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Alice (looking at Shane): Have you been reading the encyclopedia.
Shane (flipping her off): And if I have…
Kit (looking up): Artemis have mercy…
Everyone turned as Helena and Bette entered The Planet, hands clasped together. Both wearing light faded jeans and a hockey sweatshirt.
Helena (pointedly): Well I think we’ve done our work for the day.
Bette (nudging her): Not yet. (Approaching the table) yes. Get used to it, deal with it and get over it (looking at everyone at the table.)
Kit (recovering): Okay. Um here let me get a waitress over here.
Shane and Alice looked at each other as Bette picked up Angie. Wiping her face gently with a napkin she kissed her little girl and held her tightly. Sitting down Angie reached for Helena and crawled into her lap.
Tina (standing): I don’t believe you (storming out the door.)
Bette (shaking her head): Gods (getting up with Helena right behind her) Hels…
Helena (shaking her head): No we are in this together. No one is going to hurt you if I can help it.
Heading around to the back of The Planet they found Tina sitting in one of the lounge chairs.
Bette (softly): T please can we just talk…
Tina (her face red): Fuck why?
Helena (handing Tina a tissue only to have her hand slapped): Tina please. Bette and I aren’t here to hurt you. We just want to talk.
Tina (standing up angry): So is she good in bed Helena. Does she fuck you like you like? On your hands and knees like the bitch you are…
Bette (getting up): Tina…
Tina (sneering at Helena): Or how about it Bette. Has she woken you up with her mouth on you? Going down on you or have just sat on her face and told her to make you come. Have you used toys together yet?
Bette (putting her hands out): Tina stop stop please.
Tina (pushing Bette back): No….
Helena (wrapped her arms around Tina): Stop, please. (Feeling her struggle) I will not let you go until you calm down and be rational. (Looking at Bette) please Tina.
Kit (coming out the back): Oh Gods…
Bette (pleading): Kit this is between the three of us. I don’t want Shane or Alice out here. Just please.
Kit (making a decision): Okay but if anybody (looking at all three of them) hits anyone else I am going to come out here and beat all your asses (going back inside.)
Helena (feeling Tina relax): All right let’s sit down and talk.
Tina (looking at them both): Why? You two hated one another. The name calling the arguing what…
Helena (gently): It had to do with something that neither of us understand. Our intentions weren’t to hurt or anyone. It just happened.
Bette (nodding): I felt like I was dying inside. I almost drove home drunk and Helena stopped me.
Tina (knowing that Bette had to be pretty bad off to even consider driving with anything in her system): So this (gesturing to the two of them) is the result.
Bette (nodding): Yes.
Tina (softly): Then I guess you two deserve happiness. And I wish you that. I just need time to let it sink in.
Helena (understanding): We know.
Tina (softly): Helena can I have moment with Bette before we go back inside?
Helena (knowingly): Of course. (Helena went towards the front but kept an eye on the two of them out of sight. She wasn’t worried what would happen. She only wanted them to both be on equal ground.
Tina (moving closer to Bette): I had always held some sense of hope that we might have a chance again. Now I know. I’ve known for a while now. I will never stop loving you. Never stop wanting you to be in my life. I’ve treated you horribly and I deserve what I get. If I had tried harder then maybe this would be different.
Bette (softly; running her fingers through Tina’s blond hair): We’re both to blame. We have a daughter that needs both of her mothers. I will always be here for you Tina, you always be a part of me and I will always love you.
Tina (running her finger along Bette’s face): Be good to her. I think you two will be an interesting match for one another.
Bette (smiling): Tina I’m sorry about everything…
Tina (smiling): I am too and as of today no more fighting or hurting one another.
Bette (licking her lips): No more.
Tina (softly): I let you go wishing you only happiness (leaning up and pressing her lips to Bette’s; tasting the coffee and Bette’s own unique flavor. The kiss deepened and intensified. She always described Bette’s kisses like sex standing up. It was the intense and powerful. They broke the kiss and walked together towards the front entrance finding Helena standing there with an amused smirk on her lips. Moving to the other side of Bette the three of them walked hand in hand back into The Planet. Seeing Alice Kit and Shane smiling at them they sat down and began a new chapter in all their lives.
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You know anytime a writer puts up their work in a public isn’t an automatic waste of time. People need to see that what we do whether the subject is something they are passionate about or not, takes a lot of effort and time. So if you feel you have wasted your time then that’s that. I don’t feel as I have as my partner who is 100% loyal to Tina and Bette loved what I did. And she is my biggest critic as my well as my fan.
And Duckster thank you. For the encouragement. I have to realize that there are some very immature individuals out there and then there are some who just won’t comment because they don’t know how.
First of all, I’m sorry that you feel ofended. I didn’t know that the comment section is only to say: “Oh, what a beautiful story! That was marvelous! Great job!” My bad. I promise it won’t happen again! A little advise though: since you put your story out there for everyone to read, be prepared fon negative comments. Comments are just what the word says. An opinion about if we liked the story or not. I happened not to like it. Big deal! If a friend of mine had asked me how did I spend the last hour or so, my answer would be “I have wasted my time with a bad story”. That comment has nothing to do with your ability to write or your skills. It’s about the storyline. Don’t tell me that you have never read something that you didn’t like and you said to yourself “Oh, what a waste of time”. I’m sure that you did but I guess if you had the chance to speak to the said author you would say something like: “That was great”! Secondly, I didn’t know that because I didn’t like a story, I am immature. That characterization coming from a writer to a reader is very mature I suppose. Moreover, a Belena story under a “Tibette417” for pseudonym is a bit much for my taste and frankly, under that pseudonym I would expect a Tibette ending. It’s like when you go to a bookstore and buy a book about cooking. You don’t expect the author to analize voodoo tactics but how to put food together to be edible.And last but not least, I didn’t say that it didn’t took efford and time from you to put this story together. I know what it takes from someone to write something, anything really. But I have a question. Just because someone decided to write something that it took an x amount of time and y amount of effort does that mean that I have to like it? And to put an end to what I’ve started, and wasn’t my intention with my first comment, just because I didn’t like the story doesn’t mean that I don’t recognize your effort or that you don’t write well enough for my taste. My comment, I repeat, was only for the storyline. It had nothing to do with you as a person.
Myrto I am not saying that I wasn expecting anything along the lines of great job. I expect negative comments and you never stated why it was a waste of your time and I never took it as personal. So no it’s not personal and I appeciate your opinion. Have you read the story titled Dance With Us.
FINALLY!! I’m a tibetter but BeLena’s my dream couple…been begging someone to write some new, have re-red all written:) Ha, looks today’s my lucky day!!!:))Think you rushed it a little, meant to be a single chapter? Although it’s quite long! So, just know there’s an audience wanting more, take your time and write some more!!! Please!!! Please please please!:)
dont have much time to comment,but i must say loved this. thanks
what a waste of my time!
Wellll… there were a few short cuts to the resolution and it was somewhat implausible, particularly how quickly Helena and Bette declared that they were “in love”… but I wouldn’t call it a waste of time. Thanks for making the effort :)
Please understand that tibetters are quite a rabid I mean loyal lot and we do appreciate a little heads up always. No need for it though if your name had been “belena417”. Anyway thanks for the story. There’s always an audience for a belena here, just not that many are coming out to comment. :)
I enjoyed reading the story, but after the end shock, I can say it is nice to have unexpected end, but I thought the declaration of love is very quick to my taste. and Tina’s reaction should have more depth, both of her ex’s got together in a relationship she was shocked but she got over it quick also. maybe because this is a one chapter story that’s why u rush things but in general the writing is good. As a Tibetter to the bones, please don’t make it a habit to separate our beloved couples;D