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Twisted Triangles ch.38
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“Yeah, I know. But it’s nice to know that you love me.”
“I never stopped, Bette.” She took my hand and placed it on her lap as Janis Joplin’s “Maybe” started to play.
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We talked all the way home. Like old friends. Something we never felt we had before. Our past was based mostly an endless cycle of guilt trips and paranoia. Don’t get me wrong I’m still crazy in love with her, and yes she is still a huge tease. As demonstrated by our conversations I pulled into her driveway.
“Hey Bette.”
“Yeah T.”
“How come you have all these sweet, loveable songs on this CD, except the last song.”
“I don’t know what you mean. What’s the last song?”
“You know damn well what the last song is.” she said cocking that eyebrow up at me. Man, she still got it.
“No I don’t. Why don’t you tell me.”
” ‘How Does It Feel’ Bette. Come on, how cheesy.”
“First of all it’s not cheesy. Secondly I figured after a long CD filled with me buttering you and letting you know how much I loved you, you’d be willing to give up a little something in appreciation.”
“Is that what you thought? That I was just going to drop my pants because of a CD?”
“I was going to use to extra tools of seduction. But yes, that was the goal.” She rolled her eyes playfully. “The seats recline, you know.” We laughed and she slapped my shoulder.
“Well it was a nice thought.”
“Can I you a question, T?”
“Sure.” She asked licking her lips at me. This is where I wanted the conversation to go, but my breathing quickly told me that I wasn’t as prepared.
“Would it have worked?” My voice is an octave below where it normally is. A product of our close proximity and Tina staring right at me.
She leans in closer, before she licked her lips again. this time grazing my bottom lip with her tongue.
“Bette, it definitely would have worked.” Her voice was just as husky and full of want as mine. I was sure that she was going to tell me to take her away from her driveway. However I would proved to be the played party, she moved away from my lips and kissed me softly on the cheek. I’ll take it. Damn, Tina welcome home and let the games please come to an end.
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haha u mean let the games begin rite!! wow that was such a tease!! ya im thinkin grace is gonna do sumthin straight scandalous..waitin for ur next
Funny crazy Alice…a little B&T angst…clever dialogue. This is a wonderful respite from the torture that is season 3. Please keep going and post as often as you can. Thank you for sharing.
These two are playing a very dangerous game. There are two other players involved, they should just be honest with one another and tell each other the truth. LOL. Nah, that would be too easy and where’s the fun in that. LOL. Really do enjoy this story, please continue.
This sad two people so it love, Two others in love with them. Grace will try to get Tina out of the Porters life,or make Bette commit to something more permanent than G/F. Bette is messed up but not crazy. Alice is a bigggggggggg mess. thanks
I really likre this story. Your dialogue is wonderful.
Good chapter. Alice is crazy and funny. Damn this is sad to see them like this and not together. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
This is torture for B&T and for me!!! But thats the way life is sometimes, hopefully not for long, so fix this Laurelite…..pleeeeease :o))
Cool. I love this story. I still seem to be getting crankyer (is that a word) each week. So thanks for coming back with this.
So who’s going to end up killing who? And yes I remain true to the skinny dipping in hell idea being better than the situation these people find themselves in. But the story sure is twisted. lol
i am off my death for now!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you i know you were tired games only hurt but boy are they fun!!!!!!!!!!!
Can’t get enough of your storyyyy…
I have read all your chapters and i love this story!!!
LL,Sorry to see that you too are up to all small hours in the morning but sad to see you have to get up at 5 AM. As in 05:00, ‘Oh my gawd’ that is early!!! On to this devilish delight! More torture, piled on with a trowel I see. And you teased us all but saying that Tina and Bette would get through this misery and reunite. But sneaky lillt’ ole you never mentioned that it would be platonically. I simply cannot imagine that having Bette and Tina is such close proximity will not be too much of a temptation for either of them. A love so strong and true will go lie down and stay at peace. It will toss and turn until the restraints are broken and it is freedom to demand and demonstrate its true being. I can’t wait. Bette and Tina will both try to do the right thing but (with a little coercion) will succumb with their desperate need and longing to be together. Grace and Eric do not stand a chance in the face of such true devotion. All of this is admirably told by your fabulous fliar for characterization and dialogue. You can palpably feel the tension in the car. And Alice’s outburst were a riot. More please and as soon as you can wrestle that pc into shape. Your fans demand it Much gratitude and appreciation,Your Loyal Fan.
Loved Bette’s internal monologue, so many astute observations. And very funny too, even if the topics weren’t.
for reasons that both you and i both know, i’m just gonna take that as a sign of love and utter appreciation for my existence in your life. (please excuse my run-on sentence.) but at the very least you found a shred of your true tibette heart, now that i can appreciate. please post soon. PEACE.
well, i hope you know what you’re doing, because knowing that those two love each other but have others in their lives now, is a torture…i hope their love will prevail