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Vignettes: Chapter 25
Well, I guess its time to rob the grave of its death. Shane said.
Read it for me, out loud. Bette handed the note to Shane who didnt argue.
Bette fell on her back and faced the stars, closing her eyes while Shane took a deep breath and read:
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Dear Bette,
I dont even know where to begin. Part of me wants this letter to be something that ends it all between us and another part of me wants to be honest with you. I think Ill opt for the latter of the two. Its only fair. Though Ill probably want to run and hide for a while.
I have enjoyed spending time with you lately and getting to know you. Ive never met anyone who makes me feel the way you do. You have a way of creeping deep into my skin so that I cant get you out. Its annoying and breathtaking all at the same time. I want it to stop but then at the same time I never want it to go away. I often try to remind myself that you are nothing more than a good friend but if I take a closer look, I know thats a lie.
You are a good friend but so much more as well. The first time you kissed me I knew I wouldnt be able to rationalize you. So often I can carefully calculate every thought and every feeling so that it fits according to my plan and control. You fall through the cracks and my feelings and emotions overwhelm me when I am with you. I find myself breathless and my heart races. I am afraid I am going to explode. What does this mean?
I have never been with a woman before so the idea scares me and excites me all at the same time. Deep down I know I want to kiss you again and feel the softness of your skin against my own. But that also doesnt make sense to me. Why would I want to risk everything stable and normal in my life to fall in love with a woman who I barely know?
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(67 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
wow …..that was really good writting…i cant get enough of this story …post soon!
What more can I say about your writing. As always it takes my breath away.
The memories you can keep in boxes some bury in the dark est part of you mind. Bette just buried her in a tin box in a dark hole in the ground. Sometimes the good and bad memories runs through your mind and the hurt. That i feel is what is happening to Bette. thanks
Love it. Wonderful as always
Bette…give her the letter (and don’t make Shane do it!). You know you want to!
fareast, your writing is captivating. You know we are waiting for the other letter…
I always love your writing and chapters but this surpassed all I’ve read so far. Awesome, thank you.
I hope Bette can be as forthright as Tina was in her letter! Now is the perfect time for a second chance at love…let Shane lead the way!
Perfection. Your writing is perfection.
So glad to get an update on this story. I love it. Please continue soon!
oh gosh, it’s just amazing, i really truly just love reading this story, such depth of emotion. will we get to see bette’s letter?
Awesome as ever!
The pace of this story is delicable and delibrate. You do like to keep taunting and teasing us with your cliff hangers.
Shane seems to be finally getting through to Bette. Hope this means that Bette will read her letter to Tina. Can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction.
Awaiting your next post as ever.
A fan.
Great great writing. So sad. I’m looking forward to Bettes letter, specially when Tina gets it – she will won’t she!
Wow, once again when I’m done reading your post I want it to go on and on your just that good. THanks I love the feeling you evoke in me while I’m reading this thanks for your gift.
superb! What more can i say? you are ace!!!
So beautiful..I am with slacker on this one. Go give Tina the letter.
Dont´make us wait to long for your update fareast. Post soon
fareast, i have just caught up on this awesome story of yours and i am craving the next installment already:)…..Your writing always has the ability to totally immerse me in the little world that is your story and i just love it. You couldn’t post fast enough or often enough as far as i’m concerned….*hint, hint*….Thankyou for the wonderful update!!!
Man this just keeps getting better.