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What is love? – Chapter 31
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the Honeymoon
Bette’s main responsibility was to choose and reserve the chapel where they were to be married and engaging all the honeymoon spots. She reserved the beach house, which they loved, made plane reservations for Hawaii and got a room in a Honolulu hotel for the first few days and one on Maui they would go to later.
She had seen the beach chapel before, but she and Tina had driven there to see that they both approved. Tina hadn’t wanted to go at first because she was so busy.
“Bette, if you chose it, I know it’s perfect.”
“T, I want to make certain that you like it.”
So they had both taken the time to drive up the coast to the chapel. And Tina loved it, just as she said she would.
They were sitting at the Planet one day when Alice started discussing Hawaii as a honeymoon location.
“There’s this terrific nightclub you might want to visit,” Alice smiled at a weary Bette and Tina. Wedding planning had taken a lot out of them.
“It’s called Bouncing Coconuts.”
Bette and Tina both looked at her with raised eyebrows.
“It’s a ***** nightclub and women do the hula bare-breasted.”
“Sounds good, Al,” Bette grinned. But then she noticed that Tina’s smile was forced and that wiped the grin from her face.
“Baby?” Bette said.
“Let’s go, Bette.” Tina said as she got up and left the table quickly.
“Sorry, Bette,” said Alice.
“It’s OK.” said Bette, trotting after Tina.
She caught up to Tina and tried to take her arm, but Tina shook it off.
“Couldn’t we go one ***** place where you’re not interested in other women’s *****?”
“Tina, I’m not serious about that. It’s a way I kid youto make you a little jealous.”
“Well, you’ve succeeded,” Tina’s eyes began to fill with tears and she was furious that she had let this get to her.
Bette took her arms and held tightly as Tina tried to squirm away. Finally, Tina quieted.
“T, you’ve got to chill out about these wedding plans. You’re putting too much stress on yourself. You know that I’m completely in love with you.”
Tina reached out for her lover, Bette released Tina’s arms and embraced her girlfriend. They held each other for a few moments in the Planet parking lot.
It was just another day of wedding planning.
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One evening, several days later
“Hey, baby,” said Tina as she walked out to the pool. She had just arrived home after a long day changing her mind about the flowers, picking new arrangements, changing her mind again.
“Want me to get you a drink?”
“Already on my second one,” said Bette, lifting her wine glass.
Tina came back to the pool with a glass of wine and the bottle and sat down with Bette.
“Baby, I’m exhausted.”
“Me, too, T.”
Tina lay down with her head in Bette’s lap and Bette casually played with her hair and smiled tiredly at her lover.
“Baby,” said Bette softly, “thank god we only have to get married once.”
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this story is hillarious :)
really really funny, i love the part: “Alice and Dana began to get a little dizzy seeing Tina’s breasts revealed in so many different ways” – i would actually like it LOL…can’t wait to see how their wedding plans will unfold
i hope that too for them..and gree??? ewww..lol..great as always pancha..im totally addicted to your amazing story..thanks :o)
Well done, love the shopping sauga, it would be funny seeing Tina like that…
This is so much fun. thank you.
yeah i’m with Dainty, this is so much fun to read…y is Shane not mentioned in the planning?..she is definitely gonna be in charge of hair and make up right?
Insecurity may be a problem, but a little jealousy is spice to love. I do enjoy it.Green + white? Emmm… difficult to imagine… It reminds me of some summer ball, like Scarlet in Gone With the Wind. I think yellow + white is better, like golden + silver, hoho.
I just can’t get enough of these two!!
fergz – youll like this one. they talk about tinas breasts making them dizzy. now im dizzy.pancha – i think you have my number. the visuals you filling my head is making my head heavy. you are funny and cute ooops i mean this story. thanks,
Great. That killed any desire I ever had about getting married. Well not really but that wore me out just reading it. :P
Hey pancha, new fan here! *Waves* I must say that I love your story! I’ve read each chapter and it was an absolute pleasure to watch (read) B&T’s relationship blossom, as well as each of them grow and mature. Your writing style is honest and true to real life and I really like it. Thanks for sharing your talents with us! I look forward to reading more of your work. I know there are more great things to come. :)
they are still so cute together. I would of thought that Bette would freak out during the wedding planning evident from the ‘moving in’ experience, but shes taking it quite well. She just like a guy, whatever the girl wants, goes.
This was a very cute post and Alice just cracks me up.
This is great pancha weddings are so much fun to plan NOT!!!!
bette and tina getting married so soondid i miss a chapter.i hope after sevenyears bette does’nt get a itch she hasto go scratch ,aka candace jewel or anyother women who thinks she is hot.
LOL~ this is hilarious!!!! i juz love the part where Al and Dana got a shock when Tina joked about the green satin material for bridesmaid!! LOL~~
This chapter is so funny and love it. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I was exhausted just reading it! but im sure it will all be worth it….especially with Alice on boared… could almost see their faces when Tina mentioned bridesmaid dresses…love it
This chapter made me laugh.I enjoyed reading about the wedding plans.Can’t wait to see how you write the wedding and honeymoon.
“bouncing coconuts” DAMN!!!!! that’s hilarious and i wouldn’t doubt that being a real titty bar!!! ***a girl can only dream. HHHMMMM*** beautiful chap as always. poor al and dane those shopping days are torture 4 everybody. please post soon PEACE.
Bouncing Coconuts..lmao..Loved this chapter..albeez knows me well…pancha, your story just gets better and better. OH..and is albeez flirting? ; )
this is the first of your pieces i’ve read and i’m off to catch up – this is really funny and i like it a lot