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    What will she do next-Revised chapter 24

    Story written on October 23, 2005 by crushonlu.
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    Chapter 24- Going with the flow part II

    Candace turned slowly when she realised that she had an audience. She stood there all toned and bronzed wearing a light brown bikini covered by a matching sarong. She could feel the group’s eyes as they roamed over her body, starting with her toned thighs, taut abdomen and her strong muscled arms.

    Tina watched Bette carefully with a strange look upon her face.

    Shane and Alice watched Bette and Tina as if they were watching tennis moving their heads back and forth between the two women. And when Candace finally decided to break the silence, Shane and Alice included her in this three-way tennis match.

    “Hi Bette.” She spoke softly, “Tina.”

    “Hello Candace,” Tina spoke, as Bette seemed incapable of coherent speech.

    Candace spoke again quickly when she realised that the situation could turn unpleasant.
    “I’d like to introduce my partner, Maria.” She said pointing down to another attractive dark haired woman lounging on a deck chair in the sand.

    “Hi,” Maria said without bothering to get up and turning her head back so that she could recapture the sun’s rays.

    Finally Bette spoke, but not before taking a quick glance at Tina.

    “This is our daughter, Angelica.” She blurted out.

    “She’s very beautiful, just like her mothers.” Candace replied calmly, wondering what she could do to make the awkward situation less awkward.

    Tina chuckled softly at Candace’s words, and Alice whispered softly to Shane.

    “Oh shithere it comes” Shane just stood there open mouthed and with round eyes.

    “Well” Tina calmly began again, “we should continue, if we don’t want to be late” she addressed the group but continued to look at Bette carefully.

    Not once did Bette’s eyes leave Candace’s as she hugged Angelica tightly and moved closer to Tina to resume their march through the sand. Alice and Shane both released the breaths that they had been holding as they started to walk again.
    Suddenly Candace called out softly, causing the group to whip their heads back round.

    “Bette,” she spoke, “It was good to see you again,” and with that she took her place next to Maria in the sand.

    **

    Tina remained quiet for the remainder of the afternoon and well into the evening, and Bette was not the only one to notice this.

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    2. OMClit I once was blind but now I can see…Your Tina is freaking scary and hot and scary and hot and scary and hot wow crush you gave me goose bumps.

    3. wow..fucking sensual and HOT!!!..Tina have nothing to worried now and Bette as well they are solid..so and about the wedding? is goin to be a wedding??..great chapter post soon thanks :o)

    4. This Tina and bette are the Same just a wee bit different. Tina seems to know that Bette loves her and Angie more than life. That was hot. you did real well on it. thanks

    6. I’ve enjoyed this story since the beginning, but don’t think I have commented before. I’m always pleased when I see you have posted a new chapter. Thanks.

    7. oh my god that was just a-bloody-mazing. i was really worried but Tina was sensational. Any chnace the scriptwriters will ever allow these two that level of understanding and peace. that was just brilliant !!

    8. fantastic!!!!!!! glad the girls are on solid ground and quit rehashing the past–what do you have planned for the future of our girls –maybe baby 2 and let bette carry this time

    9. Oh Wow!!!! Tina is just a little bit of a freak isn’t she. But HOT nevertheless and loves Bette to death. When they were on the beach, I was afraid of what Tina might do, like take the baby and leave. The ground should have opened up and swallowed Candyass. Thanks for the post. post soon please.

    11. that was a close one, but we know that bette only loves tina, so no worries there, i like how you finished both part with the same statement reversed…both of them passed a test, so what’s next? oh, forgot to mention it was hot, especially NY

    18. **BLANK** I DON’T THINK I CA COMPREHEND ANY WORDS RIGHT NOW EXCEPT. DAMN!!!!!!! YOU INCLUDED CANDACE, TENSION, HOT SCENES, AND BEAUTIFUL MOMENTS AFTER A TRULY AWESOME CHAP. AS USUAL. WITHOUT A DOUBT YOU ARE ONE OF THE GREAT WRITERS ON THIS SITE.

      *SNAP*, *SNAP*, *SNAP* 3 SNAPS IN Z-FORMATION, 3 CHEERS, 1,001 KISSES *MWAH* AND ALL THAT GOOD SHIT.

      FABULOUS AS ALWAYS. LOVED IT.

    19. This was an awesome chapter. I love your Tina. I think you have captured what we all hope season 3 Tina turns out to be. I hope. I don’t mind the B&T drama if they could just get here in the end!!

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