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Helena (turning the coffee on): You know what happened in Whistler. You know what’s happened since we all came back. Well Bette took it really hard. Harder then I imagine and then Tina telling Bette she wasn’t going to get custody of Angelica and you know the rest. (Fixing them both a cup) yesterday (was it only yesterday; so much had happened) I came home to find Bette on the beach, drinking and looking absolutely horrible. Her spark, her fire was gone, she was hurting so much. (Pausing) we had a round of fisticuffs and mummy showed up and separated us. So she agreed to spend a week here and put the pieces back together.
Shane (hesitantly): And you’re helping her…
Helena (softly): I’m in love with her Shane…
Shane spewed coffee across the counter and shook her head. She looked at Helena then at the door to the living room.
Shane (coughing): Holy fucking shit. You and Bette.
Helena (nodding): It was mutual I assure you. She’s hurting so much and I’m afraid for her. (Pausing; taking a deep breath) it’s like we both fit together, a peace of sorts, comfort.
Shane (putting her head in her hands): Holy shit. Holy shit. Holy shit.
Helena (wondering if Shane was all right): Yes darling you’ve said that three times. Are you ok?
Shane (shaking her head): This is unbelievable. You (pointing at Helena) and Bette (gesturing towards the other room.) Unbelievable.
Helena (smirking): That’s twice Shane.
Shane (getting up): I am going to say this once and only once, moving closer you hurt Bette, you do anything where she cries I will beat you so badly (backing Helena against the counter) however (gently grabbing Helena’s hair) I’m so fucking happy for you both (picking her up and swinging her around.)
Helena (breathing a sigh of relief; she knew Shane had her loyalties and would never take sides): Thank you. I don’t ever want to hurt Bette.
Bette (coming in): What I take a nap and I find you two cuddled up in the kitchen…
Shane (putting Helena down gently and hugging Bette tightly; feeling her wince): I am so happy for you both (placing a kiss on Bette’s cheek.)
Helena (pulling Bette against her): Feel better darling.
Bette (nodding and kissing her gently): Much and you. (Feeling Helena nod as she nuzzled against her shoulder.)
Shane (looking at them; they made a stunning couple): Well I must say this is going to rock We Ho for a long time ladies.
Helena (nodding): Spend the day and have dinner with mummy and us tonight. (Shane agreed and they began coming up with the menu for dinner and the plan to tell the rest of the group.)
The Planet
Angie was sleeping in her porta crib and Kit was watching Tina pace and wondering what was going on now.
Tina (softly): I was wrong in how I treated Bette. I was wrong trying to keep Angie away from her. I filed the papers yesterday for full adoption of Angelica. (Pausing) I love Bette and I will always love Bette but we both need to move on.
Kit (sitting there): Tina you know she loves you too. I think you both need time and maybe…
Tina (shaking her head): No. I realize I am not the one meant for her. I love her always will. She has opened my eyes, my mind and my heart. However, I want what’s best for Angie and we can parent together and be friends but we are not meant to be (tears filled her eyes and she realized the hard truth in that statement and it was because of her actions towards Bette that had done it.)
Kit (getting up): Oh baby girl. Come here (pulling Tina into her arms; she silently wished for Tina and her sister to get back together) it’ll be okay baby girl. (Holding her tighter as sobs wracked Tina’s body.) Oh baby.
Alice’s Apartment
Alice (answering her phone): Hey Shane! Yeah what came up. Oh a date how. Dam you score fast don’t you girl. Ok, ok. Friday night then. Yeah.
Alice hung up the phone it was unusual for Shane to not get together for a group function. She figured it was some hot chick that was only going to be in town for a few days.
Helena’s Beach House
Helena (showing Shane how to set up a menu): So you want something light before the main dinner. A salad, a light soup, nothing to heavy. For the main course lean protein, vegetables and a nice carb. Whole grains, pasta that sort of thing. Make sure the wine compliments the meal if they prefer wine.
Shane (watching Helena marinade the vegetables): And color is important, how so?
Helena (adding a few more yellow peppers): Appetizing color. You don’t want food to be bland then people won’t eat and they won’t think of you as a good hostess.
Shane (nodding): And know you’re company.
Helena (nodding): Right for example my mother will eat any type of animal meat out there. I draw the line at veal and lamb and pork. Bette prefers poultry and fish. You prefer whatever you can get your hands on the fastest (teasing) so fish or poultry is appropriate for tonight’s dinner. To satisfy everyone. Then the questions is to choose which and make sure the choice is right.
Shane continued to watch Helena set up dinner preparations as Bette was off somewhere in the house following Helena’s instructions.
The Planet
Tina had calmed down and now sat with Kit and sipping tea.
Kit (shaking her head): I heard from her yesterday. She sounded a little down but she assured me she was fine.
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You know anytime a writer puts up their work in a public isn’t an automatic waste of time. People need to see that what we do whether the subject is something they are passionate about or not, takes a lot of effort and time. So if you feel you have wasted your time then that’s that. I don’t feel as I have as my partner who is 100% loyal to Tina and Bette loved what I did. And she is my biggest critic as my well as my fan.
And Duckster thank you. For the encouragement. I have to realize that there are some very immature individuals out there and then there are some who just won’t comment because they don’t know how.
First of all, I’m sorry that you feel ofended. I didn’t know that the comment section is only to say: “Oh, what a beautiful story! That was marvelous! Great job!” My bad. I promise it won’t happen again! A little advise though: since you put your story out there for everyone to read, be prepared fon negative comments. Comments are just what the word says. An opinion about if we liked the story or not. I happened not to like it. Big deal! If a friend of mine had asked me how did I spend the last hour or so, my answer would be “I have wasted my time with a bad story”. That comment has nothing to do with your ability to write or your skills. It’s about the storyline. Don’t tell me that you have never read something that you didn’t like and you said to yourself “Oh, what a waste of time”. I’m sure that you did but I guess if you had the chance to speak to the said author you would say something like: “That was great”! Secondly, I didn’t know that because I didn’t like a story, I am immature. That characterization coming from a writer to a reader is very mature I suppose. Moreover, a Belena story under a “Tibette417” for pseudonym is a bit much for my taste and frankly, under that pseudonym I would expect a Tibette ending. It’s like when you go to a bookstore and buy a book about cooking. You don’t expect the author to analize voodoo tactics but how to put food together to be edible.And last but not least, I didn’t say that it didn’t took efford and time from you to put this story together. I know what it takes from someone to write something, anything really. But I have a question. Just because someone decided to write something that it took an x amount of time and y amount of effort does that mean that I have to like it? And to put an end to what I’ve started, and wasn’t my intention with my first comment, just because I didn’t like the story doesn’t mean that I don’t recognize your effort or that you don’t write well enough for my taste. My comment, I repeat, was only for the storyline. It had nothing to do with you as a person.
Myrto I am not saying that I wasn expecting anything along the lines of great job. I expect negative comments and you never stated why it was a waste of your time and I never took it as personal. So no it’s not personal and I appeciate your opinion. Have you read the story titled Dance With Us.
FINALLY!! I’m a tibetter but BeLena’s my dream couple…been begging someone to write some new, have re-red all written:) Ha, looks today’s my lucky day!!!:))Think you rushed it a little, meant to be a single chapter? Although it’s quite long! So, just know there’s an audience wanting more, take your time and write some more!!! Please!!! Please please please!:)
dont have much time to comment,but i must say loved this. thanks
what a waste of my time!
Wellll… there were a few short cuts to the resolution and it was somewhat implausible, particularly how quickly Helena and Bette declared that they were “in love”… but I wouldn’t call it a waste of time. Thanks for making the effort :)
Please understand that tibetters are quite a rabid I mean loyal lot and we do appreciate a little heads up always. No need for it though if your name had been “belena417”. Anyway thanks for the story. There’s always an audience for a belena here, just not that many are coming out to comment. :)
I enjoyed reading the story, but after the end shock, I can say it is nice to have unexpected end, but I thought the declaration of love is very quick to my taste. and Tina’s reaction should have more depth, both of her ex’s got together in a relationship she was shocked but she got over it quick also. maybe because this is a one chapter story that’s why u rush things but in general the writing is good. As a Tibetter to the bones, please don’t make it a habit to separate our beloved couples;D