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Uncharted Territory
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‘Your wife will be pleased when she comes home.’
‘Very pleased.’ I offer the confused handyman a smile and hold the door open for him.
‘Fuck me.’ Blazing fast Bette turns around her eyebrows arched upwards. ‘Tee!’
‘My wife meant to say; have a good day.’ I say and he taps his cap before closing the door behind him.
‘Hey baby.’ I stage a casual attitude, basking in the beaming glow in her eyes before she blows me away with her exuberant embrace. Knocking me against the door she tightens her arms around me and gives me another blow with her lips this time. She always loved surprises. ‘God I missed you…’ I whisper as she inhales me, showering me with butterfly kisses.
‘You have no idea..’ Her burning breath vibrates against my lips before she kisses me senseless. ‘You’re crazy…flying here…’
My hands mess up the curls before pulling her even closer. I want to drown in her. ‘…so very much.’
‘Tell me I’m not dreaming.’
‘You feel so good.’ Dropping her jacket on the floor, the suitcase follows as I push her further into the living room, the interior mapped out in my brain. ‘.. that suit, you’re so hot.’
‘Bedroom.’
‘Couch.’ My lips are already so swollen they can burst any moment but that only invigorates me to push her down while the buttons of her blouse bounce away over the hardwood floor. My hands turn to butter against her scorching skin. Her scent like an opiate, time is of no essence anymore, the long flight that bridged the distance already forgotten. ‘Let me look at you.’
Eyes already narrowed to half-mast she brings my hand to her heart. ‘I have no words.’
‘..not needed.’ I whisper drunk by euphoria that only she can cause. And all thoughts become superfluous but one. ‘I’ll show you.’
–
Her bare stomach rises and falls under my cheek. It can be her clothes or mine scattered around us as I wake up from a short slumber. Running my tongue over my lips her taste still lingers. Without moving I lift my eyes up and meet her adoring look. ‘You’re really here.’ She says.
‘I imagined the welcome you would greet me with so many times. I never dared to picture it like this.’
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It’s a wonderful story with great emotion that you can feel as you read it. You depict France very well!!
Looking forward to read it this weekend!
They’ve been through so much that even when they are doing well, a part of me worries for them. Bette taking a trip to L.A. on her own? I’ve never been happier that Tina could join her in the end. But the last part of the chapter killed me… I wish they can have the family that they want.
The good news is that this was a long chapter and the sad news is that this story is almost over and the end of this chapter was so sad. I feel for both of them. I really wish and hope that one day they will have their family!
The description of Paris, beautiful written! I visited Paris a few times and it’s such a beautiful place!
Glad that Tina came to LA at the end, came home, the home she left to go to Paris. This is a very important step in their relationship.
Diana, i love her!
Love the longer chapter. This is such a great story. It can’t be ending, though, that is not ok. Just when they are coming back together. It needs a second verse, please consider continuing it. :)
One things I love about your writing is that you show the connection in the dialogue you write – no easy task – but artfully done here. It’s in the shorthand way that they talk to each other and in the way they read each other so well. You don’t tell the reader – Tina missed Bette – you add them talking about Tina being in a grumpy mood because she is accustomed to hitting snooze since Bette has been with her and this morning she had a hard time getting to work on time because of it. It’s delightful and adds such depth. Thank you !
Hi BetteisBetter, I am enjoying this story so much, you have a unique writing style that really captivates me. I hope to read more to this story, it’s beautifully woven…
I’m one of the silent readers. I absolutely loved this story and your writing is beautiful. I almost want to go to France now! I look forward to reading more of your work.
Oh my fucking God! What an brilliant chapter! The way Tina was like struck with lightning when Bette told her that she loves her. The way you used content of the purse to show Tina collecting herself and then hanging up! And then the voice text and the way Tina subtly used LDR to tell Bette that she loves her too, just bc it wouldn’t do it justice to say it over the phone for the first time after such a long time. And then their acknowledgment with ‘I got your text’/‘I got your flowers’! And what an amazing way to show through Helena and Winny what divorce does to the surrounding, it’s such a heavy ballast that impacts everyone.
The way you showed how Bette misses working but how she grew and learned what really matters! I love Bette in the gallery! And the way you used Tina starting to write again as a reference to her growing feelings for Bette (as Tina said bf ‘It had nothing to do with Paris’). Not only that you said you are about to finish the story, but you write it in so many small details, that you make it beautiful but painful obvious! (Sorry for all exclamation marks – this story makes me that excited!) And then… at the end, the twist I’ve never seen coming… I could feel how lonely Tina was without you putting too much effort in it. It broke my heart. Seeing this story and it’s tone it wouldn’t surprise me anymore if it would happen they end up with just the two of them. It would be so sad and yet it would fit this story.
BK is right though-sequel maybe?
I’ve read this stories since 2 or 3 days ago.. And finnished all 22 chapters in short time (English not my language so that rate of speed.. Is really super fast on my account lol). I even read at office in working hours… (Bad employee i am.. Hahaha)
But your stories are just soooo good… Makes me so addicted.. Turned every emotions upside down… The chaos, turmoil because of the loving, cheating, regretting, feeling lost, it’s so mixed up..
Can wait for the next chapter..
Finally, thank you for sharing your wonderful story…
Wow… i just realise how much i Missed this story…
It woke so many emotions in me… Like silent reader my first language isn´t english – but i could not stop enjoy this story!
I hope so much you will finish it one day!!
I keep coming to check for updates and keep getting disappointed. Pretty please BetteisBetter, don’t leave us hanging :(