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Twisted Triangles ch.24
“Bette, we didn’t meet here, we met at Mel’s remember?” Oh man, how could I forget. God I hated her. She was such a sarcastic ***** to me. And I didn’t even do anything to her. Man, jeez. ***** how could I forget that. My face visibly relaxes and we return to our present day love-fest.
“Oh right that did suck.” I think she didn’t like me either to tell the truth. I remember all the aggressive and protective energy she was throwing at me, to shield her friend from me. Still I think she had a little attraction for me, right? “But not even a little?”
“I thought you were trying too hard.”
“What, not possible. A Porter does not have to try hard anything” Especially with the ladies. What did she just meet me or something?
“And arrogant as *****.” She’s got me there.
“Whatever, you wanted me.”
“Yeah to go away.” God it’s going to be so much fun trading shots with her. Clearly I’ve met a worthy opponent. But the moment she looked dead in my eyes, I had nothing really good to say back to her.
“Yeah well you smell. Wanna dance?”
“Please after a comment like that. Not on your life.” Yeah right, she knows she wants to dance with me. I can tell, her eyes say yes. And at that moment I had the upper hand again.
“Please. I promise to touch you in all the right places.”
“See, arrogant.” She hasn’t seen ‘arrogant’ in me yet.
“That wasn’t arrogant, that was romantic.” I say grabbing the water bottle from her and guide her to the dance floor.
“Really? I wonder what your Hallmark cards will say”
“Wouldn’t you like to know?” My brain is on ‘dirty joke’ overload. I hate to sound like a horny frat guy, but I need to get me some that and fast. Could this night go any slower. But then she smiles up at me, and I’m right back to her. The idea of loving her, just being there with her really.
“See. Romantic.” She says. I contemplate for a moment. I wonder if she could read those thoughts I just had about her. Maybe it was my eyes that told her the truth.
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(17 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5)
Blood is not a good sign.. Grace is SO DEAD!!! I think I’ll take care of her myself just so B&T can be together with no outside sources intruding. Can’t wait for more
Ok, so i just read every chapter and holy shit. This is a great story and I cannot wait to find out what happens to Tina. Was it Alice that threw the cup at her? Anyway please post soon.
I for one like reading both POV’s. Grace is abit of a pshycho, what would she do if Bette were her girlfriend. After what has happened I don’t know how Bette ends up with Grace.
Damn this is sad and I hate Grace now. Hope Tina ok, post soon please, thanks!
Oh No! What the hell! Gracie is an azzhole!!! Kill her off please :) I’ll put you and your Bro in my good thoughts!
I’ve read this before, why post it twice? Hmm Well I still love it. Please post soon.
*gasp!* :D i luv this story. keep it up!
oh yeah. first!
OH MY GOD!!! I KNEW IT DAT BITCH GRACE CUT HER. PLEASE GET RID OF HER IN A MOST RIGHTGEOUS WAY!!! BUT I DO LOVE THE WAY YOU SPLIT THINGS PLEASE CONTINUE, IT’S UNIQUE AND QUITE INTERESTING. HOPEFULLY IT’S SUMTHIN MINOR N HER AND BETTE WILL BE 2GETHER SOON. PLEASE FOR HEAVEN’S SAKE POST SOON!! PEACE!!!
yeah I agree with lauren, there is no need to read every chapter twice. although I do like reading both T and B’s thoughts, can you maybe put them in the same post? just a suggestion to move the story along, especially since so much time goes by between posts.
with that said, I love your story. It is one of those unique stories that just pulls you in. please post soon
One thing I love about Laurel is that her chapters are not short…..so I say, bring on the next one!!! And since Tina is on the floor again, and bleeding this time, make the bouncer do his job and detain Grace from leaving….just in case we need to press charges!!
ok blood what?? continue soon!!
nice story, quit teasing us and tells us what happen with tina rather than changing POV, ur such a tease, thanx for the post.
THANKS FOR ACTING SICK AND BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS CHAPTER BABE, I LOVE IT, AND YOU BLOWING OFF WORK FOR THIS STORY MAKES ME LOVE U EVEN MORE! LAURELITE WOO HOO