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What is love? – Chapter 17
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“If she’s so great, why isn’t she with someone?”
“Why aren’t you with someone?” retorted Val.
Tina had no response to that. Maybe Val’s suggestion was good. If she said this Gracie was all right, then she was sure she was. And Tina knew she was lonely.
“Is she a good dancer?” asked Tina.
“Excellent,” smiled Val.
“OK.”
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Milk
Bette didn’t see Tina come into Milk because she was already on the prowl.
She had entered Milk about thirty minutes before and had joined Alice, Tammy, Shane and Dana at their table. After exchanging pleasantries and small talk, Bette began to check out the room. Shane instantly knew what she was doing and it made her sad. Alice caught on a little after Shane, but Bette’s actions were lost on Tammy and Dana.
Bette evaluated the Milk clientele with the practiced eye of the cowboy deciding which calf to cut out of the herd. The cowboy was looking for something to rope, tie and brand and so was Bette.
Soon her eyes lighted on a very attractive and classy looking woman with brown hair and light-colored eyes. At this distance Bette couldn’t determine their color, but she would soon be close enough to do so.
She began to approach her target in a circuitous route. The woman seemed to be with nobody romantically and had deflected the advances of several women. Bette wanted the woman to see her approaching so she could get a good look at Bette before she was right next to her.
Bette’s hair was down and she was wearing a ruby red sleeveless tee-shirt which did not reach her low-cut jeans. When the woman saw her, Bette produced her gorgeous smile, about half-wattage, and began taking a direct route toward her. The light-eyed woman, her eyes were gray, couldn’t take those eyes off Bette. No surprise.
She stopped a few feet from the gray-eyed woman, extended her hand and said, “I’m Bette.” This wasn’t a very sophisticated line, but Bette knew she probably didn’t need one. Most women were so blown away by her looks, her smile, her ***** voice, her easy confidence that they grasped her hand as though they didn’t want to let go.
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Pancha, first off, let me just say, I love your writing. You bring out such strong & tender emotions in Tina & Bette. This story has me captivated. I can see already who will get the Fall award Thank You please continue soon
albeez hit this one on the head…you should have let Carrie knock some sense into her. lord…thanks for the post and can’t wait for more
wow pancha im barely catchin on to ur story i got lots to read!!
ok its time for bette and tina to quit pussy footing around they are acting like they are in highschool.its time for bette to use that yale education
and say i f im not in love with tina why am i getting jealous. duh thats because u are in love with her bette,
open your eyes.u know what bette is starting to annoy me.
Just enjoying your story. Thanks
I guess were making progress??!! Come on, Bette.
This is sad to see them like this, damn Bette got some moved that is protect Tina perfectly. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Bette is such a Neanderthal, well at least this Bette is…kind of funny to watch though…I’d like to see this drag out a bit longer, this back and forth struggle for bette looks good on her…
Bette’s hitting on another woman, yet she becomes furious when she sees someone else touching Tina.
Can we all say, “Dog in the manger”?
It’s stupid. It’s primitive. Not one of your finer moments. Bette, I can relate, sista gurl…
I’m just starting the story. I wonder who will be the puncher, and who the punchee? Bars, with their low lights and high spirits, are infamous for igniting conflicts of the volatile variety. Will Tina get a punch in? Does she have too much class for that?
…back to the story…
She was calling a woman out because she was dancing with her girl. Yet she cant tell Tina she loves her.She is so thick headed she could ram a brick wall down and not get hurt. thanks
glad to see your joining techie. good story. bette is one dense broad. needs to be hit with a 2 x 4. pancha is doing a good job reeling us in with her story. so keep up the good work. thanks.
i love this story so much!!! keep posting!!!
bette has a really thick skull doesn’y she?..i really like the way Tina’s heart and mind are in conflict..really smart!..great chapter(“,)
Wow, it’s a bit violent. I dunt fancy a violent Bette, although she controlled the situation, hoho. I hope Bette’s always gracious, sometimes cute and sometimes a bit clumsy.
But I admit at the first sight of your summary, I thought Tina might find a flirtatious Bette and offer her a punch, haha. I seem not to mind a violent Tina. And I found sometimes a strong Tina could be very cute. ;)
But still, it’s an excellent chapter as the others. Every time, I prayed in my mind it could be a 10-paged chapter, haha.
i really would want to read a 10-paged chapter from u too..! wow..it’s juz keep getting better!!!!
My mind – pancha should post more frequently…
My heart – and perhaps make the chapters longer…
Good chapter, loving your story, at first reading the summary, I thought punch was a drink being thrown… heh.
great as always..thanks
Pancha-nice very nice. Bette is as thick as a ton of bricks. Why doesn’t she just pee on Tina and get it over with. Tina loves it, that’s what she loves about Bette. These two will never get it right will they?
“T, I love you”… anger can be a liberating emotion at times.
Bette’s head is thick as a brick!