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Twisted Triangles ch.38
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“No, not you. All this. This situation. I want to be your friend Tina. I really do.”
“Me too. I mean I want to be your friend, too.”
“But I can’t do that. I’m certain of that more than ever. Just being in this car with you, not talking or talking. Whatever, I just want you Tina.”
“I still….” I sighed and looked out of the window for a moment. Leaving me, waiting for her to say anything after my stupid admission.
“I still have feelings for you. Strong feelings. Like I love you.”
Then it was quiet again. The radio DJ yammered on about the latest cream to help the pounds melt away. While Tina and I just sat moving inch by inch along the freeway. Together finally, but still unable to connect.
“Can I play the CD?” She asks.
“Sure go ahead.” The first song is “All I Do Is Think Of You” by J5. It takes me back to when I was creating the CD. I wanted something old, but not too old. Plus Tina said that they were one of her favorites.
“Oh Bette I looooved, this song. When I had my first crush…..”
“To a boy?”
“Of course to a boy.”
“I’m just asking, because a few months ago, you kissing a girl.” I teased. The air finally started to clear and the tension melted from both of us.
“She was hardly a girl. She was a phenomenal force of nature.”
“Really, force of nature?”
“Yeah. I wondered whatever happened to her. All I see now is this dressed down dork, that makes mix CDs.”
“Haha very funny. I don’t hear you complaining.”
“Well it’s good.”
“No it’s perfect.” I turned to tell her to her face.
“Is that arrogant side making an appearance?”
“No, it’s the romantic one. Is that a problem?” I hoped that we could keep it light all the way home. But maybe I was pushing my luck.
“No, it’s good. It’s comforting. Knowing that we can still be friends after all that we’ve been through together.”
“Is that all you want from me Tina? Friendship?”
“Honestly Bette. I sometimes think that I want you more than anything. But I don’t think it’s possible given our current situation.”
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haha u mean let the games begin rite!! wow that was such a tease!! ya im thinkin grace is gonna do sumthin straight scandalous..waitin for ur next
Funny crazy Alice…a little B&T angst…clever dialogue. This is a wonderful respite from the torture that is season 3. Please keep going and post as often as you can. Thank you for sharing.
These two are playing a very dangerous game. There are two other players involved, they should just be honest with one another and tell each other the truth. LOL. Nah, that would be too easy and where’s the fun in that. LOL. Really do enjoy this story, please continue.
This sad two people so it love, Two others in love with them. Grace will try to get Tina out of the Porters life,or make Bette commit to something more permanent than G/F. Bette is messed up but not crazy. Alice is a bigggggggggg mess. thanks
I really likre this story. Your dialogue is wonderful.
Good chapter. Alice is crazy and funny. Damn this is sad to see them like this and not together. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
This is torture for B&T and for me!!! But thats the way life is sometimes, hopefully not for long, so fix this Laurelite…..pleeeeease :o))
Cool. I love this story. I still seem to be getting crankyer (is that a word) each week. So thanks for coming back with this.
So who’s going to end up killing who? And yes I remain true to the skinny dipping in hell idea being better than the situation these people find themselves in. But the story sure is twisted. lol
i am off my death for now!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you i know you were tired games only hurt but boy are they fun!!!!!!!!!!!
Can’t get enough of your storyyyy…
I have read all your chapters and i love this story!!!
LL,Sorry to see that you too are up to all small hours in the morning but sad to see you have to get up at 5 AM. As in 05:00, ‘Oh my gawd’ that is early!!! On to this devilish delight! More torture, piled on with a trowel I see. And you teased us all but saying that Tina and Bette would get through this misery and reunite. But sneaky lillt’ ole you never mentioned that it would be platonically. I simply cannot imagine that having Bette and Tina is such close proximity will not be too much of a temptation for either of them. A love so strong and true will go lie down and stay at peace. It will toss and turn until the restraints are broken and it is freedom to demand and demonstrate its true being. I can’t wait. Bette and Tina will both try to do the right thing but (with a little coercion) will succumb with their desperate need and longing to be together. Grace and Eric do not stand a chance in the face of such true devotion. All of this is admirably told by your fabulous fliar for characterization and dialogue. You can palpably feel the tension in the car. And Alice’s outburst were a riot. More please and as soon as you can wrestle that pc into shape. Your fans demand it Much gratitude and appreciation,Your Loyal Fan.
Loved Bette’s internal monologue, so many astute observations. And very funny too, even if the topics weren’t.
for reasons that both you and i both know, i’m just gonna take that as a sign of love and utter appreciation for my existence in your life. (please excuse my run-on sentence.) but at the very least you found a shred of your true tibette heart, now that i can appreciate. please post soon. PEACE.
well, i hope you know what you’re doing, because knowing that those two love each other but have others in their lives now, is a torture…i hope their love will prevail