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Twisted Triangles ch.24
“Bette unless you want to draw a bigger crowd and force Grace and your brother to come out of here, you’ll help me.”
“Let them see. They have to find out sooner or later.” Damn skippy. Considering that tonight’s the night for it and all.
“Fine. What about Alice?” Damn, she’s good. And right.
“Let’s go.” Tina and I say at the same time. Good to know that we think alike already. I wonder if that’ll ever get annoying.
After Shane made herself scarce, I turn to Tina. I need to know if she’s really ok with this.
“Are you ok?”
“About fainting or the thing you said?”
The thing I said, the thing I said, the thing I said.
“Fainting, I know how you feel about the other thing.” I smile despite being absolutely terrified about the thing I said and I hope that she meant it when she said that she loved me too.
“You’re pretty certain about that aren’t you?” she said smiling so brightly it could melt an ice berg. I hope she never gets tired of smiling that way for me.
“Well you said that you loved me after you gained conscience.”
“It could be the impeding concussion, you know?” Funny. Is she kidding?
Her face took a completely serious expression sensing that my chuckle was a complete and utter insecure one. That I did need her reassurance that she did feel the same way that I felt about her.
“I mean it. I love you Bette, I do.”
“Did you always?”
“No. Absolutely not.” NO!! What did she mean. I mean I didn’t love her, when we met or anything, but I did get this pull on my heart when she took my hand. Walking on the dance floor I knew that this girl would get me in trouble.
“Did you like me a little?” Come on, give me something. Don’t touch me, just explain. Maybe this evening’s revelations are more than I bargained for.
“Bette, do you remember that night at all?”
“Of course. We came here and did the ***** dance of love. Did you forget?” This is getting ridiculous. How could she forget that, that night was ***** amazing. I’m a little pissed. Hopefully, she’ll read more hurt on my face than anger. I need her to explain her side of things. After all, we never really talked about that night.
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(17 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5)
Blood is not a good sign.. Grace is SO DEAD!!! I think I’ll take care of her myself just so B&T can be together with no outside sources intruding. Can’t wait for more
Ok, so i just read every chapter and holy shit. This is a great story and I cannot wait to find out what happens to Tina. Was it Alice that threw the cup at her? Anyway please post soon.
I for one like reading both POV’s. Grace is abit of a pshycho, what would she do if Bette were her girlfriend. After what has happened I don’t know how Bette ends up with Grace.
Damn this is sad and I hate Grace now. Hope Tina ok, post soon please, thanks!
Oh No! What the hell! Gracie is an azzhole!!! Kill her off please :) I’ll put you and your Bro in my good thoughts!
I’ve read this before, why post it twice? Hmm Well I still love it. Please post soon.
*gasp!* :D i luv this story. keep it up!
oh yeah. first!
OH MY GOD!!! I KNEW IT DAT BITCH GRACE CUT HER. PLEASE GET RID OF HER IN A MOST RIGHTGEOUS WAY!!! BUT I DO LOVE THE WAY YOU SPLIT THINGS PLEASE CONTINUE, IT’S UNIQUE AND QUITE INTERESTING. HOPEFULLY IT’S SUMTHIN MINOR N HER AND BETTE WILL BE 2GETHER SOON. PLEASE FOR HEAVEN’S SAKE POST SOON!! PEACE!!!
yeah I agree with lauren, there is no need to read every chapter twice. although I do like reading both T and B’s thoughts, can you maybe put them in the same post? just a suggestion to move the story along, especially since so much time goes by between posts.
with that said, I love your story. It is one of those unique stories that just pulls you in. please post soon
One thing I love about Laurel is that her chapters are not short…..so I say, bring on the next one!!! And since Tina is on the floor again, and bleeding this time, make the bouncer do his job and detain Grace from leaving….just in case we need to press charges!!
ok blood what?? continue soon!!
nice story, quit teasing us and tells us what happen with tina rather than changing POV, ur such a tease, thanx for the post.
THANKS FOR ACTING SICK AND BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS CHAPTER BABE, I LOVE IT, AND YOU BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS STORY MAKES ME LOVE U EVEN MORE! LAURELITE WOO HOO