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What is love? – Chapter 17
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“Get the ***** away from my girl! Do you hear me? Don’t you dare touch her again!” Bette growled through clenched teeth.
Gracie didn’t know who this woman was, but she didn’t like anyone talking to her like that. She immediately threw a round house punch at Bette. Bette dodged, grabbed the swinging arm and expertly pulled it behind Gracie’s back. Gracie was instantly immobilized by this move. Bette kept raising Gracie’s arm up her back, an inch at a time, and each time she did, it hurt Gracie more.
“Bette, what the ***** are you doing? Let her go,” Tina yelled.
Bette spoke to Gracie, ignoring Tina, “You’re going to leave. Now. Isn’t that right?”
Shane and Red arrived almost simultaneously. Shane took a deep breath and grasped Bette’s free arm to get her attention.
“Bette, let’s go outside,” Shane said calmly and firmly. “Let go of this woman.”
Bette let go and Gracie turned and started to go after Bette, even though her right arm was still in pain. Before she could move far, however, Red pinned Gracie’s arms to her body and stopped her.
“You need to sit down,” Red told Gracie. Gracie understood instantly that she was outmatched and didn’t struggle. As Gracie walked back to the table, Red turned to Bette and Tina.
“You two ladies need to go outside, settle your business and then go home.”
Shane let go of Bette’s arm and watched the ex-couple walk toward the door.
The hopeful circle of women that had formed around Bette and Gracie broke up, disappointedly. The blond had taken a good swing and Bette had made a nifty defense move, but they were hoping to see a couple of punches make contact. They resigned themselves to the fact that the most significant physical contact tonight was probably going to be made while dancing. The music started again.
“That was pretty impressive,” commented Alice who had sneaked up close to the action, but had been far enough distant to keep out of harm’s way.
“Hey!” said Shane who was startled at having Alice right next to her. “How did Bette know how to do that?”
“NYPD,” informed Alice.
“What?”
“When she worked there after college – she went to a self-defense workshop.”
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Pancha, first off, let me just say, I love your writing. You bring out such strong & tender emotions in Tina & Bette. This story has me captivated. I can see already who will get the Fall award Thank You please continue soon
albeez hit this one on the head…you should have let Carrie knock some sense into her. lord…thanks for the post and can’t wait for more
wow pancha im barely catchin on to ur story i got lots to read!!
ok its time for bette and tina to quit pussy footing around they are acting like they are in highschool.its time for bette to use that yale education
and say i f im not in love with tina why am i getting jealous. duh thats because u are in love with her bette,
open your eyes.u know what bette is starting to annoy me.
Just enjoying your story. Thanks
I guess were making progress??!! Come on, Bette.
This is sad to see them like this, damn Bette got some moved that is protect Tina perfectly. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Bette is such a Neanderthal, well at least this Bette is…kind of funny to watch though…I’d like to see this drag out a bit longer, this back and forth struggle for bette looks good on her…
Bette’s hitting on another woman, yet she becomes furious when she sees someone else touching Tina.
Can we all say, “Dog in the manger”?
It’s stupid. It’s primitive. Not one of your finer moments. Bette, I can relate, sista gurl…
I’m just starting the story. I wonder who will be the puncher, and who the punchee? Bars, with their low lights and high spirits, are infamous for igniting conflicts of the volatile variety. Will Tina get a punch in? Does she have too much class for that?
…back to the story…
She was calling a woman out because she was dancing with her girl. Yet she cant tell Tina she loves her.She is so thick headed she could ram a brick wall down and not get hurt. thanks
glad to see your joining techie. good story. bette is one dense broad. needs to be hit with a 2 x 4. pancha is doing a good job reeling us in with her story. so keep up the good work. thanks.
i love this story so much!!! keep posting!!!
bette has a really thick skull doesn’y she?..i really like the way Tina’s heart and mind are in conflict..really smart!..great chapter(“,)
Wow, it’s a bit violent. I dunt fancy a violent Bette, although she controlled the situation, hoho. I hope Bette’s always gracious, sometimes cute and sometimes a bit clumsy.
But I admit at the first sight of your summary, I thought Tina might find a flirtatious Bette and offer her a punch, haha. I seem not to mind a violent Tina. And I found sometimes a strong Tina could be very cute. ;)
But still, it’s an excellent chapter as the others. Every time, I prayed in my mind it could be a 10-paged chapter, haha.
i really would want to read a 10-paged chapter from u too..! wow..it’s juz keep getting better!!!!
My mind – pancha should post more frequently…
My heart – and perhaps make the chapters longer…
Good chapter, loving your story, at first reading the summary, I thought punch was a drink being thrown… heh.
great as always..thanks
Pancha-nice very nice. Bette is as thick as a ton of bricks. Why doesn’t she just pee on Tina and get it over with. Tina loves it, that’s what she loves about Bette. These two will never get it right will they?
“T, I love you”… anger can be a liberating emotion at times.
Bette’s head is thick as a brick!