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What is love? – Chapter 17
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“Good to know,” Shane smiled slightly.
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The parking lot at Milk
When Bette and Tina got outside, Tina whirled on Bette.
“What the ***** was that all about? “
“I didn’t want her touching you.”
“That’s none of your business.”
“You are my business!”
Tina was angry, but quiet, just looking at Bette with amazement.
“T, I love you. I want to protect you.”
“You mean you ‘decided’ again that you love me?” Tina said, reminding Bette of what she had said the last time they had dinner together.
“And who are you ‘protecting’ me from? She’s a friend of Val’s and I wanted to dance with her.”
“T, please.”
“You’re crazy! You are like somesomemaleelk.. fighting another male elk for a female! It’s all about ***** and territory! THE ELK IS NOT IN LOVE!”
Bette would have been amused except Tina was so furious. The intensity of her anger made her comments serious. Bette wanted to make love to her at that very moment, but, of course, she didn’t move. And Tina continued in a quiet, ominous voice.
“That’s you. That’s you, Bette Porter. That incident in there. It wasn’t about protection. It was about sexual jealousy and possession. That’s all you understand. You do not understand love.”
“Tina.” Bette couldn’t say anything else in answer to Tina’s accusations.
“Here’s a bulletin. I want more than that from a relationship and I deserve more!”
Tina stomped off to her car and Bette stood there with her hands in her pocket. It was like the time at home and the time at the restaurant. She realized she couldn’t say what Tina needed to hear.
As Bette watched Tina walk to her car, she thought maybe she should give up. But she had never wanted anyone as much as she wanted Tina.
“That elk stuff was kinda funny,” offered Al who came up beside Bette.
“Not to Tina,” Bette said tiredly. “And really not to me, either. Maybe she’s right.”
Bette rubbed her forehead.
“What’s next?” asked Alice
“I think I’ll go back inside and beat the living ***** out of that woman.”
“Let’s go get some coffee instead.”
OK.”
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As Tina drove home, this was running through her head.
Tina’s mind: Bette’s a jackass.
Tina’s heart: Yes.
Tina’s mind: She’s an idiot.
Tina’s heart: True.
Tina’s mind: She cares about nothing but *****.
Tina’s heart: Well, that’s not exactly true.
Tina’s mind: That’s what you said about her.
Tina’s heart: I was angry.
As Tina had watched Bette inside Milk and outside in the parking lot, she thought that she never looked more beautiful or more desirable. But she didn’t want to tell that to her mind.
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Tina arrived at her apartment house, parked her car and went upstairs. She flopped down on her bed.
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Tina’s mind: You can’t trust her.
Tina’s heart: She’s never lied to me. Before she ever touched me, she said she was not a white-picket fence person. She’s not in love with me but she’s never said that she was.
Tina’s mind: We need to discuss her truthfulness.
Tina’s heart: I’m going to cry now. Good night.
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Pancha, first off, let me just say, I love your writing. You bring out such strong & tender emotions in Tina & Bette. This story has me captivated. I can see already who will get the Fall award Thank You please continue soon
albeez hit this one on the head…you should have let Carrie knock some sense into her. lord…thanks for the post and can’t wait for more
wow pancha im barely catchin on to ur story i got lots to read!!
ok its time for bette and tina to quit pussy footing around they are acting like they are in highschool.its time for bette to use that yale education
and say i f im not in love with tina why am i getting jealous. duh thats because u are in love with her bette,
open your eyes.u know what bette is starting to annoy me.
Just enjoying your story. Thanks
I guess were making progress??!! Come on, Bette.
This is sad to see them like this, damn Bette got some moved that is protect Tina perfectly. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Bette is such a Neanderthal, well at least this Bette is…kind of funny to watch though…I’d like to see this drag out a bit longer, this back and forth struggle for bette looks good on her…
Bette’s hitting on another woman, yet she becomes furious when she sees someone else touching Tina.
Can we all say, “Dog in the manger”?
It’s stupid. It’s primitive. Not one of your finer moments. Bette, I can relate, sista gurl…
I’m just starting the story. I wonder who will be the puncher, and who the punchee? Bars, with their low lights and high spirits, are infamous for igniting conflicts of the volatile variety. Will Tina get a punch in? Does she have too much class for that?
…back to the story…
She was calling a woman out because she was dancing with her girl. Yet she cant tell Tina she loves her.She is so thick headed she could ram a brick wall down and not get hurt. thanks
glad to see your joining techie. good story. bette is one dense broad. needs to be hit with a 2 x 4. pancha is doing a good job reeling us in with her story. so keep up the good work. thanks.
i love this story so much!!! keep posting!!!
bette has a really thick skull doesn’y she?..i really like the way Tina’s heart and mind are in conflict..really smart!..great chapter(“,)
Wow, it’s a bit violent. I dunt fancy a violent Bette, although she controlled the situation, hoho. I hope Bette’s always gracious, sometimes cute and sometimes a bit clumsy.
But I admit at the first sight of your summary, I thought Tina might find a flirtatious Bette and offer her a punch, haha. I seem not to mind a violent Tina. And I found sometimes a strong Tina could be very cute. ;)
But still, it’s an excellent chapter as the others. Every time, I prayed in my mind it could be a 10-paged chapter, haha.
i really would want to read a 10-paged chapter from u too..! wow..it’s juz keep getting better!!!!
My mind – pancha should post more frequently…
My heart – and perhaps make the chapters longer…
Good chapter, loving your story, at first reading the summary, I thought punch was a drink being thrown… heh.
great as always..thanks
Pancha-nice very nice. Bette is as thick as a ton of bricks. Why doesn’t she just pee on Tina and get it over with. Tina loves it, that’s what she loves about Bette. These two will never get it right will they?
“T, I love you”… anger can be a liberating emotion at times.
Bette’s head is thick as a brick!