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Twisted Triangles ch.17
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“Turn the sauce off Tina and put your hands up on the counter top .” I figure if she keeps stopping me like this, then the least I can get is a chance to drink in her beauty uninterrupted.
“Where’s my please?”
“Oh she speaks. Ok , please stand there. And please put your hands on the counter.” Try as I might I can’t control my urge to ravish her again and its evident by the sound of my voice.
“Tina?”
“Yes?”
“Do you have any idea how beautiful you are? What you do to me? How going out with my brother is killing me?”
“I wasn’t aware that I was shackled to your brother.” She wants to turn and face me to continue to have this conversation. But I can’t have her do that. I need to get this out first.
“Please don’t turn around. I need to say this and then we can continue.” who am I kidding if I say what I’m thinking, we’ll never get anywhere.
“God, Tina sometimes I wonder if you’re even worth it.” I didn’t mean for that to come out so suddenly. I had a whole impromptu speech about how I care about her, but she’s right, us right now would be bad a idea. But after a quick inventory of our surroundings; Tina and Grace’s picture by the window in the kitchen and my brother’s cell phone sitting on the table by me. It all became painfully clear. Bette and Tina do not belong together at this moment in time. And that discovery caused me to utter a sentence I believe in my heart to be untrue.
“Then you don’t know ***** Porter. Stop trying to hook me up with your brother. Did our last talk mean nothing to you. Because I was there and I thought we came an agreement that we would try to work on us.”
“Yeah but how can we….”
“I don’t know yet how we’re going to do this. But we are I promise.”
How can an uncertain promise get to sound so damn hopeful to me. I should kick myself after doubting our potential as a couple. Well since she’s so close, might as well take advantage of it again.
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Thank you so much for posting!! Our girls are so naughty..Maybe they can rent a room at the motel just out of town..lol Hope everything works out in your personal life :)
I gotta get some new neighbors. Better yet I need to move to their neighborhood. AWESOME. Thanks.
The different POV is so great!! It’s like reading the same great chapter twice! I think we’re all getting sexually frustrated just by reading what’s going on between our 2 favorite ladies. Can’t wait till they get together finally.. I’m glad you like my story :)
jesus, girl, i just took a shower and now im gonna have to do another one. what lovely thoughts to go to bed to. god damn get them together already. i think the rest of us are a frustrated as they are. well, with that im gonna go to sleep, i think. ;) please post soon
Wow I love the way you doing about this story and can’t wait to see this 2 get alone together again. Post soon, thanks!
i may have to hate you soon. LOL!!! i’m getting so close too. and then here comes da boob (eric). please make him go away he brings me down. and clearly tina’s p-power is shooting all over da room if she can make bette stammer like that. once again lauerlite, OH MY DAMN!! beautiful story i’m still so in love with it. please post something soon so we all can finish!!
Another great chapter get them together already
Ok, I seriously need to stop reading this after DJing and drinking way too much.. I have halfway orgies on the dance floor and then come home to this great story with our girls being sexually frustrated and.. alas me as well… need to just get a one nite stand, lol.. Sorry to say your actual story has not got me free drinks yet, but I have started to master with thoughts of how you manipulates us into loving this frustrating story :) into my way of DJing.. Being a lil tease = lots and lots of free drinks for me yea!! Its 520 am here and I am reading this story. Great update!! Hope to see another one early this week if not sooner… I think the girls need to go out and have some more fun on the floor and I hvae the perfect songs for them!!
Sexually Funny….I like the combination. Ok, fuck all that….I am frustrated as hell right now.
First Illuminati, then you. And to think, I had planned on going to church; it wouldnt even feel right, “on so many levels;” sitting there and thinking of the last 2 stories I read.
I’m Catholic….need I say more? -_-
Hey yes too much distraction Eric and Grace LOL! that was so funny too LOL! their are just like a kid being out of sight LOL! WHOA! Please continue I Love it Thanks.
K
Excellent chapter. Love B’s point of view. You HAVE to get B and T together. No grace and bette lol. Love it.
This story is just fun!!!! Please post soon. It is one of my favs!
I love this format great post!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m still trying to decide about the POV approach. Its kinda different, but I’ve been reading so many stories today my head is spining. This one, wow, those two are gonna explode soon. Damn, just set Eric straight, no pun intended, and let the girls get on with it. snQQpy your cracking me up. You were planning on going to church, not confession I hope.