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Tina (thinking): Did she say where she was?
Kit (shaking her head): No. She just said she was relaxing and taking a few days to herself.
Tina (finishing her tea): Thanks Kit. I’m going to take Angie home and do some laundry and go over some scripts.
Kit (standing up): Let me keep Angie for another day. I know we’re all not getting together tonight but between you and my sister I don’t get to see the little cutie as much as I’d like.
Tina (giving in): All right. (Kissing her on the cheek) thanks. If there’s any…
Kit (playfully shoving her out the door): Now go on get. Go relax and chill. I’ve got baby girl. You just enjoy yourself.
Tina laughed and headed for the door. She had the day to herself and resolved to return to her apartment and do some much needed laundry.
Helena’s Beach House
Peggy (holding on to Shane’s arm): My Gods I am surrounded by beautiful women and my darling daughter has found a affectionate interest. Amazing.
Shane (laughing): Yeah it is. I was a little shocked at first but then to see them standing in the sunlight in the kitchen yeah they belong.
Peggy (gesturing at the affectionate women in the kitchen): Yesterday they were involved in a bout of fisticuffs and now…
Bette and Helena were completely unaware of being watched. They were finishing the salads, teasing one another and sharing gentle kisses.
Shane (walking in with Peggy): Are you sure I can’t do anything?
Helena (nudging Bette with her hip): You set the table and put the wine on ice right?
Shane (looking around): Yeah.
Bette (finishing the salad): Then let’s dine.
Peggy (teasing): I thought you two were dining…
Helena (biting her lip): Mummy Bette and I have agreed to abstain from
Peggy (taunting): Synchronized mattress swimming. My goodness I think it’s snowing. Shane would you be a dear and check outside to see if it’s snowing.
Shane laughed but remained out of it.
Helena (patting Bette on the bum): Bette and I have decided to get to know one another, become friends learn together then onto a little pump and grind.
Bette (in Helena’s ear): I guarantee it won’t be little.
Helena (swatting her playfully): Hush…
Shane (helping Bette with the salad): Let’s dine before I have to jump in the pool for the night.
They went to the dining room and sat down. Dinner was delicious and Peggy toasted to Helena and Bette.
Tina’s Apartment
Tina put another load of wash into the washer then went back to the manuscripts on the coffee table. She had two boxes one labeled plausible the other labeled back to the drawing board. She finished the one in her hand and leaned back enjoying the peace and solitude of the apartment but wishing Angie was there or someone was there to keep her company. Getting up and going over to the closet she reached on the top shelf and pulled out a medium sized box. Inside were some albums of her and Bette over the years. She knew Bette had kept most of them, Bette kept them hidden in the floor compartment of her bedroom. But didn’t know about these four. Sitting on the couch she pulled one out and looked at the front cover. Bette had written the tag in her scratchy handwriting and Tina opened the cover and found the sealed dried rose petals. Smiling she began looking through the pictures and Bette’s description.
Helena’s Beach House
Bette (leaning against the door frame): Shane I know I can trust you. We want to keep this between us for now. However Friday we’ll be at The Planet for our weekly breakfast. Okay.
Shane (hugging Bette): I am not saying a word. But dam Alice is going to be so pissed.
Helena (laughing): Yes she will but she’ll get over it.
Shane (shaking her head): Should I bring boxing gloves…
Bette (swatting her arm): No. Be careful driving home okay. We’ll see you Friday.
Shutting the door they turned around and headed to the kitchen nook. Peggy was sipping tea and looked up as they strolled in hand in hand.
Peggy (handing them a mug of tea): Well congratulations are in order and I love how you are going to surprise everyone. Marvelous.
Helena (rubbing the back of Bette’s hand): Mummy love is to be cherished not exploited. Bette and I want to take this as slow as possible….
Peggy (pointedly): Darling I am teasing you both. I am so happy for you and the decisions you have made. I want the best for you both. Now I am going upstairs to rest and get ready for my flight. Enjoy your evening and I’ll see you both before I leave (standing up and kissing them both on the cheek.)
Bette (relaxing): All I did was rest and I still feel tired.
Helena (leaning over and kissing her): I’ve got an idea let’s go get some towels and our robes and enjoy the jacuzzi.
Bette (smiling): I like your way of thinking.
They quickly changed and went out to the back deck. Helena made sure the privacy screens were up and peeled off her bathrobe. Sliding into the tub Bette joined her and Helena motioned for her to sit between her legs.
Helena (gently; trailing water down Bette’s chest): You feel so good against me Bette.
Bette (taking Helena’s other hand; kissing the fingers and holding them close to her chest): You feel good as well. I heard you earlier when you said you’re in love with me. (Softly) I’m in love with you two. I just want us to be together get to know one another.
Helena (smiling): I like that too. Now just relax and enjoy the sounds of nature.
Friday Morning The Planet
Kit, Alice, Shane and Tina were all sitting at a table in the back. Angie was sitting in her high chair eating her breakfast.
Alice (pushing the paper aside): Why is it that the only things that make the news is violence and more violence.
Kit (looking at Alice): Tender ears.
Shane (leaning over and giving Angie a few pieces of her french toast; thinking the news was going to happen and fast): Alice (noticing Tina looking at her) what its whole grain french toast….
Tina (teasing): And how much sugar….
Shane (sticking her tongue out): Tina you realize that 90 percent of the products we ingest have sugar in them.
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You know anytime a writer puts up their work in a public isn’t an automatic waste of time. People need to see that what we do whether the subject is something they are passionate about or not, takes a lot of effort and time. So if you feel you have wasted your time then that’s that. I don’t feel as I have as my partner who is 100% loyal to Tina and Bette loved what I did. And she is my biggest critic as my well as my fan.
And Duckster thank you. For the encouragement. I have to realize that there are some very immature individuals out there and then there are some who just won’t comment because they don’t know how.
First of all, I’m sorry that you feel ofended. I didn’t know that the comment section is only to say: “Oh, what a beautiful story! That was marvelous! Great job!” My bad. I promise it won’t happen again! A little advise though: since you put your story out there for everyone to read, be prepared fon negative comments. Comments are just what the word says. An opinion about if we liked the story or not. I happened not to like it. Big deal! If a friend of mine had asked me how did I spend the last hour or so, my answer would be “I have wasted my time with a bad story”. That comment has nothing to do with your ability to write or your skills. It’s about the storyline. Don’t tell me that you have never read something that you didn’t like and you said to yourself “Oh, what a waste of time”. I’m sure that you did but I guess if you had the chance to speak to the said author you would say something like: “That was great”! Secondly, I didn’t know that because I didn’t like a story, I am immature. That characterization coming from a writer to a reader is very mature I suppose. Moreover, a Belena story under a “Tibette417” for pseudonym is a bit much for my taste and frankly, under that pseudonym I would expect a Tibette ending. It’s like when you go to a bookstore and buy a book about cooking. You don’t expect the author to analize voodoo tactics but how to put food together to be edible.And last but not least, I didn’t say that it didn’t took efford and time from you to put this story together. I know what it takes from someone to write something, anything really. But I have a question. Just because someone decided to write something that it took an x amount of time and y amount of effort does that mean that I have to like it? And to put an end to what I’ve started, and wasn’t my intention with my first comment, just because I didn’t like the story doesn’t mean that I don’t recognize your effort or that you don’t write well enough for my taste. My comment, I repeat, was only for the storyline. It had nothing to do with you as a person.
Myrto I am not saying that I wasn expecting anything along the lines of great job. I expect negative comments and you never stated why it was a waste of your time and I never took it as personal. So no it’s not personal and I appeciate your opinion. Have you read the story titled Dance With Us.
FINALLY!! I’m a tibetter but BeLena’s my dream couple…been begging someone to write some new, have re-red all written:) Ha, looks today’s my lucky day!!!:))Think you rushed it a little, meant to be a single chapter? Although it’s quite long! So, just know there’s an audience wanting more, take your time and write some more!!! Please!!! Please please please!:)
dont have much time to comment,but i must say loved this. thanks
what a waste of my time!
Wellll… there were a few short cuts to the resolution and it was somewhat implausible, particularly how quickly Helena and Bette declared that they were “in love”… but I wouldn’t call it a waste of time. Thanks for making the effort :)
Please understand that tibetters are quite a rabid I mean loyal lot and we do appreciate a little heads up always. No need for it though if your name had been “belena417”. Anyway thanks for the story. There’s always an audience for a belena here, just not that many are coming out to comment. :)
I enjoyed reading the story, but after the end shock, I can say it is nice to have unexpected end, but I thought the declaration of love is very quick to my taste. and Tina’s reaction should have more depth, both of her ex’s got together in a relationship she was shocked but she got over it quick also. maybe because this is a one chapter story that’s why u rush things but in general the writing is good. As a Tibetter to the bones, please don’t make it a habit to separate our beloved couples;D