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Vignettes: Chapter 25
Ok, I just decided you will never see this letter. Its too confusing and personal.
As every inch of my being screams no, my heart holds firm and asks why not? Then I realize I dont have an answer. And suddenly things are clear. I like you. A lot. I want to know more about you, everything about you. I want to spend every minute of my day with you. When were apart, I miss you. I want to hear your secrets and confess mine. I want to drown you in kisses and swim in yours. Simply stated, I cant get enough of you.
So now this letter sits on my table and I wonder if it will ever be traced by your eyes. I hope so but Im not sure if I have the courage to share it with you. I dont know if I have the courage to share my life with you. This could be a start to something wonderful or our paths could shift in separate directions. I know what I want.
Courageously loving,
Tina
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Shane skimmed the note again silently before putting it on the ground next to Bette. She looked down at Bette and let out a sigh.
Wow. Do you ever wonder what would have happened if she hadnt been honest with you in the beginning? What if she never gave you that note? Shane asked.
I asked myself those same questions often. Bette sat up. But it worked out the way it was supposed to.
Ive never known Tina to not be honest. She may keep things inside but she always speaks the truth when push comes to shove.
You think so? Bette asked.
For the most part. Except when it comes to you after the break up. Then her pride spoke for her. She never lied about her feelings though, she just with held information.
Maybe youre right. Bette sighed. I fell in love with Tina after I read this letter. Nobody had ever been so forthright and truthful with me before.
How did it feel?
How did what feel?
Reading that letter again?
Sad… but good too. Does that make sense?
Shane nodded. Yes. See, Bette, letting things sit inside of you can eat you alive. You need to deal with these pent up emotions that you squash deep in your heart, even if its hard. You owe it to yourself to imitate that same honesty you admire in Tina. Shane challenged.
Its just hard doing it alone. Bette admitted.
Youre not alone. Im right here next to you. Shane took Bettes hand in her own as she pushed the box towards Bette.
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(67 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
wow …..that was really good writting…i cant get enough of this story …post soon!
What more can I say about your writing. As always it takes my breath away.
The memories you can keep in boxes some bury in the dark est part of you mind. Bette just buried her in a tin box in a dark hole in the ground. Sometimes the good and bad memories runs through your mind and the hurt. That i feel is what is happening to Bette. thanks
Love it. Wonderful as always
Bette…give her the letter (and don’t make Shane do it!). You know you want to!
fareast, your writing is captivating. You know we are waiting for the other letter…
I always love your writing and chapters but this surpassed all I’ve read so far. Awesome, thank you.
I hope Bette can be as forthright as Tina was in her letter! Now is the perfect time for a second chance at love…let Shane lead the way!
Perfection. Your writing is perfection.
So glad to get an update on this story. I love it. Please continue soon!
oh gosh, it’s just amazing, i really truly just love reading this story, such depth of emotion. will we get to see bette’s letter?
Awesome as ever!
The pace of this story is delicable and delibrate. You do like to keep taunting and teasing us with your cliff hangers.
Shane seems to be finally getting through to Bette. Hope this means that Bette will read her letter to Tina. Can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction.
Awaiting your next post as ever.
A fan.
Great great writing. So sad. I’m looking forward to Bettes letter, specially when Tina gets it – she will won’t she!
Wow, once again when I’m done reading your post I want it to go on and on your just that good. THanks I love the feeling you evoke in me while I’m reading this thanks for your gift.
superb! What more can i say? you are ace!!!
So beautiful..I am with slacker on this one. Go give Tina the letter.
Dont´make us wait to long for your update fareast. Post soon
fareast, i have just caught up on this awesome story of yours and i am craving the next installment already:)…..Your writing always has the ability to totally immerse me in the little world that is your story and i just love it. You couldn’t post fast enough or often enough as far as i’m concerned….*hint, hint*….Thankyou for the wonderful update!!!
Man this just keeps getting better.