lead the way for my fave couple to find each other again and cement their relationship to another level.
As always, as admiring fan.
PS- Just continue your excellent work and I’ll be smiling all day long.
BLU..great post..thanks..I am soo loving this interation between Bette and Rayne and Tina and Nya..they are slowly bridging the gaps…to their relationship..thank you again for a great post