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    Wanted Chapter 8

    Story written on February 7, 2006 by justkeepswimming.
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    surrender

     

    "I can’t say that I’ve observed a similar letting go on your part," Helena said. "It’s as though you’re holding back because it’s me."

     

    "Subconsciously that’s very likely," Bette admitted. "It’s hard for me to ask you for anything. I feel as though it would make me appear weak. You’re doing a fine job of pleasuring me as it is, I’m not sure there’s anything I feel I’m missing."

     

    "Oh come on Bette," Helena said as she leaned back and grinned. "There must be something you want to ask me to do for you physically. Don’t you want to completely surrender to melet me take you over and over until you’re completely spent?"

     

    It was Bette’s turn to reach for the water. She always felt as though she should be in charge sexually with her partners. She rarely felt as though she was being seduced, or that she could be controlled in some way.

     

    "I know I would enjoy surrendering to you," Bette replied quietly. She reached across the table and met Helena’s fingertips with her own. "I can’t believe how much I’ve enjoyed surrendering to you to the extent that I have."

     

    "Wouldn’t you just love it if I pushed you up against that wall over there and fucked you while staring into your eyes?" Helena nodded over to one of the restaurant walls, bare but for a simple design painted on its surface.

     

    "I have to admit, you do know what to say to get a reaction from me," Bette replied as she let one finger meander down toward where the fingers met on Helena’s hand.

     

    "I thought you were against showing any affection in public right now," Helena said as she enjoyed Bette’s light touch.

     

    "Seems I can’t resist you," Bette said.

     

    "I certainly like the idea of your being unable to resist me," Helena said with a smirk. "How long do you have this afternoon?"

     

    "I have to leave in just under two hours," Bette replied. "More than enough time for lunch."

     

    The server approached the table to greet them. Bette discreetly pulled her hand away and pretended to listen to the specials as they were recited. She couldn’t take her eyes off of Helena. The server took their drink orders and left to let them to peruse the menu.

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    6. grrr yeah let Bette show up freshly fucked. Please…for me one of your most faithful fans and absolute worshippers of HelleBette. Loving it but please please don’t let Helena pussy whip Bette I have seen enough of that in the show from Tina to want to read it here.

    9. I stayed home sick from work today, and it was great to see one of my favorite stories posted. It is going to be quite interesting what Tina and the gang will think when they find out about these two.

    10. I’ve read this story from beginning to end so many times, and it’s the first (and quite nearly the only) story I look for when I log on to this site. I love that Helena, in many respects, just wants to please Bette, just wants her to be happy. I especially like that Bette is finally allowing herself to get into this with Helena. I can see, that if this played out on the show, she would show a lot more resistance to public affection, even be downright hostile towards Helena in public, and then try to redeem herself to Helena in private. But your story shows the other side of this possible liaison, that they could co-exist quite formidably, but still want to keep it low-key. This relationship, along with a Helacious relationship, are pretty much the only couplings I’m cheering for, at this point. Here’s to crossing ones fingers in the pursuit of the unbelievable.

    12. JKS, The story is setting new standards in awe and wonder. It has captured the potential zeal and essence of the uniting of Bette and Helena. These are two equally matched opponents that duck and parry on the battlefield of relationships. Each has an arsenal of weapons and experience to the game. Each knows the measure of their adversary; knows their strengths and weaknesses, knows when to strike and when to relinquish control so that the battle may be lost but the war will be won. Your dialogue dazzles and overwhelms with its wit and charm. The continual testing of each other is magnificently drawn out. A game of cat and mouse is evident with every question and response. This is purely due to your way with words. As always, with much appreciation and gratitude, Your Loyal Fan. PS – Yes, it is now a terrific Tuesday.

    15. she’s gonna get caught…I can feel it, Tina is not totally stupid and is going to be able to smell Helena as she’s been there before….looooook ooouuutttt

    16. Ok jks, it’s time for me to stop lurking and comment on your stories….may I say as a fellow canadian that I am constantly astonished at your writing ability to take the reader deep within the storyline. This story definately has me hooked and I look forward to reading each new installment! Hmmmm….was there perhaps someone in the restaurant that saw these two deep in thought and touch???

    17. whoo child! what was tina thinking?? going back to MEN?? oh well, too bad 4 her……..and in the words of our savior from boredom monogomy “don’t stop, don’t you dare stop” this is really getting interesting…

    18. Ohhhhh…..mmmyyyyyyy…..GGoddddd!!!!!! I knew that you were the right one who could do justice to this storyline!! My stomach is in my throat, and I feel like I just stepped into a sauna…it’s THAT hot in here!!!!! Whew!!!

    21. This is a sinfully delicious tale of Helbette. You are doing this story justice. At this point I say fuck a Tina. She is missing out on all levels with Bette. Please continue!!!

    22. Not a disappointing chapter yet when it comes to this story. I wish IC read Fan Fiction and adopted this for the show. Who knows, Tina may be w/ a man in S.4, Bette may be in NY, and Helena may be her weekend visitor.Please post again soon.

    23. Ahhh That fantacy….Ok that was hot and it didnt even have to be an NC17…lol…now that i like!!!I konw some reaaders dont like the idea of these two but hey its one of the best fiction stories around and it sure beats whats happening on our TVs..doest our Bette deserve a little happeness and fun?

    25. It will be very interesting what Tina is going to say once this relationship becomes public. I really like where this story is headed and the future possibilities.

    26. So absolute brilliant and amazing written….you just have a way with words like almost no one else :o))…..you know I’ve come to love this story, but I still prefer B&T in the long run…..looking forward to another wonderful post from you :o))

    27. awww yay!!! i love them this is so cute heeh even though im still a tina fan i dunno this is starting to make me think…but i dunno i would still cry if in the show bette and tina broke up…but this is amazing simply just amazing!

    28. After seeing ep5 and reading the spoilers for ep6, heck I’m a HelBette believer, bring it on, Fk Tina and her lies, Helena is what Bette needs. JKS enjoying very much your story and its what we need, have you sent your story for the fanisode, it would be so hot to see it played :: whishful thinking::

    31. Wow! B & H can certainly heat it up. You are doing an excellent job with this story. The dialogue is about as true as I would imagine it to be. I can’t wait until they feel comfortable enough to be seen ‘together’ in front of their friends. Love this story!

    32. Tina who? The settings, the writing, the way you have captured the characters…brilliant, simply brilliant! The story is one that most would not dare to tell but you did it JKS and you portrayed the possibility to the extent that I now see it as a reality (of sorts). Keep writing, by far the best fanfic I have read thus far!

    35. JKS, You make this hot. Pancha just made me laugh. So when are B & H gonna get busted by someone other than Shane. It’s gonna be soon now the way these two are carrying on. They’re barely even trying to keep this under wraps now. And really, why should they really care at this point? They would merely be embarassed at having to explain.

    36. I am a huge TiBetter. Yes, even after all the BS that is happening in S3. But when I go to this site and see your moniker with the title “Wanted”, I feel as if I have just found a lost treasure. Your writing skills are off the charts. This story is so provocative and yet the dialogue is restrained but erotic. You leave me breathless. You should definitely enter the fanisode competition.

    38. What a feat, Swim! And so funny!…This story is infecting so many with “Tina Amnesia.” Tina who?…Indeed! Listening to the dialog back and forth across that table in the restaurant was like watching a long volley in a tennis match…extremely pleasurable and suspenseful. I wasn’t sure if they were going to opt for a room or not. Oh, and speaking of match, Helebette is one made in heaven. Hee! This dreamy, blissful chapter has left me absolutely euphoric. Is the score tied at Love?

    44. These women sure are direct! In general, problems are usually easier to address when one has financial means. Still, I would love to come upon a chapter where Bette is present for Helena. Just a thought. Pardon if the suggestion is duplicative. Thanks for continuing.

    45. jks, i am so glad you are doing this story line. not only does it take courage but it takes real talent to make this shit believable. keep doing what you are doing. please can we see tina’s reaction when bette shows up with the just fucked looked. oh please!!! because Tina is truly pissing me off this season.

    52. Hell yes Bette should go home looking freshly fucked and I do hope Tina can smell Helena on Bette…okay, sorry about that rant. That was my residual anger towards S3 Tina shining through. This story is still kicking ass, JKS.

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