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Vignettes: Chapter 29
Let me go! Alice hissed.
Dana reached over to grab Alices other arm and help Shane when they heard Bettes loud and angered voice.
Tina, why is it that every time we see each other we end up in bed together?
Both Dana and Shane suddenly loosened their grips and stared at the door. Alice shrugged free from their grasp and resumed her position at the door, raising her eyebrows at the two women next to her. Giving in to temptation, Dana and Shane edged closer to the door to listen. Finally, after a few minutes of hearing nothing more from the room, Alice stood and motioned to move back towards the kitchen.
That was wrong. Shane said.
I know, we shouldve never listened. Dana agreed.
Lets never tell anyone we heard anything. Alice said as they all nodded in unison. Wed better get out of here before they come out. I am afraid of what mood theyll be in.
Youre right. Lets go. Shane opened the door for Alice and Dana and they headed out for some breakfast after Alice scratched a note for Bette and Tina.
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When Bette got out of the shower, she quietly moved around and listened for any other people around. She didnt hear anything and after she dressed, she tip toed into the kitchen, looking for the girls. She spotted the note and wondered if Tina met them out or if she chose something else to do. Bette couldnt decide whether or not to join them and risk running into Tina. If she avoided them completely she wouldnt have to fear causing an awkward situation. But if Tina wasnt out and she didnt go, then shed miss out on a fun breakfast with friends. She grabbed her purse and headed out the door.
Tina arrived at the cafe and found the girls at a table outside, tucked away from the crowds of people. The sun beat down but they were shaded by the shadow of the building. Tina saw that Alice was making a funny face while Shane and Dana were holding their stomachs and laughing, tears forming.
Hi guys. Tina said as she approached the table.
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(66 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
Love the pace you’re setting with this one (even though I secretly hope they get together every chapter I read lol).
great!! Gotta love Alice. Wonderful as always.
You tell ’em, Alice. Let them dissect you later. Now’s the time to smack some sense (metaphorically) into B&T.
Tina you should listen to Alice. Nice.
Consider this encouragement. Love your vignettes.
the cliff’s notes version gets them back together sooner, right? but the extended version means more chapters… :)
Talk about a stubborn pair. It’s there, Bette and Tina, just take off the freaking blinders! Good one.
I think there is more rain in the forecast for the next few days so that should mean lots of writing….hmmm sounds good to me. Looking forward to the next great chapter.
Great as always – it’s a little nerve racking will they or won’t they connect.? but I’m enjoying it very much.
I wonder what it will take or if it is possible to move to a tender place between Bette and Tina.
Ahh, will tina and bette just get together already!!!
I’ll take the extendednversion if that means I get more of your writing. Thanks
One of the best story on this site. Your writing is superb, and the fact that I have no idea where this story will lead to, makes it even better. I seriously, do not know if you will get my favorite couple (Bette and Tina) back together or not, but whether you will reunite them or not. This journey that you have taken me on, makes it okay if they are not back together (even though, I hope they do), because you have given me enough reasons, why they will never have that chance again….but you’ve also given me reasons (and bits of hope), that they could get that second chance.
Again, a beautiful story, a heart breaking story, and maybe soon…a story of mending hearts, realizing that fate was what brought them together, but their true love, in the end, will find their way back to one another…and keep them together..ALWAYS and FOREVER!
fareast, the fact that i too have no idea which was this plot of yours is going to go makes it even that much better….Another great chapter…Thank you, i seem to be repeating myself but i just can’t get enough of this story:)
more even!! lol
Another fantastic chapter, but it wasn’t loooooong enough, we need moe please.
Just loving this story. Alice is right. Tina you need to take a chance and please make it a good one. Post soon
Love this story so very very much! You’re writing is excellent and the pace you are setting is just perfect. Truly one of my favorite stories on this amazing website!
Sunny skies here in New England… I hope very much that the sun inspires you to write just as much as the rain. Thanks again for sharing this wonderful vision of a story.
5 Big Heart Shaped Cookies To You …. (still one of my favorite chapters) *smiles*
Hey fareast. I just wanted to tell you that I’ve seen a colossal improvement in your writing style. Everything is flowing so much more smoothly; you’re certainly more comfortable with your characters, leaving your reader in the middle of things. You entice, enrich, and entertain her with your descriptions and with how the characters play off each other so naturally. Wonderful work, fareast. It is a pleasure to see writers improve with every brush of the pen. And as always, the pacing is leaving us breathless! Do continue!
Yep, Alice hit the nail on the head, Tina you are stubborn, get over it.
Just love this story.
Thank you.
I love this story! I think your pacing is perfect, and I’m so happy that you’re posting so frequently these days :)
I love this story, and I love that you are keeping us posted steadily It is awesome