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    Watching

    With a knock at the door, Bette and Tina jumped. And just as quickly, they reassured themselves that they were having guests.

    “Hank,” the man smiled as the door finally opened to reveal him and Patricia standing side-by-side. He had his hand reached out, and Bette took it with all of the authority she could manage, but no smile.

    “Hi, Hank. You’ll have to forgive me for my mood … it’s been a rough couple of weeks.”

    Fortunately, he was very understanding. He even helped to set the table before they all sat down to eat. It was a quiet evening, but Bette spoke as they all looked to the dishes before them.

    “Everyone … thanks. T, thanks for the food. Pat and Hank … thanks for keeping us company,” she said in such a glum tone of voice that Patricia wanted to hug her, but she let her colleague finish. “We … we needed it, actually – as much as we’re not feeling lively enough for a dinner party.”

    “It’s nice to have you over,” Tina agreed, nodding to Patricia and Hank. “We’re just … even more tired than usual.” She tugged her lips into a smile, but it wasn’t very convincing. They had had about an hour’s sleep each night, and it was wearing them to the ground.

    As they ate and drank together, Patricia began glancing between Bette and Tina to note how little chemistry had sparked that night. Usually there were little glances or touches that she shook her head at now and then, but Bette and Tina were hunched over with hopelessness. And it killed her to see such a magnificent couple falter.

    “How about … the two of you get some sleep while Hank and I stay and watch a movie,” Patricia offered, earning a slanted brow from her date who tried not to re-evaluate the dress she’d worn. “We could … stay all night, if you want. I haven’t pulled an all-nighter since … I think since my college days. A nice, happy sleepover!”

    Hank’s eyes widened excitedly, but quickly fixed them back on his plate.

    Bette and Tina didn’t even notice his reactions. They were both staring at Patricia with a sort of smile that spoke of their gratitude.

    Comments

    1. Sophia’s a total nut job. They have an alarm system, but they haven’t thought to have the locks changed – why would they? Unfortunately, Pat can’t stay every night.

      Very creepy, and there’s no telling what the stalker might do next. Thanks for the post.

    2. Oh my God, it sounds like she might hurt Tina. I’m hooked on this story. It’s great. I love thrillers and I love Tibette. The two of them together is just PERFECTION.
      I just became paranoid (more than I usually am) and locked every door and windows. LOL. So creepy.
      Can’t wait to read more!

    3. I like this story very much. and I like the thriller.
      you’ve written so well that I swear, I locked the door last night. :-D
      I hope she will not hurt Tina
      thanks for the update

    4. I like thrillers, but not to scary.

      That Sophia is one scary bitch and if she hurts Tina or Bette i will Hunt her down.

      Can i volunteer to spend the evenings at their house, tot protect them?

    5. God she is so creepy. I can’t wait until she gets caught. Let’s hope the girls stay strong though it all.
      Thanks for posting! Looking forward to the next chapter… :)

    6. Delusional is scary. Reminds me of Bardo who shot Rebecca Schaeffer. He thought she was telling him she loved him from her television series My Sister Sam. So I guess Sophia isn’t a doppelganger or another Tina from another dimension…just a wack job! Eeks! This gives me chills! Thanks, GR, for the update.

    7. Okay, when you use terms like “loneliness” to partly describe Sophia, I kind of feel sorry for her. Then cut into the rage part and now I’m scared of her. That simple paragraph had swimming in emotions

    8. Damn it!…how can she do that?…isn’t the police are on guard to the Porter/Kennard house hold?..
      Why they didn’t see her?…they way she do it “scaled the fence from the neighbor’s yard around back “..
      Must be suspicious enough to check it? …right?

    9. Thanks for this awesome story! This is giving me the chills! I hope Bette and Tina will get a ferocious guard dog and a bodyguard each. Sophia is relentless!

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