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Twisted Triangles ch. 40
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“Ouch Porter, ouch. You cut me deep.”
After a spell of easy laughter with my friend, she got really quiet and stared at me seriously. Never a good sign.
“We’re friends right, Bette?”
“Best friends.”
“So you want to tell me why you came in this house with your cheeks all pink.” Shit busted. There’s that self-satisfied smirk again.
“What did our little Miss “Straight today, not so much tomorrow” say to you?”
“I’ll never tell.”
“Well whatever it was, I think Eric noticed.”
“Don’t be ridiculous, he didn’t know…..” Just then he came rushing out of his room and headed for the door. All the while keeping eye contact from me.
“I’ll be next door to help Tina with her luggage. Maybe you should go and check on Grace sometime today.” Is it wrong of me to think that was a low blow?
“Boy- Porter, you’re such a drama queen.”
“Stay out of this Alice.”
“Not likely.” He just scowled at her. Alice pretended to ignore him. Dammit Alice please acknowledge him so he can leave.
“Is there something you needed Eric? Don’t you have to drool all over your girlfriend, now?”
“Fuck you, Alice.” Wow, suddenly it’s very cold in here, and it’s not because of me.
“No thank you, not today.” She smiles sweetly at him as turns to leave again. As soon as he turned the knob to leave Alice added. “Don’t forget to pee on her leg to prove your ownership.” Surprisingly, he didn’t say anything. Usually he and Alice can go at it for hours. I guess having Tina waiting for you can put other things on the back burner.
“Al, why do you have to provoke him like that?”
“Because it’s fun for me.”
“Should we go over there?”
“Are you saying that because you wan to check out Tina some more.”
“No,” I lie. “I do need to see Grace, though. I haven’t talked to her all day.” Alice just rolls her eyes.
“And that’s bad because…..” Well it’s not but still. I can’t put all my cards on the table right away.
“Ok, whatever. Lets’ go meet up with your girlfriend. Maybe Grace will be there too.” Alice quickly adds before heading to her room and locking her door behind her. I know it was a joke, but it still took me by surprise. I mean what is this really going to mean. When I go to see Grace and Tina is there. Worst yet, when she’s there with my brother? Maybe we really didn’t think this through.
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TARA LIVES. please post soon. PEACE.
please to continue, some time.
well finally you’re back…don’t let s3 and other stories to take you away from your plan…bring B&T together, they belong together…i really liked all the talks between alice and bette and eric..realy funny..i hope B&T will find the way to be together…btw, i’m going to SF ;)
Eric and Gracie must be idiots. Why pursue someone you know is inlove with your best friend/sister. Tina and Bette are stupid too they should never got involved with Eric and Gracie. T&B should just dump them, they don’t need to jump into a relationship with eachother but they need to leave their respective relationships.
jeez the drama its so so damn addicting
“”Al, why do you have to provoke him like that?””Because it’s fun for me.”And for us. Great job with this chapter, Laurelite!
oh man!…i barely leave comments but i jus ave to with this story its tooo good!!!! Al is funny as hell…keep up the good work and post soon PLEASE!!!
They’re torturing themselves and the others. They all know who and who should be together. Then why continue? Tina should make up her mind now, or she just enjoys the awkward and vague situation?
wow i was just thinking about you and your story and wondering what happened to one of my favorites, and here you are (i am doing my happy dance) cant wait for more…luv this story!!!!!!!!!!
This is what we need, pls more of this story!!!
Glad to see you back, Laurelite. That was terrific on many levels: character, dialog, interior monologue; all with a wry sense of humor. But that Eric’s a butthole. How’d he A. get born into the Porter family and B. get Tina at all interested when he is in fact a humorless, short tempered, insecure butthole?
you’re back! have you watched ‘imagine me & you’? well, if you really love somebody, you’ll be able to let them go knowing that it’ll make them happy and it wld be pointless to keep them by your side. that is exactly ehat eric and gracie must do! instead of holding on selfishly to Bette and Tina, making their lives miserable….pls post soon=)PS: are you a Buffy fan?!
Laurelite, I love the relationship that Bette and Tina have in this story as it conveys the emotional journey each of our heroines are on. There is such a wonderful and easy banter between. Such honesty only comes from like safe and secure with someone. Keeping on writing your versions of all the character because I will be here to comment and enjoy their company particularly given the upsetting twists and turns that S3 is taken. This is the beauty of this site. Freedom of choice to post your story and freedom of the reader to view them. But you must get Bette and Tina back together as their unions with Grace and Eric will only hurt everyone and result in a bunch of four very unhappy campers. Please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Man I missed thiis story. I always liked it but when U start adding ‘Buffy” quotes. Yhat moves it right up the list. Welcome back and thanks for taking the time to write.
Eric and Grace is driving me crazy and want to kick their ass and tell them to stop bother Bette and Tina. Bette and Tina need to talk more and they need to break up with Eric and Grace soon and be together again. Ok post soon please, thanks!