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Valediction (Three/Three)
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I didn’t say anything. It would have ruined it if I had, I think. I just leaned in and kissed her like I hadn’t done in a really long time. All the desire that had been silent inside me for months now because of the sickness came back with a vengeance, and when she moved back to protest I just shook my head and laced our fingers together, kissing her harder.
Her hands felt amazing on me as she tenderly removed my dress. I did the same for her, stopping every few seconds to just look at how gorgeous she was. The feel of skin finally touching skin was one of the most intense things I’ve ever felt. It seemed like our hands were everywhere at once as Alice’s desire finally caught up to mine. It wasn’t rushed, though. We just lay there on our sides (it hurt too much for me to lay on top of her, or for her to lay on me) kissing and caressing for what felt like hours.
It had been months since I’d been inside her. I’d wanted to, but I’d been so weak that my arm wouldn’t hold out long enough for it to do either of us any good. That night, maybe because we both knew it’d be the last time we’d be together this way (and it wasn’t sad to know that. In a weird way, it was okay. It was perfect), I worked up the strength to do it. I think it felt better for me than it did for her, although she obviously enjoyed it. She’d come a couple times before I realized she was toning it down. With all the energy I could get, I kissed her, then went to her ear. "Don’t hold back on me Al. I wanna hear you," I begged, and started stroking her clit faster as I moved inside her. She moaned, and kept moaning until I felt her tighten around my fingers. She screamed my name as she came, and I held her quivering body close to mine as she recovered.
I couldn’t stop kissing her. Before a minute had gone by, she started kissing me back just as hard, her hands moving down my back in intricate patterns. I moaned her name as she moved her mouth to my neck, sucking and gently biting it. She moved back up to kiss me as her hand made its way down my body to my center, where she started to stroke me gently. It felt amazing, and I started to whimper as I realized I needed more of her.
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Wow I had to choke back tears and swallow a lump in ym throat more than a few times. I never cry at fanfics but this one almost got me. Perfect MT just fucking perfect. xx Oh and get better soon hun :)
perfect, very sad.. but perfect. Thank you.
*blows nose and puts tissue away* I was dreading the end of this story. This story was amazingly beautiful but SO sad. I’m looking forward to an update of your ‘happy’ story “You” (especially to that certain something coming :P).
Wow, what a beautifully written piece, expertly catching the emotions inlcuding sadness, love and, yes, happiness of these two wonderful people. You are definitely a wonderful writer and I hope you are feeling much better and can continue with YOU very soon. Thank you
okay – i can barely see what i writing due to the tears that are in my eyes. that was really beautiful. definitely your best writing so far. please give us something happy now. that was devestating. great job.
This story should come with a warning label like ‘May Cause Dehydration’ – it was exquisitely written. I miss Dana.
amazing as per usual. feel better so you can get back to writing a happier version of this in “You”.
Perfect. The way it should have been to begin with.
Very sad, but better than the show by a lot, more settled and peaceful and loving
you had me in tears these two last chapters :'( great story!
*gul* This was breathtakingly beautiful. I choked up more then once. You made me cry. *sigh* It was very moving, so much better and so much more human then the stuff we got to see on tv. I liked it. But I’m glad to see the newest part of “you” soon.
I know you had to do it and you did it perfectly. You are such a gifted writer even when I am not thrilled with the subject. You helped fill the void IC left.
Simply beautiful!WOW…I have a lump in my throat and holding back tears!!!You are truly gifted!!!
That was just beautiful. I was crying at the end if only the show could have done such a great job.
Best fanfic ever. What more can I say. You are incredibly talented
thank you for this story. i can’t think of a more fitting ending to dana’s cancer story. you’re truly gifted and i sincerely hope you’ll continue to write danish fanfics.
I so inspired by the beauty in how you wrote this. It gripped my heart and stayed with me. I read it yesterday, cried my tears but still it’s with me. Thank you for sharing your talent. I am so touched.
Ok I hardly even comment fanfics but how could I not on this one? I am literally in tears. I never cry from stories or movies. If you think of the saddest movie ever, I guarantee I could watch it and not one tear would form. Yet, these last two chapters have kept me crying. This fic was absolutely amazing. You’re amazing! Blew IC out of the water! They should take lessons from you. Can’t wait for an update on “You”.
Picturing the scene: You’re reading a book, or watching a movie, and you just have to call it off because you’re so into it that you find it almost painful to keep on doing it. So you decide to just quit. You press the pause bottom. You put the book in the freezer. Well, this has happened to me twice: the first one was a movie by Isabel Coixet; the second one ,Valediction. A couple of months ago I quit reading it at some point of the second chapter. I knew it was just fiction, but it felt so real… I just couldn’t make it. (I know, I know… Too corny!) But yesterday I did. I read all of it, and well, you got me speechless (you know… my English skills are so limited!! :p) Today I’ve bound it!! I handmade a little book (I love arts & crafts!). But unlike Alice with Dana’s letters, I think I won’t be able to read it again… I promise I won’t put it in the freezer, though!