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What will she do next-Revised chapter 24
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Bette spoke first. “T?”
“Yeah babe?”
“What’s got into us lately?”
“I dunno, but I like ita lot. No, scratch thatI love it. Whydoes it bother you?”
“Noo, not at all,” Bette answered a little shyly, “It’s justit seems to have happened all of a sudden, don’t you think?”
“Bette don’t thinkjust feel,” Tina said as she began rubbing herself into Bette’s hand again. Knowing they were short on time, Bette pulled Tina in for a vicious kiss that combined with her hand movements had the effect of sending Tina off once more.
**
They arrived at the beach twenty minutes late and Tina had hoped to use the excuse of delays at the airport. However, Alice took one look at Tina and immediately picked up on her post orgasmic blush and loudly stated the obvious, much to Tina’s dismay.
“Jeesh, must you two always have ***** when you’re meant to be meeting your friends?”
The comment did not help with Tina’s colour any. Bette rushed in to save her lover from further embarrassment.
“Okay well we’re here now,” she said taking Angelica from Shane,” “Where are we heading Alice?”
Shane answered, “We’re to meet Carmen on the beach front, she’s set up a stall or something down there.”
“And what’s this for?” Bette continued ***** her face up in confusion.
“It’s some rite of passage in memory of her father, the Shamen and she does this every year so it’s very important to her okay, guys?” Shane said the last part and looked pointedly at Alice.
“What?” Alice replied, “I haven’t done anything.”
“Yet.” Shane answered.
They all began their slow walk down in the sand towards where they thought Carmen might be when Shane spoke again.
“Ah, Alice?”
“Yeah what now?” she answered a little crankily.
“Dana and Lara should be there too.” Shane said softly and the group fell silent.
Alice brushed it off. “It is still a free country, is it not?” she replied and everyone wasn’t sure if she was angry or not.
They continued walking on in silence until they came upon another obstacle that this time shook everyone up.
Alice, who had been slightly ahead of the group, saw it first and immediately whipped her head round to gauge Tina’s reaction. Slowly Shane and Tina recognized the sight that lay ahead of them and all looked to Bette for her response. As she was still carrying Angelica her view had been initially obstructed, but eventually she too noticed the attractive woman standing a few feet in front of them.
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WOAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Jesus Mary and Joeseh that was HOT. Will you marry me? lol
OMClit I once was blind but now I can see…Your Tina is freaking scary and hot and scary and hot and scary and hot wow crush you gave me goose bumps.
wow..fucking sensual and HOT!!!..Tina have nothing to worried now and Bette as well they are solid..so and about the wedding? is goin to be a wedding??..great chapter post soon thanks :o)
This Tina and bette are the Same just a wee bit different. Tina seems to know that Bette loves her and Angie more than life. That was hot. you did real well on it. thanks
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome. Tina is a little crazy and play game with Bette, this is freak and hot to. Post soon please, thanks!
I’ve enjoyed this story since the beginning, but don’t think I have commented before. I’m always pleased when I see you have posted a new chapter. Thanks.
oh my god that was just a-bloody-mazing. i was really worried but Tina was sensational. Any chnace the scriptwriters will ever allow these two that level of understanding and peace. that was just brilliant !!
fantastic!!!!!!! glad the girls are on solid ground and quit rehashing the past–what do you have planned for the future of our girls –maybe baby 2 and let bette carry this time
Oh Wow!!!! Tina is just a little bit of a freak isn’t she. But HOT nevertheless and loves Bette to death. When they were on the beach, I was afraid of what Tina might do, like take the baby and leave. The ground should have opened up and swallowed Candyass. Thanks for the post. post soon please.
Super, super hot!!! More really soon
that was a close one, but we know that bette only loves tina, so no worries there, i like how you finished both part with the same statement reversed…both of them passed a test, so what’s next? oh, forgot to mention it was hot, especially NY
One can only hope that S3 is this good!! I will do the dance of joy!
I am now going to leave a message…please don’t let that be your last nc-17…I am off to the shower now…post soon
good closure to the candance incident.
Why stop the NC 17’s? That was hot beyond words.I need a cold shower.
Now that was HOT!!! You’re good.
I guess I can close my mouth now!
**BLANK** I DON’T THINK I CA COMPREHEND ANY WORDS RIGHT NOW EXCEPT. DAMN!!!!!!! YOU INCLUDED CANDACE, TENSION, HOT SCENES, AND BEAUTIFUL MOMENTS AFTER A TRULY AWESOME CHAP. AS USUAL. WITHOUT A DOUBT YOU ARE ONE OF THE GREAT WRITERS ON THIS SITE.
*SNAP*, *SNAP*, *SNAP* 3 SNAPS IN Z-FORMATION, 3 CHEERS, 1,001 KISSES *MWAH* AND ALL THAT GOOD SHIT.
FABULOUS AS ALWAYS. LOVED IT.
This was an awesome chapter. I love your Tina. I think you have captured what we all hope season 3 Tina turns out to be. I hope. I don’t mind the B&T drama if they could just get here in the end!!
Tina in control, always HOT! Thanks for the great chapter.