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Instead of fight the advice given, Bette simply picked at her food. “And what if she’s not … what if all she wants is to sleep?”
“I guarantee you she won’t.”
Bette smiled, lying her fork next to her knife as she stared down at her plate with her aching back a constant reminder of her fatigue. “And just how do you know that?”
“You two are crazy-in-love. I can see it, and anyone else can see it from miles away,” she whispered. “Tina wants you too … someone just has to make the first move.”
In a flash moment of complete honesty, Bette leaned onto the table, and stared over at her friend. She was even quieter, but certain of her words: “I’ve been very … insecure … about all of that lately.”
Patricia held her hand to signify that she understood that feeling. “All I’m saying is show your wife how much you feel for her. If that means holding her, then hold her. Promise me you’ll do what you can? – I would hate to see you guys torn apart over some lunatic.”
“You’re too good to me,” Bette said at last, sitting back in her chair.
“You know I’m never gonna let you forget you said that, right?”
“Yes, I’m counting on it.”
Bette and Patricia exchanged a supportive hug as Tina and Hank had finished with the living room. Bette held her hand out to Tina with hopefulness.
“How’re you feeling?” she asked aloud, realizing it was the first time she’d asked that in days, as they’d both been feeling a constant level of suspense. But it felt right to inquire at last.
“Tired,” Tina answered, stepping in close to feel Bette’s arms drape over her, keeping her.
“We’ll try to keep the movie down,” Hank said, rubbing his hands together with a smile for the sleepy couple.
“Not too quiet,” Patricia winked, dismissed with Bette’s timely eye roll.
“Have a good night,” Bette said, “And thanks again. It really feels comforting to have people around.” She couldn’t have been more thankful, but she was also tired, and she wanted to get Tina to bed, too.
“Goodnight,” Tina said, slipping off to the washroom with Bette, where they brushed their teeth together and took turns washing their faces. With the fear they had lately been facing, they had fallen into a routine that kept them together for as much of the day as was possible. There was safety in numbers, so they tried to keep very close. It was already becoming habit, and Bette had to smile at Tina’s zombie-like stare into the mirror.
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Scary !Thank you for the update.,great story.
Thx for your pdte, love your story. Eish this girl is scary. Pps
Sorry lets try again. Thx for your post.
Creepy! Thanks for posting!
Sophia’s a total nut job. They have an alarm system, but they haven’t thought to have the locks changed – why would they? Unfortunately, Pat can’t stay every night.
Very creepy, and there’s no telling what the stalker might do next. Thanks for the post.
Oh my God, it sounds like she might hurt Tina. I’m hooked on this story. It’s great. I love thrillers and I love Tibette. The two of them together is just PERFECTION.
I just became paranoid (more than I usually am) and locked every door and windows. LOL. So creepy.
Can’t wait to read more!
I like this story very much. and I like the thriller.
you’ve written so well that I swear, I locked the door last night. :-D
I hope she will not hurt Tina
thanks for the update
OMG im so scared for tina this wacka doo needs to be caught now pps.
I like thrillers, but not to scary.
That Sophia is one scary bitch and if she hurts Tina or Bette i will Hunt her down.
Can i volunteer to spend the evenings at their house, tot protect them?
I love the stalker intrigue. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
God she is so creepy. I can’t wait until she gets caught. Let’s hope the girls stay strong though it all.
Thanks for posting! Looking forward to the next chapter… :)
This chick needs to be caught quick, fast and in a hurry. Glad Bette and Tina were able to reconnect. Thanks for posting.
Delusional is scary. Reminds me of Bardo who shot Rebecca Schaeffer. He thought she was telling him she loved him from her television series My Sister Sam. So I guess Sophia isn’t a doppelganger or another Tina from another dimension…just a wack job! Eeks! This gives me chills! Thanks, GR, for the update.
Absolutely loving this story! The suspense is killing me, definitely refreshing to read :)
Okay, when you use terms like “loneliness” to partly describe Sophia, I kind of feel sorry for her. Then cut into the rage part and now I’m scared of her. That simple paragraph had swimming in emotions
Damn it!…how can she do that?…isn’t the police are on guard to the Porter/Kennard house hold?..
Why they didn’t see her?…they way she do it “scaled the fence from the neighbor’s yard around back “..
Must be suspicious enough to check it? …right?
It’s really getting exciting and scary! Please post soon!
Thanks for this awesome story! This is giving me the chills! I hope Bette and Tina will get a ferocious guard dog and a bodyguard each. Sophia is relentless!
This bitch is crazy