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Twisted Triangles ch.16
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“***** Tina, yes.” she finally manages to breathe to me between licks. “Don’t move, don’t turn around yet. I just want to admire you.”
“Bette… please.” I couldn’t say if it was a plea for her stop this madness or to take me to the heights I’ve only dreamed about.
“Turn the sauce off Tina and put your hands on the counter top.”
“Where’s my please?” now that she’s back away from me a few paces, I can finally formulate sentences.
“Oh she speaks. Ok please stand there. And put your hands on the counter.” I know I can’t see her, but it’s something about her voice. It’s deeper, filled with a lust a don’t think I’m ready to help satisfy. And yet I can’t move to stop her.
“Tina?”
“Yes?”
“Do you have any idea how beautiful you are? What you do to me? How going out with my brother is killing me?”
“I wasn’t aware that I was shackled to your brother?” Really I thought it was a dinner between neighbors. Ok, it was Grace’s lame attempt to hook up with Bette and have me settle with Eric. I have to let her know that wasn’t my intention.
“Please don’t turn around. I need to say this and then we can continue.” I just feel like an ***** with my back turned to her while she pours this confession out to me.
“God Tina, sometimes I wonder if you’re even worth it.” Now she sounds like she’s been defeated. In those few seconds we went from heated almost lovers to a failed almost couple. This has got to stop.
“Then you don’t know ***** Porter. Stop trying to hook me up with your brother. Did our last talk mean nothing to you. Because I was there and I thought we came to an agreement that we would try to work on us.”
“But how can we…”
“I don’t know yet how we’re going to do this. But we are, I promise.”
“Can we pick up where we left off?” She looks so cute when she pouts, I could never deny her.
“Yes, please.”
With that we started our electric kissing again. I confessed to her one day that kissing her was the sweetest pain I have ever known. Painful because the electricity that went through me each time our lips met, awakened ever nerve in my body at once, each begged for attention. It hurt like *****. But it was a pain I never minded. Her smart assed reply was ‘wait to you see what else I can do. It might very well kill you’.
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Woo! It’s good to see those 2 finally acting on their feelings. Too bad they can’t go all the way.. Grace and Eric really need to get out of the picture. Can’t wait for more!
“It’ll burn… then they’ll get sus…suspic….they’ll think something’s up.”
Hilarious line – wrought with a wealth of subtext! Love the story – keep the great writing up.
They should get it on. Poor Tina and Bette. Love this story.
Good chapter. Damn Bette and Tina so hot and sexy, love it. This is sad for them not be together but hope they will soon. Post soon, thanks!
i absolutely adore your story!!!!!i luv the dynamics between your bette and tina and hell who am i kidding, your getting me just a frustrated!!!please post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i was laughing and trying not to slid off my chair. i just caught up and i absolutely lovel this story. i love the dynamics between these two. grace is a brat and eric is stupid. b/t need to kick everybody to the curb and do the wild thang. thanks this is great.
I think Bette and Tina should move Grace in with Eric and Alice and take over the house together!
Eric is a dolt! He can’t see the forest for the trees! Are you sure he’s related to Bette?
OMG sweet pain..what an aweful mess!! Love your story hopw you post a lil more often!!!
oh my damn!! i was really hoping for them two to release,but you just goin 2 leave like that. this story is fucking awesome. eric is a total boob. and grace is totally jealous of tina’s potential p-power. its clearly written all over her face. please continue with some more. OH MY DAMN!!!
Girl great update!! I am sooo watiing for the next chapter as well as when we get back to the orginal from chapter 1… I wanna see what happens as grace and bette are a couple and bette moving in w. tina. U are diong an excellent job and made my night with all the girls leaving me frustated.. damn teases, lol.. Well least i got about 6 free drinks… ha ha.. please post sooner if u can!!
Hey where have you been. I love your story. Please end the sweet torture soon. these two are funny though. I love B and T acting like 2 teens on restriction….LOL. pls post more often is possible.
Hey I’ still catching up I Love it WHOA! It’s still Wonderful Story Please continue post soon.
K
Great chapter. That was hot. Too bad they couldn’t finish lol. Can’t wait for more. Love it.
Awesome story. Can’t wait till next time.
I cant get enough of this story; B & T just have so much fun together. Its good to see them spending time together that doesnt include drama.
Oops…did I say drama? LOL – just sitting here patiently waiting for Eric and Grace to get kicked tot he curb. (insert wicked laugh here)!