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What is love? – Chapter 35
Bette rummaged through the suitcases until she found sleep wear. She went to Tina whom she had put on the bed, undressed her and put the pajamas on her. She put a pillow under Tina’s head, pulled the covers over her and turned out the bed lamp on her side of the bed. She brushed hair from her face again and kissed her softly on the face.
After Bette showered, she sat in a chair close to the bed where she could watch Tina. Earlier while searching for something for Tina to wear, she had found a white, very revealing negligee. Bette raised her eyebrows, grinned and carefully put it back into the suitcase. “Tomorrow night,” she whispered to herself, imagining how incredibly beautiful Tina would look. She had never worn this kind of thing for Bette and Bette was both pleased and touched..
She opened the sliding door to the patio so she could hear the surf and smell the salt air. And sat down in the same chair near the bed and looked at Tina who was illuminated by the moonlight.
For a while she watched Tina and was overwhelmed by how much she loved her. It wasn’t necessary to touch her to know exactly how she feltsmelled… tasted. She looked at Tina who looked more unconsciousness than asleep. She smiled with amusement and love at her lovergirlfriendwife.
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As she watched Tina, her thoughts drifted back to last night and her escape from her suite. Bette had waited until the guys in her suite had left for a meeting in Alice’s room. They thought she was asleep, but she had overheard them talking.
When she was sure that all had left, she put on an old gray sweatshirt that came almost to her knees. It had long sleeves and a widely-cut neck, and hid enough of her sleeping clothes that anyone glancing at her might think she was going to work out at the motel gym.
Bette checked the hallway which was clear and ran softly to the stair well. It was too dangerous, she thought, to take the elevator. She began descending the stairs.
“Good evening,” she said graciously to a an older couple as she passed them on the stairs.
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(72 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5)
aww…that was funny and sweet :)
“I do… I do… I do… I do! I do! I do!………. ”..LMAO..so fucking funny..and so fucking beautiful..2 soul in one..great as always pancha post soon thanks
Funny and lovely all in one. They love each other so very much. I want to know who signs that song, don’t think I’ve heard it. Thanks for the post.
this is soooo sweet! thanks
Sorry I wasn’t clear, I meant I never heard of the kissing of the bride tradition.
a nice balance of charm and love. b’s thoughts r precious and i can understand y this would be the best night of her life….
i think it was wonderful too, i love this story pancha, after bette discovered that she was in love, she’s just became such a romantic softy, so in love with tina that even night like this seem wonderful…this story is wonderful
Man I really suck at mysteries. How could I have not known Dana was a checkpoint of sorts? This chapter was too sweet. I think it’s just what I needed to help cure the awful headache I have right now.
Haha, I think Tee will cry tomorrow morning for missing something at her wedding night. =P
that was so fucking good mate !!!! sexy and funny — excellent stuff
y do i have a huge assed grin on my face?pancha u just keep outdoing yourself each time. this is funny, sweet, sexy, fun. the balance we all need. thanks.
your best chapter of the series – sweet and warm and beautiful
That ending was so romantic!
Your story was so sweet and loving. The way Bette just sat watching her wife reflecting on the previous night and anticipating tomorrow, the 1st day as married lovers. Just beautiful. Now let’s get to the honeymoon. SEX! SEX!SEX!!!!!
I think it was wonderful too, so much better than just describing rip-roaring sex. So tender. So sweet. I’m a litte verklempt. You’ve done it again! Talk amongst your(self), Pancha, I’ll give you a topic: Honeymoon is neither honey nor a moon. Discuss. I really do have a hint of a tear in my right eye. Could this story get much better? Thanks for diverting us to the previous night. How unexpected, how wonderful!
Another great chapter pancha can’t wait for your next post!!
What an enjoyable contrast Bette all bothered by people kissing Tina at the reception to the joy and love she feels watching T sleep. Thanks for the post.
It was wonderful.A tipsy tina is a funny tina. Finally they are married and together forever… let the good times roll!
aw tina was drunk as a skunk and bette took care of her.man that bette porteris something special.
dana who would have though funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is so fucking hot and sweet and funny, love it. They are wonderful couple, love them. Post soon please, thanks!
wow…such strong love and emotions. love. it!!!!!!!!! post soon….u are great!!
Bette really is in love. It’s so sweet that she considers looking after Tina on their wedding night as wonderful. Such a tender and loving chapter, pancha. And thanks for clearing up how Bette and Tina pulled off being together the night before the ceremony! :)
Another great chapter…looking forward to the honeymoon…post soon please and thanks a bunch for posting.
This has to be the best wedding night anyone has ever written.
Okay…just caught up with this story, and I adore it. So sweet, so fun. :)