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Valediction (Three/Three)
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She didn’t understand right away, though, just pulled back so she could look at me. "It’s okay," she whispered. "I won’t go inside."
I shook my head, although I knew why she said it. The last x-rays I’d had done had shown that the cancer had spread to my reproductive system, and there were a lot of tumors. Not just there, but everywhere. Hell, you could make one or two out if you just looked at my stomach. She was trying to tell me that she knew and she wouldn’t hurt me. It meant a lot to me, but at the moment, I didn’t want her to be careful.
"No, I want you to," I told her. She completely stopped moving and just stared at me for a minute.
"Are you sure? I mean, they said you’ve got tumors bigger than oranges…"
"It’s okay," was all I said before I kissed her again. She was gentle, and went really slowly so she wouldn’t hurt me, but she did what I asked her to. It definitely didn’t take long; she hadn’t fucked me in a long time. Afterward, I slumped into her and tried to go to sleep, but it was impossible to stop kissing her, and as tired as I was there was no way I’d be able to sleep.
She laughed at me when I told her I wanted more. Then she sobered and really looked at me, and even in the darkness I could see her smiling. "Well, if you insist, Mrs. Pieszecki," she said finally.
I smiled back. "I’m afraid I have to, Mrs. Fairbanks. It is our honeymoon, after all." She laughed, and then we were kissing again and didn’t need to say anything else.
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Alice
I still don’t know how she did it, but she made love to me all night. We only stopped after the sun had come up and she couldn’t keep her eyes open anymore. She fell asleep with her arms around me, but I moved so that I wasn’t touching her aside from holding her hand. She’d be in enough pain the next few days without bruises from holding me.
I’ve never felt more complete, but it was a little sad at the same time. We never said anything about it, but I think we both knew that it was goodbye sex. It wasn’t as sad as I’d thought it would be, to be honest. I hope it wasn’t too depressing for Dana. She’d put so much effort into showing me how much she loved me, and I’d felt it everywhere. I knew she was used to playing through pain, but it was so much more than that, like she needed to do it to go on living, even for a short time.
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Wow I had to choke back tears and swallow a lump in ym throat more than a few times. I never cry at fanfics but this one almost got me. Perfect MT just fucking perfect. xx Oh and get better soon hun :)
perfect, very sad.. but perfect. Thank you.
*blows nose and puts tissue away* I was dreading the end of this story. This story was amazingly beautiful but SO sad. I’m looking forward to an update of your ‘happy’ story “You” (especially to that certain something coming :P).
Wow, what a beautifully written piece, expertly catching the emotions inlcuding sadness, love and, yes, happiness of these two wonderful people. You are definitely a wonderful writer and I hope you are feeling much better and can continue with YOU very soon. Thank you
okay – i can barely see what i writing due to the tears that are in my eyes. that was really beautiful. definitely your best writing so far. please give us something happy now. that was devestating. great job.
This story should come with a warning label like ‘May Cause Dehydration’ – it was exquisitely written. I miss Dana.
amazing as per usual. feel better so you can get back to writing a happier version of this in “You”.
Perfect. The way it should have been to begin with.
Very sad, but better than the show by a lot, more settled and peaceful and loving
you had me in tears these two last chapters :'( great story!
*gul* This was breathtakingly beautiful. I choked up more then once. You made me cry. *sigh* It was very moving, so much better and so much more human then the stuff we got to see on tv. I liked it. But I’m glad to see the newest part of “you” soon.
I know you had to do it and you did it perfectly. You are such a gifted writer even when I am not thrilled with the subject. You helped fill the void IC left.
Simply beautiful!WOW…I have a lump in my throat and holding back tears!!!You are truly gifted!!!
That was just beautiful. I was crying at the end if only the show could have done such a great job.
Best fanfic ever. What more can I say. You are incredibly talented
thank you for this story. i can’t think of a more fitting ending to dana’s cancer story. you’re truly gifted and i sincerely hope you’ll continue to write danish fanfics.
I so inspired by the beauty in how you wrote this. It gripped my heart and stayed with me. I read it yesterday, cried my tears but still it’s with me. Thank you for sharing your talent. I am so touched.
Ok I hardly even comment fanfics but how could I not on this one? I am literally in tears. I never cry from stories or movies. If you think of the saddest movie ever, I guarantee I could watch it and not one tear would form. Yet, these last two chapters have kept me crying. This fic was absolutely amazing. You’re amazing! Blew IC out of the water! They should take lessons from you. Can’t wait for an update on “You”.
Picturing the scene: You’re reading a book, or watching a movie, and you just have to call it off because you’re so into it that you find it almost painful to keep on doing it. So you decide to just quit. You press the pause bottom. You put the book in the freezer. Well, this has happened to me twice: the first one was a movie by Isabel Coixet; the second one ,Valediction. A couple of months ago I quit reading it at some point of the second chapter. I knew it was just fiction, but it felt so real… I just couldn’t make it. (I know, I know… Too corny!) But yesterday I did. I read all of it, and well, you got me speechless (you know… my English skills are so limited!! :p) Today I’ve bound it!! I handmade a little book (I love arts & crafts!). But unlike Alice with Dana’s letters, I think I won’t be able to read it again… I promise I won’t put it in the freezer, though!