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Twisted Triangles ch.24
Chapter 23:
“I love you. I always have.” I tried to say it clear, so there would be no doubt in her mind about my intentions. But it came out a little choked. All of my emotions got clogged in my throat. Not satisfied with my words, I looked in her eyes again and placed a gentle kiss on her lips. Not much, but it was enough for now. I wanted to let her know with that kiss that I would never hurt her and that I would protect her til the end of time.
What I didn’t expect her to do was respond. She tried to, but as I held her tight, I felt her body get wobbly and then completely limp in my arms.
A Night Out With The Girls Pt.3: Bette 2
Oh my God, I killed her. I ***** killed her!! She’s dead isn’t she Shane? Shane, who was watching the two of us the whole time saw Tina get limp in my arms. I guess because I was in shock she came to grab Tina from my arms.
“I love you. I do.” she speaks. Not only that she said that she loved me. Thank God. This could not get any better.
“Whoa TK easy the, I’m not the one that you want.” Shane says pulling away from Tina.
“Shut up let the woman speak.” I want her to say it again. Shout it from the rooftops like I plan to later tonight. A steel trap couldn’t stop me from smiling right now. Shane says something about drinking. I can’t see her let alone hear her. For the life of me I can’t tear my gaze from Tina. The way she remains unsteady, her eyes so focused. So cute.
“I think she’s fine.” Just then it flashed in my mind. If she faints at the mere mention of love. If she could feel just how much I love her from a simple kiss, then I wonder how she’ll react the first time we make love. Maybe she’ll have a panic attack. I know, I think about ***** a lot when it comes to Tina. But after all this time and being so close for so long with her, how could I not. It’s a wonder I haven’t combusted. I marvel how Tina can keep it together.
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(17 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5)
Blood is not a good sign.. Grace is SO DEAD!!! I think I’ll take care of her myself just so B&T can be together with no outside sources intruding. Can’t wait for more
Ok, so i just read every chapter and holy shit. This is a great story and I cannot wait to find out what happens to Tina. Was it Alice that threw the cup at her? Anyway please post soon.
I for one like reading both POV’s. Grace is abit of a pshycho, what would she do if Bette were her girlfriend. After what has happened I don’t know how Bette ends up with Grace.
Damn this is sad and I hate Grace now. Hope Tina ok, post soon please, thanks!
Oh No! What the hell! Gracie is an azzhole!!! Kill her off please :) I’ll put you and your Bro in my good thoughts!
I’ve read this before, why post it twice? Hmm Well I still love it. Please post soon.
*gasp!* :D i luv this story. keep it up!
oh yeah. first!
OH MY GOD!!! I KNEW IT DAT BITCH GRACE CUT HER. PLEASE GET RID OF HER IN A MOST RIGHTGEOUS WAY!!! BUT I DO LOVE THE WAY YOU SPLIT THINGS PLEASE CONTINUE, IT’S UNIQUE AND QUITE INTERESTING. HOPEFULLY IT’S SUMTHIN MINOR N HER AND BETTE WILL BE 2GETHER SOON. PLEASE FOR HEAVEN’S SAKE POST SOON!! PEACE!!!
yeah I agree with lauren, there is no need to read every chapter twice. although I do like reading both T and B’s thoughts, can you maybe put them in the same post? just a suggestion to move the story along, especially since so much time goes by between posts.
with that said, I love your story. It is one of those unique stories that just pulls you in. please post soon
One thing I love about Laurel is that her chapters are not short…..so I say, bring on the next one!!! And since Tina is on the floor again, and bleeding this time, make the bouncer do his job and detain Grace from leaving….just in case we need to press charges!!
ok blood what?? continue soon!!
nice story, quit teasing us and tells us what happen with tina rather than changing POV, ur such a tease, thanx for the post.
THANKS FOR ACTING SICK AND BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS CHAPTER BABE, I LOVE IT, AND YOU BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS STORY MAKES ME LOVE U EVEN MORE! LAURELITE WOO HOO