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What will she do next-Revised chapter 25
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The room watched as the two women embraced and began swaying to more the words that the music.
Shane and Carmen had moved over to Alice’s position so that they could speak to her.
“Damn!” said Carmen, “look at that!”
“Yeah,” replied Shane, “That’s always been there, well, that’s what I’ve always seen,” she said softly. “What do you think Alice? Alice?”
Alice sat quietly with a smile on her face and tears in her eyes, genuinely happy for her friends.
“Finally,” she sighed contentedly
**
Bette awoke alone in their bed. She felt Tina’s side and found that it was cold.
‘Strange,’ Bette thought. She could usually tell whenever Tina left, as she was such a light sleeper.
“T?” she called softly but was met with silence. Bette sighed softly and slowly got out if the bed reluctant to leave it’s comfort, but also curious to know where her partner could be, atshe peered at the bedside clock, ’0612AM, Damn!’ Bette thought in her head.
Walking through the house she listened for sounds of Tina. Angelica was having a sleepover at her Aunt Kit’s so Tina wouldn’t be in her room.
Bette walked into the kitchen and pulled a bottle of water from the fridge, and as she snapped it open and put it to her lips, her eyes came upon a figure sitting on a deck chair by the pool.
Slowly she walked up behind Tina and spoke.
“Tina?”
Tina looked up with tears in her eyes and hurriedly tried to wipe them away.
“T, baby what is it?” Bette felt her heart leap into her stomach at the sight of Tina crying.
Tina quickly composed herself before speaking.
“I know you love me Bette, I feel it, it’s all around me” Bette took a seat on the ground in front of Tina.
“I’m just so afraidafraid of our future, of all the things that we are going to have to face.”
“T” Bette interrupted gently, “…that’s just lifethere’s no getting away from it, we just have to deal with things one day at”
“No Bette, ” Tina started, ” no, you don’t understand, II’m afraid that it might be too late, that I might be too late”
“T?” Bette was confused. It wasn’t often that Tina didn’t make sense, and when it did happen it was because she had been drinking.
Today though, Tina wasn’t drunk. Bette began to shift uncomfortably.
“Bette” Tina spoke softly and reached around to retrieve something from behind her.
She handed the little blue velvet covered box to her soul mate and watched her face carefully as Bette opened the box and looked inside at the two platinum gold band rings.
“Bette?” She asked again.
The End.
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Oh My God you just didn’t do that.
EEEKK!!! Okay..wow, what an ending..im confused now.*lol* But me likes…
I never commented before but i guess I was just too hooked waitin on chappys to write somethin instead…but now that its done ..just wanted to say a big ‘Thank You’ for this reading pleasure you provided.:-D
Oh and always pick challots over spring onions!! ;-)
WHAT?????..ok mean woman..why did you make so happy and then took away that happiness from me???..lol..can you please continue with a not ambiguous end???? please…
i’m kinda confused too, but at least you didn’t kill bette off…thanks for this story, i hope you’ll write another one
WHAT??!!!! a cliff hanger at the end of the story? so does Tina just leave after seemingly falling in love all over again? It just doesn’t make sense. well it’s your story.
WTF!!!!!!!!!!! you better not kill bette ever!!!!!!!!! explain the end
Well, um, now that was quite an ending. I think I liked it. Great story Crush and since I”m a romantic too I’m glad you didn’t kill Bette off or do anything else that drastic. Please come back with a new story.
Okay um I’m little confused and really want to know what’s going, is Bette gonna die or Tina. Well I guess they not died and Tina ask Bette to marry her again. Ok thanks for sharing your story and hope you wil have a new one coming soon!
Is this the first time for the rings? If so, I’m assuming that Tina was asking Bette or confirming to Bette that they reunite.
Yeah…that’s how it ends in my version. Happily ever after. Good!
Whoa! after All of that aegis! well Thanks for your Wonderful Story yep I’m agree with tylo LOL! Thank Gosh you don’t kill Bette again Thank you I hope that you continue Writing another Story Thanks!!
I like the ending…we get to decide how it ends…I say Tina gave the rings to Bette to let her know she is ready to commit to her again..thats how I see it but then again I am a sucker for happy B&T endings. Thanks a bunch for this story and hope you continue to wright for this fanfic site.
I LOVED IT! What more is there to say?
This story has had us sitting on the edge of our seats since it began, and you have kept us there all the way through. I must say that after catching up on the chapters from the last two weeks, I went from mad as things changed again, to worried, to confused, to oh yes she’s bringing this back around. Then finally to happy dance as our two girls finally figured it out. That no matter what life through at them as long as they had each other they’d make it through. Fantastic story, and the ending even though we always want more, Tina, the rings, its says it all.
Crush,
Thank you for this wondrous adventure. I would have liked it to continue but appreciate your candor at stopping it now.
Maybe you will, given time, want to ride this steam boat again for a new adventure.
Much gratitude,
A Loyal Fan.
i’m usually a silent reader, but I just had to thank u for the ride! i feel an epilogue is coming….
and lastly….. THANX
i’m sorry if this iz typede wrong my heart is still somewhere down in my feet!!!!!!!! OMG i never thought i would read a story as captivating as this but, *blank*!!! (still at a loss for words)man it has been a true pleasure to read and enjoy everyone of your chapters. i can’t tell you ow relieved i was when you didn’t kill bette in a car accident.*PHEW* but please don’t disappear 4eva stick around and type something every once and a while. ipromise i’ll be a good girl and wait for u. **sitting on my hands** peace and farewell.
The rings said I love you will you marry me again,I want to live the rest of my life with you. Thanks