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What will she do next-Revised chapter 25
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On one occasion, Tina had unusually spent the entire day at work because of some crisis and when she finally got through the door had been in a foul mood. She had found Bette already dressed for bed, lying on top of the sheets reading when she walked into their bedroom. Bette had mistakenly asked how her day had been.
It had been the wrong thing to ask as Tina launched into a rant about whether people in local government knew who their fathers were while Bette sat quietly looking on.
Tina must have kept this venting up for a while because when she eventually got it off her chest and turned to face Bette, Bette had the most intense look upon her face was staring attentively at her.
Tina had blushed and had felt suddenly laid bare, somehow exposed.
When Bette did finally speak it was to diffuse the situation.
“So if they knew their father’s would that make your job any easier T?” she asked quite innocently.
Yes, this new Bette was very much improved, and her improvement had improved Tina too. Gone was the passive aggressive ***** that couldn’t make up her mind or who was afraid to contradict or voice any opinions contrary to Bette for fear of upsetting her.
In fact Bette seemed to enjoy when Tina challenged her, a lot. Their fiery and passionate conversations seemed to invigorate their partnership, and once more, Tina felt it.
She felt that Bette was proud to be with her.
Back in their bed however, Tina was insatiable. She turned on her side to watch as Bette controlled her breathing until it normalised, and even though Bette had her eyes closed Tina knew that Bette knew she was looking at her.
“See anything you like?” Bette asked seductively, softly.
“Absolutely,” Tina whispered.
**
And so went their days. Angelica was soon to be a year old and was healthy and happy.
Kit had decided to throw a birthday party at Planet, and was closing the caf for the day. Bette had tried to chastise her at first, stating that profits would suffer, but Kit had reminded her that they were actually doing extremely well and could afford one night off.
“But remember Kit, you’re gonna need to talk to Tina about everything, even the type of birthday cake,” Bette had warned.
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Oh My God you just didn’t do that.
EEEKK!!! Okay..wow, what an ending..im confused now.*lol* But me likes…
I never commented before but i guess I was just too hooked waitin on chappys to write somethin instead…but now that its done ..just wanted to say a big ‘Thank You’ for this reading pleasure you provided.:-D
Oh and always pick challots over spring onions!! ;-)
WHAT?????..ok mean woman..why did you make so happy and then took away that happiness from me???..lol..can you please continue with a not ambiguous end???? please…
i’m kinda confused too, but at least you didn’t kill bette off…thanks for this story, i hope you’ll write another one
WHAT??!!!! a cliff hanger at the end of the story? so does Tina just leave after seemingly falling in love all over again? It just doesn’t make sense. well it’s your story.
WTF!!!!!!!!!!! you better not kill bette ever!!!!!!!!! explain the end
Well, um, now that was quite an ending. I think I liked it. Great story Crush and since I”m a romantic too I’m glad you didn’t kill Bette off or do anything else that drastic. Please come back with a new story.
Okay um I’m little confused and really want to know what’s going, is Bette gonna die or Tina. Well I guess they not died and Tina ask Bette to marry her again. Ok thanks for sharing your story and hope you wil have a new one coming soon!
Is this the first time for the rings? If so, I’m assuming that Tina was asking Bette or confirming to Bette that they reunite.
Yeah…that’s how it ends in my version. Happily ever after. Good!
Whoa! after All of that aegis! well Thanks for your Wonderful Story yep I’m agree with tylo LOL! Thank Gosh you don’t kill Bette again Thank you I hope that you continue Writing another Story Thanks!!
I like the ending…we get to decide how it ends…I say Tina gave the rings to Bette to let her know she is ready to commit to her again..thats how I see it but then again I am a sucker for happy B&T endings. Thanks a bunch for this story and hope you continue to wright for this fanfic site.
I LOVED IT! What more is there to say?
This story has had us sitting on the edge of our seats since it began, and you have kept us there all the way through. I must say that after catching up on the chapters from the last two weeks, I went from mad as things changed again, to worried, to confused, to oh yes she’s bringing this back around. Then finally to happy dance as our two girls finally figured it out. That no matter what life through at them as long as they had each other they’d make it through. Fantastic story, and the ending even though we always want more, Tina, the rings, its says it all.
Crush,
Thank you for this wondrous adventure. I would have liked it to continue but appreciate your candor at stopping it now.
Maybe you will, given time, want to ride this steam boat again for a new adventure.
Much gratitude,
A Loyal Fan.
i’m usually a silent reader, but I just had to thank u for the ride! i feel an epilogue is coming….
and lastly….. THANX
i’m sorry if this iz typede wrong my heart is still somewhere down in my feet!!!!!!!! OMG i never thought i would read a story as captivating as this but, *blank*!!! (still at a loss for words)man it has been a true pleasure to read and enjoy everyone of your chapters. i can’t tell you ow relieved i was when you didn’t kill bette in a car accident.*PHEW* but please don’t disappear 4eva stick around and type something every once and a while. ipromise i’ll be a good girl and wait for u. **sitting on my hands** peace and farewell.
The rings said I love you will you marry me again,I want to live the rest of my life with you. Thanks