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Twisted Triangles ch.38
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“What? Why?” Eric says, directing 100% of his anger towards Alice. However in a very unlikely move for Alice, she calmly walked over to him and whispered in his ear.
“Really?”
“Yeah really, look at them.” He did. I don’t know why, but what he saw seemed satisfy him. Tina and I just shrugged our shoulders, collected some luggage and headed out to my car.
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“Ok now come straight home. no bathroom breaks and no funny business. Straight home.” Alice yelled to our car while they drove off. I looked on, like a deer caught in headlights. Tina just flipped her the bird. Wow, good to see she’s got some of her edge back.
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“Bette, do you mind if I turn on the radio. It is kind of a long drive.”
“Yeah, go ahead.” I’ve been so focused on breathing that I forgot that maybe a little conversation would’ve made it less awkward. “There’s some CDs in the glove box if you don’t want to listen to the commercials.
“Oh, great.” she seemed to hesitate. I guess she expects me to start this conversation. After all this is a golden opportunity; we’re alone, and we seemed to be getting along.
“What’s this?” An innocent enough question. But when she showed me the shiny disk, covered in my handwriting, I almost crashed the car. There it was written in bold, black ink: Tina’s 1st Time.
“It’s a mix cd I made when we started to sneak around.” no point in lying. I just wasn’t expecting it to come out all at once. “I hoped to play it for you after all of that mess cleared up.” I’m grateful from the traffic gridlock. The tears are starting to blur my vision.
“Oh Bette.” She whispers, while she wipes. My tears away with her thumb. See it’s days like this that I imagined with her. But I never thought it would be because we broke each other’s hearts.
“I’m sorry, I didn’t plan on doing this your first day back. I thought that I was over this. I was sure that I was over…..”
“Me?” even through my impeding hysterics, I can her the hurt in her voice too. I know it hasn’t been easy for Tina, either.
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haha u mean let the games begin rite!! wow that was such a tease!! ya im thinkin grace is gonna do sumthin straight scandalous..waitin for ur next
Funny crazy Alice…a little B&T angst…clever dialogue. This is a wonderful respite from the torture that is season 3. Please keep going and post as often as you can. Thank you for sharing.
These two are playing a very dangerous game. There are two other players involved, they should just be honest with one another and tell each other the truth. LOL. Nah, that would be too easy and where’s the fun in that. LOL. Really do enjoy this story, please continue.
This sad two people so it love, Two others in love with them. Grace will try to get Tina out of the Porters life,or make Bette commit to something more permanent than G/F. Bette is messed up but not crazy. Alice is a bigggggggggg mess. thanks
I really likre this story. Your dialogue is wonderful.
Good chapter. Alice is crazy and funny. Damn this is sad to see them like this and not together. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
This is torture for B&T and for me!!! But thats the way life is sometimes, hopefully not for long, so fix this Laurelite…..pleeeeease :o))
Cool. I love this story. I still seem to be getting crankyer (is that a word) each week. So thanks for coming back with this.
So who’s going to end up killing who? And yes I remain true to the skinny dipping in hell idea being better than the situation these people find themselves in. But the story sure is twisted. lol
i am off my death for now!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you i know you were tired games only hurt but boy are they fun!!!!!!!!!!!
Can’t get enough of your storyyyy…
I have read all your chapters and i love this story!!!
LL,Sorry to see that you too are up to all small hours in the morning but sad to see you have to get up at 5 AM. As in 05:00, ‘Oh my gawd’ that is early!!! On to this devilish delight! More torture, piled on with a trowel I see. And you teased us all but saying that Tina and Bette would get through this misery and reunite. But sneaky lillt’ ole you never mentioned that it would be platonically. I simply cannot imagine that having Bette and Tina is such close proximity will not be too much of a temptation for either of them. A love so strong and true will go lie down and stay at peace. It will toss and turn until the restraints are broken and it is freedom to demand and demonstrate its true being. I can’t wait. Bette and Tina will both try to do the right thing but (with a little coercion) will succumb with their desperate need and longing to be together. Grace and Eric do not stand a chance in the face of such true devotion. All of this is admirably told by your fabulous fliar for characterization and dialogue. You can palpably feel the tension in the car. And Alice’s outburst were a riot. More please and as soon as you can wrestle that pc into shape. Your fans demand it Much gratitude and appreciation,Your Loyal Fan.
Loved Bette’s internal monologue, so many astute observations. And very funny too, even if the topics weren’t.
for reasons that both you and i both know, i’m just gonna take that as a sign of love and utter appreciation for my existence in your life. (please excuse my run-on sentence.) but at the very least you found a shred of your true tibette heart, now that i can appreciate. please post soon. PEACE.
well, i hope you know what you’re doing, because knowing that those two love each other but have others in their lives now, is a torture…i hope their love will prevail