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Twisted Triangles ch.16
I can always smell her perfume, before she approaches me, and this time it’s no different. I finally hear her heels click across our wooden floor. Slowly, like a lioness stalking her prey. If only she knew that I was more than willing to be taken by her.
“Smells good, Tina.” It always starts this way, when we’re alone. She wraps her arms around me, I lean into her, after that we can’t keep our hands off each other.
“It’s just spaghetti sauce.” I’m really struggling to get my voice to a stronger tone. It is a little distracting, her hands a starting their familiar ascent to my breast.
“I was talking about you Tina. You smell great. Can’t wait to find out what you really smell like. I bet you taste divine.” Her breathe is getting swallow on the back of my neck and her hands are traveling again.
“You certainly know how to ss…sweet talk a girl. Oh god, Bette….. We can’t God, we can’t.”
“Give me one reason why I can’t do this.” I thought about it, I really tried but nothing came to me.
“Can’t think of a thing. Wa…wait.. Your….broth….oh ***** Bette, move your hand.”
“Like this?” And somewhere between the very bad idea of her copping her usual feel of my breast and me falling into oblivion from her expert touch, her right hand found its way inside to front of my pants to my suddenly very attention starved *****.
“Oh *****, Tina…. you’re so wet.” I have to stop this, I know this new territory would get us someplace I wasn’t ready for. If only breathing wasn’t so hard right now
“Bette…Jesus. Yes. No, no. Bette move your…. hand”
“Tina, please, I know how wet you are. Just let me take care of you. I just want to take care of you.”
“Bette…. the sauce”
“***** the sauce.”
“It’ll burn… then they’ll get sus…suspic….they’ll think something’s up.”
“Tina. Stop thinking. Thinking slows us down. Where’s your bedroom?”
I can’t think I can’t even get my legs to work. All I can so is feel. Her tongue on my neck circling around on some spot she discovered last week. ***** I didn’t even know I had a spot, until she discovered it. I grab her hair, pressing myself against her, to draw her near.
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(10 votes, average: 3.90 out of 5)
Woo! It’s good to see those 2 finally acting on their feelings. Too bad they can’t go all the way.. Grace and Eric really need to get out of the picture. Can’t wait for more!
“It’ll burn… then they’ll get sus…suspic….they’ll think something’s up.”
Hilarious line – wrought with a wealth of subtext! Love the story – keep the great writing up.
They should get it on. Poor Tina and Bette. Love this story.
Good chapter. Damn Bette and Tina so hot and sexy, love it. This is sad for them not be together but hope they will soon. Post soon, thanks!
i absolutely adore your story!!!!!i luv the dynamics between your bette and tina and hell who am i kidding, your getting me just a frustrated!!!please post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i was laughing and trying not to slid off my chair. i just caught up and i absolutely lovel this story. i love the dynamics between these two. grace is a brat and eric is stupid. b/t need to kick everybody to the curb and do the wild thang. thanks this is great.
I think Bette and Tina should move Grace in with Eric and Alice and take over the house together!
Eric is a dolt! He can’t see the forest for the trees! Are you sure he’s related to Bette?
OMG sweet pain..what an aweful mess!! Love your story hopw you post a lil more often!!!
oh my damn!! i was really hoping for them two to release,but you just goin 2 leave like that. this story is fucking awesome. eric is a total boob. and grace is totally jealous of tina’s potential p-power. its clearly written all over her face. please continue with some more. OH MY DAMN!!!
Girl great update!! I am sooo watiing for the next chapter as well as when we get back to the orginal from chapter 1… I wanna see what happens as grace and bette are a couple and bette moving in w. tina. U are diong an excellent job and made my night with all the girls leaving me frustated.. damn teases, lol.. Well least i got about 6 free drinks… ha ha.. please post sooner if u can!!
Hey where have you been. I love your story. Please end the sweet torture soon. these two are funny though. I love B and T acting like 2 teens on restriction….LOL. pls post more often is possible.
Hey I’ still catching up I Love it WHOA! It’s still Wonderful Story Please continue post soon.
K
Great chapter. That was hot. Too bad they couldn’t finish lol. Can’t wait for more. Love it.
Awesome story. Can’t wait till next time.
I cant get enough of this story; B & T just have so much fun together. Its good to see them spending time together that doesnt include drama.
Oops…did I say drama? LOL – just sitting here patiently waiting for Eric and Grace to get kicked tot he curb. (insert wicked laugh here)!