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What is love? – Chapter 35
“Good evening,” the couple responded courteously with their surprise well-hidden.
Bette continued casually down the stairs with as much dignity as anyone could manage who was barefooted and wearing a sweatshirt and pajamas. She was mercifully alone on reaching the first floor.
When she looked through the window on stair well door to the first floor, she pulled back immediately. She had seen Tammy, Alice’s girlfriend, disappear into a utility room of some kind. So Bette steamed as she waited for Tammy to leaveand waited. “*****!” Bette said to herself. “What’s she doing? The laundry?” Finally, Tammy emerged holding soft drinks and snacks..
When Tammy got on the elevator, Bette ran quietly on her bare feet to Tina’s suite and let herself in with the key card that Tina had slipped her during the rehearsal.
Dana jumped up from the sofa and Bette was startled because she hadn’t expected anyone to be here.
“Shhhhhhhh,” cautioned Bette and Dana looked at her wildly.
“You can’t be here,” said Dana.
“Sure I can. Tina and I need to be together and we’re going to be,” explained Bette, calmly.
“If I let you do this, they will know and Alice will make my life so miserable.”
“Nooooooo,” said Bette soothingly. “They will never suspect you. You are the least likely person to be involved in something like this. You’re a classic non-suspect.”
Dana recognized the truth of that statement. “But how could I be in this suite and not see you come in?” Dana said worriedly.
“You’ll go back into your bedroom and take a shower,” Bette explained, thinking quickly. “Stay in there until you hear them come back and then you walk out of the bathroom as though you just finished.”
“You could be a master criminal,” said Dana, admiringly.
“True.”
Bette then went quietly into Tina’s bedroom and closed the door softly and locked it. As she turned around she felt Tina’s arms go around her neck and her lips found Bette’s. They kissed hungrily as though they had only been separated far more than one night. Tina pulled away momentarily.
“What kept you?” she said throatily to Bette.
“I had to run through a mine field And I had to neutralize Dana And I did for you,” Bette explained as she stroked Tina’s naked body and kissed her between sentences.
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(72 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5)
aww…that was funny and sweet :)
“I do… I do… I do… I do! I do! I do!………. ”..LMAO..so fucking funny..and so fucking beautiful..2 soul in one..great as always pancha post soon thanks
Funny and lovely all in one. They love each other so very much. I want to know who signs that song, don’t think I’ve heard it. Thanks for the post.
this is soooo sweet! thanks
Sorry I wasn’t clear, I meant I never heard of the kissing of the bride tradition.
a nice balance of charm and love. b’s thoughts r precious and i can understand y this would be the best night of her life….
i think it was wonderful too, i love this story pancha, after bette discovered that she was in love, she’s just became such a romantic softy, so in love with tina that even night like this seem wonderful…this story is wonderful
Man I really suck at mysteries. How could I have not known Dana was a checkpoint of sorts? This chapter was too sweet. I think it’s just what I needed to help cure the awful headache I have right now.
Haha, I think Tee will cry tomorrow morning for missing something at her wedding night. =P
that was so fucking good mate !!!! sexy and funny — excellent stuff
y do i have a huge assed grin on my face?pancha u just keep outdoing yourself each time. this is funny, sweet, sexy, fun. the balance we all need. thanks.
your best chapter of the series – sweet and warm and beautiful
That ending was so romantic!
Your story was so sweet and loving. The way Bette just sat watching her wife reflecting on the previous night and anticipating tomorrow, the 1st day as married lovers. Just beautiful. Now let’s get to the honeymoon. SEX! SEX!SEX!!!!!
I think it was wonderful too, so much better than just describing rip-roaring sex. So tender. So sweet. I’m a litte verklempt. You’ve done it again! Talk amongst your(self), Pancha, I’ll give you a topic: Honeymoon is neither honey nor a moon. Discuss. I really do have a hint of a tear in my right eye. Could this story get much better? Thanks for diverting us to the previous night. How unexpected, how wonderful!
Another great chapter pancha can’t wait for your next post!!
What an enjoyable contrast Bette all bothered by people kissing Tina at the reception to the joy and love she feels watching T sleep. Thanks for the post.
It was wonderful.A tipsy tina is a funny tina. Finally they are married and together forever… let the good times roll!
aw tina was drunk as a skunk and bette took care of her.man that bette porteris something special.
dana who would have though funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is so fucking hot and sweet and funny, love it. They are wonderful couple, love them. Post soon please, thanks!
wow…such strong love and emotions. love. it!!!!!!!!! post soon….u are great!!
Bette really is in love. It’s so sweet that she considers looking after Tina on their wedding night as wonderful. Such a tender and loving chapter, pancha. And thanks for clearing up how Bette and Tina pulled off being together the night before the ceremony! :)
Another great chapter…looking forward to the honeymoon…post soon please and thanks a bunch for posting.
This has to be the best wedding night anyone has ever written.
Okay…just caught up with this story, and I adore it. So sweet, so fun. :)