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–“Welcome Back”– 4
Story written on November 8, 2005 by ShAiN.
“Aw man,” Al came out just in time,”Sunny what is we gone do!?” ‘Carmen giggles at Al’s triumph in speaking the country language.’
‘Sunny pulled her by her ear to the bus shaking her head all the way, leaving me with a very *****, horny latino.’
“Uh…could i meet up at your house, i promise not to disturb your aunt.”
Shane-”Hah, you can do whatever you want, she sleeps a lot.” ‘She smiles and brushes some hair out of my face and leans closer to my ear, “Do whatever i want, or who ever right,”
‘OOh…*****’
‘Carmen pulls on my arm and gives me that ***** look, “I’ve been meaning to stop by, I pass it on the way to the seven-eleven store sometimes.” ‘She rolled her tongue perfectly on the ‘seven-eleven’ part, which is going to have me wishing Tina had slapped me and told me that she’s really not *****, or whatever and that i never should talk to her, ever.’
‘Al waits for us all on the bus and if you looked closely you could see her actually thinking of an evil plan.’ ‘Bad Alice.’
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-Jenny-
‘I don’t know what to say but, i think i like her a lot, i mean she’s almost to real for me even to be around, her smile and everything, even though she thinks im too dorky for her i can always hope for the best, (smiles slightly) Dana’s trying to get me all doled up, i play with my long hair for a bit, i never felt comfortable wearing a mini skirt, my glasses will have to stay in tact though, they been threw a lot, and so have I, the awards that i have one are now doubling over, I ask Dana would it be okay for her to keep some in her room, even if her mom wants me to study and get all A’s while my dad is away, she constantly is complaining about her walls, ‘Only family portraits and home decorative things go on these walls, your not a Fairbanks, but I will make you into something that everyone will desire.’
‘I never say anything back and just nod my head, what can i say, Dana allows about 12 of my awards, she knows that i’d rather just have them stored away, but wants to stay on the good side of ‘Mommy Dearest’.
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OMG..THNK U!..I was waiting 4 an update..It’s soo nice 2 b prt of ur lil fan club here..I wonder If Al has her chart in this strie?..GREEEATT chapter as alwayz btw..I LOVE this strie…the luv.xxxseXxxx.crushes.jelousy.the angst..drama..prtiez..It is sooo good..soo L-word gurlz..so0o0o highskool..remindz me of ‘Cruel Intentions’..I LUV it!..THNK U 4 writing such talented writing, dun stop PLEASE 4eva urz a dedicated fan..nst Post so0N!!!..
so yeah…im hooked. please update soon! this is getting interesting :)
you damn right i will update, :) you guys need this like a crackphen :P
Shane the young stud. Great update. Carmen really goes for what she wants. It was too funny how uncomfortable she made Shane. Love everyone’s mixed up lovelife. Post soon, we need our fix.
Ha funny this one. I like Shane. so cute. GO to read the last update.
Ok my eyes I can’t see lol. Good chapter, so everyone want Shane and this is driving everyone crazy, love it. Ok let see what’s next, thanks! Oh next time please no color is make my eyes blear, thank you!
great story but whats up with the high lighting of the words¿¿¿