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Twisted Triangles ch. 40
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“So, what took you guys so long to get into the house, pookie?”
“What do you mean?”
“Well, I heard your car pull up, but Tina didn’t come in the house for like five minutes.”
“What, were you timing us or something?” I ask her a little irritated. I can’t say if I lashed out because the idea of her spying on us is infuriating or if it’s because we’re guilty as hell.
“No I was just wondering. God I didn’t want to upset you.” She says to me, with a bit of a whimper in her voice. Shit now I look like the asshole.
“Can the waterworks sweetie. This night is not going to be one of those nights.” Alice says unsympathetically to Grace. What she means is, anytime we have dinner, someone will say something a little mean to Grace and she pretends to get all upset. The rest of the dinner is spent with me trying to make her feel better.
“Let’s not forget that this night is about TK coming home to us.”
“Alice. Give us a break.” Eric pipes up.
“Bite me, Eric.” Alice adds. Suddenly we’re all in the third grade. Tina takes the opportunity to glance my way, and it starts again. I feel like a teenager whose hormones are all out of whack. Tina picked up on it as soon as I did and turned back to her current love.
“I don’t mean to break up the love fest between you two,” Tina started. ” But what the hell is going on? I thought you guys were friends.” Eric rolled his eyes, and Alice sat there not saying a word. I guess it’s up to me, then.
“They haven’t really gotten along after Eric came back from New York Tina.” Grace jumped in. I was hoping to tell a different story. Not the ugly truth one, that involved crying, yelling and a lot of broken dishes.
“What, what would that have anything to do with why they are fighting?” Tina asked. No one said a word. I sighed, Alice still sat tight lipped, Eric just put his arm protectively around Tina, even Grace couldn’t find the words.
“What is going on here? Why is everyone so quiet all of a sudden?” Nothing. “Bette, what happened here?” She turned to me in a pleading voice, all the while letting out a nervous chuckle.
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TARA LIVES. please post soon. PEACE.
please to continue, some time.
well finally you’re back…don’t let s3 and other stories to take you away from your plan…bring B&T together, they belong together…i really liked all the talks between alice and bette and eric..realy funny..i hope B&T will find the way to be together…btw, i’m going to SF ;)
Eric and Gracie must be idiots. Why pursue someone you know is inlove with your best friend/sister. Tina and Bette are stupid too they should never got involved with Eric and Gracie. T&B should just dump them, they don’t need to jump into a relationship with eachother but they need to leave their respective relationships.
jeez the drama its so so damn addicting
“”Al, why do you have to provoke him like that?””Because it’s fun for me.”And for us. Great job with this chapter, Laurelite!
oh man!…i barely leave comments but i jus ave to with this story its tooo good!!!! Al is funny as hell…keep up the good work and post soon PLEASE!!!
They’re torturing themselves and the others. They all know who and who should be together. Then why continue? Tina should make up her mind now, or she just enjoys the awkward and vague situation?
wow i was just thinking about you and your story and wondering what happened to one of my favorites, and here you are (i am doing my happy dance) cant wait for more…luv this story!!!!!!!!!!
This is what we need, pls more of this story!!!
Glad to see you back, Laurelite. That was terrific on many levels: character, dialog, interior monologue; all with a wry sense of humor. But that Eric’s a butthole. How’d he A. get born into the Porter family and B. get Tina at all interested when he is in fact a humorless, short tempered, insecure butthole?
you’re back! have you watched ‘imagine me & you’? well, if you really love somebody, you’ll be able to let them go knowing that it’ll make them happy and it wld be pointless to keep them by your side. that is exactly ehat eric and gracie must do! instead of holding on selfishly to Bette and Tina, making their lives miserable….pls post soon=)PS: are you a Buffy fan?!
Laurelite, I love the relationship that Bette and Tina have in this story as it conveys the emotional journey each of our heroines are on. There is such a wonderful and easy banter between. Such honesty only comes from like safe and secure with someone. Keeping on writing your versions of all the character because I will be here to comment and enjoy their company particularly given the upsetting twists and turns that S3 is taken. This is the beauty of this site. Freedom of choice to post your story and freedom of the reader to view them. But you must get Bette and Tina back together as their unions with Grace and Eric will only hurt everyone and result in a bunch of four very unhappy campers. Please continue soon. Your Loyal Fan.
Man I missed thiis story. I always liked it but when U start adding ‘Buffy” quotes. Yhat moves it right up the list. Welcome back and thanks for taking the time to write.
Eric and Grace is driving me crazy and want to kick their ass and tell them to stop bother Bette and Tina. Bette and Tina need to talk more and they need to break up with Eric and Grace soon and be together again. Ok post soon please, thanks!