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Vignettes: Chapter 29
Shane wiped her eyes. Hi Tina. She stood up and grabbed a chair from another table. Have a seat.
Thanks. Whats so funny?
Alice just told us a funny story, thats all. Dana said.
So wheres Bette? Alice casually asked.
She was in the shower when I left.
An awkward silence filled the table and the waiter brought out Tinas coffee and food. Tina decided to break the silence.
Look, I know you guys know that Bette and I were just having a… discussion.
They nodded.
Im sorry if it make things uncomfortable for you.
Its no big deal. Its not like its the first time weve seen you guys fight. Shane said.
Did you hear anything? Tina asked.
They shook their heads in unison, never opening their mouths. Alice bit her lip.
Alice? Tell me what you heard.
What? What makes you think I heard anything?
Because youre too quiet and youre biting your lip. Tina said.
Fine. Nothing much. I promise.
Yeah, just something about you guys always getting it on when youre together. Dana commented while Shane nudged her.
God, Dana. Never could keep your mouth shut, huh? Alice snapped.
Maybe you two have some things to work out more than me and Bette. Tina muttered.
You all have issues. Shane said.
Who wouldve thought wed see the day that we wanted to have a relationship like Shane? Alice said sarcastically, though truthfully. Anyway, were not talking about me now, were talking about Bette and Tina.
Theres nothing left to talk about. Tina said.
Liar. Alice accused. God you are the most stubborn woman, Tina. Just get over yourself and take a risk. Honestly, how many more times do you guys need to bump into each other on the street before you realize some things are just meant to be.
Tina looked from Dana to Shane, her eyes begging them to step in and defend her, but they simply sat back and remained quiet, not disagreeing with Alice. Shane actually had a slight smirk on her face.
Tina, listen to me. You only have so many chances before its too late. So why not? Alice pushed.
Why not? Do you want the extended version or the cliff notes? Tina asked, irritated.
We could just ask Bette. Dana said and pointed towards the street where Bette was walking towards them.
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(66 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
Love the pace you’re setting with this one (even though I secretly hope they get together every chapter I read lol).
great!! Gotta love Alice. Wonderful as always.
You tell ’em, Alice. Let them dissect you later. Now’s the time to smack some sense (metaphorically) into B&T.
Tina you should listen to Alice. Nice.
Consider this encouragement. Love your vignettes.
the cliff’s notes version gets them back together sooner, right? but the extended version means more chapters… :)
Talk about a stubborn pair. It’s there, Bette and Tina, just take off the freaking blinders! Good one.
I think there is more rain in the forecast for the next few days so that should mean lots of writing….hmmm sounds good to me. Looking forward to the next great chapter.
Great as always – it’s a little nerve racking will they or won’t they connect.? but I’m enjoying it very much.
I wonder what it will take or if it is possible to move to a tender place between Bette and Tina.
Ahh, will tina and bette just get together already!!!
I’ll take the extendednversion if that means I get more of your writing. Thanks
One of the best story on this site. Your writing is superb, and the fact that I have no idea where this story will lead to, makes it even better. I seriously, do not know if you will get my favorite couple (Bette and Tina) back together or not, but whether you will reunite them or not. This journey that you have taken me on, makes it okay if they are not back together (even though, I hope they do), because you have given me enough reasons, why they will never have that chance again….but you’ve also given me reasons (and bits of hope), that they could get that second chance.
Again, a beautiful story, a heart breaking story, and maybe soon…a story of mending hearts, realizing that fate was what brought them together, but their true love, in the end, will find their way back to one another…and keep them together..ALWAYS and FOREVER!
fareast, the fact that i too have no idea which was this plot of yours is going to go makes it even that much better….Another great chapter…Thank you, i seem to be repeating myself but i just can’t get enough of this story:)
more even!! lol
Another fantastic chapter, but it wasn’t loooooong enough, we need moe please.
Just loving this story. Alice is right. Tina you need to take a chance and please make it a good one. Post soon
Love this story so very very much! You’re writing is excellent and the pace you are setting is just perfect. Truly one of my favorite stories on this amazing website!
Sunny skies here in New England… I hope very much that the sun inspires you to write just as much as the rain. Thanks again for sharing this wonderful vision of a story.
5 Big Heart Shaped Cookies To You …. (still one of my favorite chapters) *smiles*
Hey fareast. I just wanted to tell you that I’ve seen a colossal improvement in your writing style. Everything is flowing so much more smoothly; you’re certainly more comfortable with your characters, leaving your reader in the middle of things. You entice, enrich, and entertain her with your descriptions and with how the characters play off each other so naturally. Wonderful work, fareast. It is a pleasure to see writers improve with every brush of the pen. And as always, the pacing is leaving us breathless! Do continue!
Yep, Alice hit the nail on the head, Tina you are stubborn, get over it.
Just love this story.
Thank you.
I love this story! I think your pacing is perfect, and I’m so happy that you’re posting so frequently these days :)
I love this story, and I love that you are keeping us posted steadily It is awesome