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Wanna Date? Chaper 19
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“Excuse me guys, I have to go speak to my wife,” she muttered.
The two men shared a glance before breaking into delighted smiles. “Wife? She’s a *****? Woo hoo!” the fractionally younger one said as Bette escaped.
‘Old perverts,’ she thought, quickly putting them out of her mind. Tina looked a bit upset, and Bette suspected the worst.
“T are you OK? What’s wrong?”
Tina just smiled a slightly fragile looking smile and slipped her hand into Bette’s, grateful for the contact.
“It’s fine Bette,” she said quietly.
“Did Helena say something to upset you? If she did I’ll”
“Bette,” interrupted Tina, “Calm down, ok? Yes we spoke, but it’s fine. It’s good in a way. I got to let her know once and for all that it was over.” Tina had no desire to repeat Helena’s absurd accusations. Just seeing Bette’s face and her obvious love reaffirmed her sense of trust in her. She had no intention of dignifying Helena’s lies with any consideration.
Bette stood there staring at her, with a perplexed look on her face. Tina couldn’t read her thoughts, couldn’t tell what she was thinking.
Glancing around the room, Bette suddenly pulled Tina over to a quiet corner, away from the milling groups of people. She had been so worried, and the sense of relief and love had almost overwhelmed her.
“Tina, I know this is hardly the time or place for a serious discussion, but it just can’t wait any longer,” Bette began earnestly.
“What is it babe?” Tina said tenderly, stroking Bette’s arm.
Bette was momentarily distracted by Tina’s incredible sweetness. She tried to regain her focus, and looked intently at her lover.
“T, I know we are taking things slowly and you don’t want me to pressure you, but I have to tell you how much I love you. I know everything that has happened has been my fault, and that I screwed things up so badly, but I’ve been so happy we’ve had this second chance.” She stroked Tina’s hair gently, bringing her face closer to her love’s.
“Tina, I want us to be together again, like before, only even better. I want us to be a family again, you, me and our baby. I want to be there for you and for her, and not just as a friend or as a girlfriend. I want to be your wife again Tina.” She looked directly into Tina’s eyes, trying to convey the genuineness of her feelings.
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Your story unfolds beautifully with each chapter. I’m saddened by the fact that the end draws near, but hopeful you will begin a new story when this one finishes. Thanks for writing. Bring on 20!
I second JKS’s comments.
i concur with the above 3 ladies. please have another story in the wings. you are wonderful.
Only one more to go. Yet I know you have many more in your head to write for us. I would like to tell how much I have enjoyed this and Thanks for just a beautiful story. Thanks bvh
OMG lovelly and Bette BRAVO dont you ever be afraid to tell Tina what you feeling she loves you..i hope Tina be able to say the samething to Bette ..and please no more Helena she has done enough..i cant wait for next chapter..they need a little love time..lol..amazing chapter thanks :o)
Please don’t let it end…OK..as long as you keep writing. please post soon
YAY!!!! I’m sooo happy that Bette finally summoned up the courage to tell Tina how she was feeling and all that she wanted. Awesome chapter all around cogent, from closure with Helena to creepy old men. Thank you!
Man this is awesome and can’t wait to see Tina said yes to Bette. Post soon, thanks!
K
wonderful chap. Loved it. Can’t wait for more.
IWONDERFUL JOB..I’M SAD IT IS THE END SOON,BUT THANKS FOR THE WONDERFUL STORY
simply loving your story, definitely more satisfying than how it unfolded in S2! Please continue to spin your take on bette and tina, hope this continues for many many more chaps….long running series? Thanks!!
S2 began with a Dusty Springfield song, ‘Just a Little Lovin’
I propose another song from that album, in reference to both Bette’s love for Tina, and our unfulfilled hopes for S2:
In The Land of Make Believe
(I wish we could have had your scenario – please indulge me and pardon the length)
In the land of make believe
You’re mine tonight
Although you are far away
In the land of make believe
I’m holding you tight
The silver moon is shining above
And there’s love in your eyes
And I’m kissing you
Like I used to do
Yesterday in paradise
I’ve been living in the land of make believe
Since you’ve been gone
I need you so much
That without your love
I must deceive myself
To go on
Your loving hand caresses my face
We embrace tenderly
Never will we part
Deep down in my heart
You are always here with me
You are always here with me
In the land of make believe
In the land of make believe
In the land of make believe
Page after page of closure!
You don’t know how satisfying that is!
Or, maybe you do!
This is great. I sure hope Tina says yes to Bette – I mean who could resist her. LOL
OMG…what a wonderful chapter. Tina finally got her closure with Helena. Tina stood up to Helena with strength, dignity, and love. Yes love, not for Helena, but for herself and Bette. Helena was there for Tina at a time she needed someone (although Helena had ulterior motive) — and Tina learned a lot about herself with Helena. Anyway, Tina got her closure and Bette finally found the words to tell Tina her real feelings. Bette not only told and showed Tina how much she loves her and wants her back in her life as her “wife,” but she showed Tina her vulnerability. Bette opened herself up to Tina, she exposed herself in a way that she can be blissfully happy or deeply wounded. Big step — and I think Tina saw that in Bette words in addition to the love. Great chapter…I’m saddened that it coming to an end. Thank you.
“happiness was just a day away” is it just a day away for us too? ;-)
Yes, yes, take her now you sexy beast! (lol)
Great chapter ! And a very nice little cliffhanger now. Common, T, say yes ! ^_^
I am going to be so sad when this ends tomorrow…but please tell is in the author’s notes when your new story will begin…thank you for sharing your talents!!!