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What will she do next-Revised chapter 25
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Chapter 25 – All about T(he End)
Tina had five erogenous zones, and Bette had found all of them, on her own, without the need for directions.
That was how well Bette knew Tina and her body.
As Tina lay exhausted and breathless on her back in their bed next to Bette, each one of those zones had been teased and stimulated beyond her normal tolerance level, and Tina found herself wondering if they had taught Bette about the Karma Sutra and Tantric lovemaking whilst she had been away on retreat.
Bette was still the old Bette; dynamic, passionate, focussed and a little blinkered to things going on right in front of her nose.
But now, she was so much more.
At first, because of Angelica’s illness, Tina hadn’t noticed. It seemed to have begun with their increased lovemaking, something that Tina had always wanted, as she found that she could never get enough of Bette.
When their ***** life had previously started to fail a little, Tina got it into her head that Bette did not desire her the same, or perhaps that Bette had felt she was too inexperienced. It was no wonder that Tina had reacted the way that she did when she found out about the affairas to Tina, the fact that Bette had the affair was due to the fact that Bette must have found ***** with Tina boring.
Or so Tina had thought at the time.
Tina’s entire body was tingling, and even though her mind knew that she could take no more, she also knew that if Bette was to reach out and touch one of those zones again, her body would instantly react and she would not be able to refuse whatever was to come.
‘I wonder if a person can die from being over stimulated?’ Tina asked herself while turning her head to look at her just as exhausted partner.
The other new thing that she had noticed about Bette was that she listened to Tina, really listened. Not that condescending thing that she used to do when she was impatient or bored with what Tina had to say.
No, this was sitting down looking deep in the eyes kind of listening. Even if Tina was just going over the shopping list and happened to ask Bette’s opinion on whether they should have shallots or spring onions, Bette would walk right up to Tina and gaze at her intensely as they gently debated the numerous uses of the two types of onions.
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Oh My God you just didn’t do that.
EEEKK!!! Okay..wow, what an ending..im confused now.*lol* But me likes…
I never commented before but i guess I was just too hooked waitin on chappys to write somethin instead…but now that its done ..just wanted to say a big ‘Thank You’ for this reading pleasure you provided.:-D
Oh and always pick challots over spring onions!! ;-)
WHAT?????..ok mean woman..why did you make so happy and then took away that happiness from me???..lol..can you please continue with a not ambiguous end???? please…
i’m kinda confused too, but at least you didn’t kill bette off…thanks for this story, i hope you’ll write another one
WHAT??!!!! a cliff hanger at the end of the story? so does Tina just leave after seemingly falling in love all over again? It just doesn’t make sense. well it’s your story.
WTF!!!!!!!!!!! you better not kill bette ever!!!!!!!!! explain the end
Well, um, now that was quite an ending. I think I liked it. Great story Crush and since I”m a romantic too I’m glad you didn’t kill Bette off or do anything else that drastic. Please come back with a new story.
Okay um I’m little confused and really want to know what’s going, is Bette gonna die or Tina. Well I guess they not died and Tina ask Bette to marry her again. Ok thanks for sharing your story and hope you wil have a new one coming soon!
Is this the first time for the rings? If so, I’m assuming that Tina was asking Bette or confirming to Bette that they reunite.
Yeah…that’s how it ends in my version. Happily ever after. Good!
Whoa! after All of that aegis! well Thanks for your Wonderful Story yep I’m agree with tylo LOL! Thank Gosh you don’t kill Bette again Thank you I hope that you continue Writing another Story Thanks!!
I like the ending…we get to decide how it ends…I say Tina gave the rings to Bette to let her know she is ready to commit to her again..thats how I see it but then again I am a sucker for happy B&T endings. Thanks a bunch for this story and hope you continue to wright for this fanfic site.
I LOVED IT! What more is there to say?
This story has had us sitting on the edge of our seats since it began, and you have kept us there all the way through. I must say that after catching up on the chapters from the last two weeks, I went from mad as things changed again, to worried, to confused, to oh yes she’s bringing this back around. Then finally to happy dance as our two girls finally figured it out. That no matter what life through at them as long as they had each other they’d make it through. Fantastic story, and the ending even though we always want more, Tina, the rings, its says it all.
Crush,
Thank you for this wondrous adventure. I would have liked it to continue but appreciate your candor at stopping it now.
Maybe you will, given time, want to ride this steam boat again for a new adventure.
Much gratitude,
A Loyal Fan.
i’m usually a silent reader, but I just had to thank u for the ride! i feel an epilogue is coming….
and lastly….. THANX
i’m sorry if this iz typede wrong my heart is still somewhere down in my feet!!!!!!!! OMG i never thought i would read a story as captivating as this but, *blank*!!! (still at a loss for words)man it has been a true pleasure to read and enjoy everyone of your chapters. i can’t tell you ow relieved i was when you didn’t kill bette in a car accident.*PHEW* but please don’t disappear 4eva stick around and type something every once and a while. ipromise i’ll be a good girl and wait for u. **sitting on my hands** peace and farewell.
The rings said I love you will you marry me again,I want to live the rest of my life with you. Thanks