Fan Fiction
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–“Welcome Back”– 4
Story written on November 8, 2005 by ShAiN.
‘She cuddles her and looked at me, “What’s…(checks) her name.”
“Cooly, Sunny has her brother, Peanut,”
Carmen- “Wow, you and Sunny have a lot in common i suppose.” ‘She tickles her ears, that’s a good way to get her riled up, Al comes in with food and crashes on my bed.’
‘Carmen gave me one last look and gave Cooly back to me, her face close to mine, i wonder could she see the fear in my eyes yet.’
‘Al throws a piece of cheese at us both, I’ll have to thank her later for that,’
“Cheese anyone.”
Shane– “I think we can get something to eat out of town tonight.”
Al-” Huh, i thought where staying in Clo– Yes!, cool, Barbsville,”
‘I high five her and smirked, “Yeah, we just have to remember not to get pulled over, that town is tough.’
‘Carmen laid back on the bed and listen to me and Al babble on and on about how cool Barbsville is to her.’
Al- “Well Carmen, you want get to see that much of Clover, but your going to have fun, trust me.’
Carmen- “I bet i will,” She smiled and asked me if i had a shirt she could use.’
‘Know one has ever asked that of me except Sunny, and that was a long time ago, Alice snickered a bit, “Sure, but you don’t really think that you’ll like them,”
Carmen,-”Well i was going to freshen up and ask if i could wash my clothes, and i need a shirt, since i already have some shorts,”
‘God it was getting hotter in here by the moment, but it’s Carmen, she’s suppose to make things hot and horny, and all of the above.’
‘Alice fans herself and leaves the room trying not to laugh, does she always have to leave me in dangerous situations
Shane– “Um…sure…” ‘I turned my back on her just for a minute and rumaged threw some shirts of mine and found a red tank-top, I turn around and to my suprise (not really) she was almost undressed, she ran a finger there her hair and held onto the towel that i remember getting for myself.’
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OMG..THNK U!..I was waiting 4 an update..It’s soo nice 2 b prt of ur lil fan club here..I wonder If Al has her chart in this strie?..GREEEATT chapter as alwayz btw..I LOVE this strie…the luv.xxxseXxxx.crushes.jelousy.the angst..drama..prtiez..It is sooo good..soo L-word gurlz..so0o0o highskool..remindz me of ‘Cruel Intentions’..I LUV it!..THNK U 4 writing such talented writing, dun stop PLEASE 4eva urz a dedicated fan..nst Post so0N!!!..
so yeah…im hooked. please update soon! this is getting interesting :)
you damn right i will update, :) you guys need this like a crackphen :P
Shane the young stud. Great update. Carmen really goes for what she wants. It was too funny how uncomfortable she made Shane. Love everyone’s mixed up lovelife. Post soon, we need our fix.
Ha funny this one. I like Shane. so cute. GO to read the last update.
Ok my eyes I can’t see lol. Good chapter, so everyone want Shane and this is driving everyone crazy, love it. Ok let see what’s next, thanks! Oh next time please no color is make my eyes blear, thank you!
great story but whats up with the high lighting of the words¿¿¿