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Twisted Triangles ch.17
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I felt that familiar tingle in my stomach that traveled down my toes and up through to the top of my head. I was close and nothing could stop my impeding explosion.
“Bette…I’m….. I’m…”
“Soo..close….me ……too”
She’s so close to my ear, and my breathing is wreaking havoc on my system. I could tell she waiting to ***** with me. She sped up her gyrations of my leg and her moans are higher in pitch. But in that spilt moment when I heard nothing but my rapid heart beating in my ears, I hear another voice.
“Hey Alice, I’ll be back in a couple of hours.”
“I still don’t understand why I just can’t come over. Isn’t Grace gone? I would n’t be the fifth wheel.”
“Maybe next time Al, it reallly wasn’t up to me.”
Oh ***** it’s Eric. ***** can he hear us? ***** Tina. Oh god, she can’t hear him, she still so close to her own *****. ***** as much as I hate this. We have to act fast.
“Bette….wh…what the *****…I was about to-”
“I know…me too……but my brother is outside the door.” She still hasn’t snapped out of her haze yet. Your door, Tina.”
“***** Bette. What should we do?” There we go. Now if I can only get myself out of my current state.
“Where’s your bathroom?”
“Bette this is no time to finish what we started!” Well, I see where her priorities are.
“No, I need to go to the bathroom to freshen up, I look very different than when he last saw me. He might get a little suspicious.”
“Cause you look like you’ve ***** the neighbor girl?” That’s good. A joke in a time of crisis. Ok at least that earns her a little laugh.
“Well what about me? I can’t go into the bathroom to freshen up too.” As tempting as that sounds……
“Go back to the kitchen and finish cooking. He might think that the heat made you all red.”
“Am I red?” So not the time for girly questions. No matter how adorable she looks with her face scrunched up in concern.
“Tina, please, not now.”
“Bathroom’s straight ahead.”
“Thanks baby.”
“Baby?”
“Yeah, I thought after tonight you’ve earned it.” that’s the honest truth. I haven’t felt that good in years, if ever.
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Thank you so much for posting!! Our girls are so naughty..Maybe they can rent a room at the motel just out of town..lol Hope everything works out in your personal life :)
I gotta get some new neighbors. Better yet I need to move to their neighborhood. AWESOME. Thanks.
The different POV is so great!! It’s like reading the same great chapter twice! I think we’re all getting sexually frustrated just by reading what’s going on between our 2 favorite ladies. Can’t wait till they get together finally.. I’m glad you like my story :)
jesus, girl, i just took a shower and now im gonna have to do another one. what lovely thoughts to go to bed to. god damn get them together already. i think the rest of us are a frustrated as they are. well, with that im gonna go to sleep, i think. ;) please post soon
Wow I love the way you doing about this story and can’t wait to see this 2 get alone together again. Post soon, thanks!
i may have to hate you soon. LOL!!! i’m getting so close too. and then here comes da boob (eric). please make him go away he brings me down. and clearly tina’s p-power is shooting all over da room if she can make bette stammer like that. once again lauerlite, OH MY DAMN!! beautiful story i’m still so in love with it. please post something soon so we all can finish!!
Another great chapter get them together already
Ok, I seriously need to stop reading this after DJing and drinking way too much.. I have halfway orgies on the dance floor and then come home to this great story with our girls being sexually frustrated and.. alas me as well… need to just get a one nite stand, lol.. Sorry to say your actual story has not got me free drinks yet, but I have started to master with thoughts of how you manipulates us into loving this frustrating story :) into my way of DJing.. Being a lil tease = lots and lots of free drinks for me yea!! Its 520 am here and I am reading this story. Great update!! Hope to see another one early this week if not sooner… I think the girls need to go out and have some more fun on the floor and I hvae the perfect songs for them!!
Sexually Funny….I like the combination. Ok, fuck all that….I am frustrated as hell right now.
First Illuminati, then you. And to think, I had planned on going to church; it wouldnt even feel right, “on so many levels;” sitting there and thinking of the last 2 stories I read.
I’m Catholic….need I say more? -_-
Hey yes too much distraction Eric and Grace LOL! that was so funny too LOL! their are just like a kid being out of sight LOL! WHOA! Please continue I Love it Thanks.
K
Excellent chapter. Love B’s point of view. You HAVE to get B and T together. No grace and bette lol. Love it.
This story is just fun!!!! Please post soon. It is one of my favs!
I love this format great post!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m still trying to decide about the POV approach. Its kinda different, but I’ve been reading so many stories today my head is spining. This one, wow, those two are gonna explode soon. Damn, just set Eric straight, no pun intended, and let the girls get on with it. snQQpy your cracking me up. You were planning on going to church, not confession I hope.