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When It All Became 8.5
got my words in, though. Before all, I was able to talk to Tina. But did she hear me? She’s not here. She’s out, and she’s out with her.
*****!
Bette remained on the couch, drowning in her thoughts for what seemed like an eternity. The door opened. Tina entered. Bette let out a breath as she realized that Tina was alone. The alternative would have been beyond the pale.
Although she was alone, the damage had been done. It was too late to pretend otherwise. "You did it." I couldn’t have kept the words in if I’d tried.
"You went out with Helena Peabody while you’re living in our home." I didn’t try. She knew what she was doing to me, to us, to our baby.
And she thinks she can get out of that now by just walking away. She barely slowed to my words. She just kept walking away.
But damn it, I deserve an explanation. Tina knows how I feel about her, and she knows how I feel about that Peabody woman. How could Tina not know?
Bette propelled herself from the couch, bare feet padding after Tina, and caught her just before she entered the guest room. The door jam, a perfect block. She can’t hide. No more hiding. Now she’ll have to talk.
Now she’ll have to understand that this can’t be. She can’t want this, not while the two of us are under the same roof. I won’t let this happen. Now while the two of us still have a chance. "You can’t want her. You’re living here."
Tina turns before me, brushing against me. I feel her, and our baby within her.
"I’m staying here. I’ll be moving out as soon as I can." How can she say these things? It’s as if this doesn’t affect her. As if she doesn’t care what she’s doing to us, to the possibility that there remains an us.
Damn it! Tina don’t cheat me on this! "For her? Is that why you want to be out of our home?"
I see her, take in all of her. It’s the first time I’ve been this close since the news of the baby. She’s beautiful. Still dressed from the party, the black dress accenting her *****, her body. Hiding nothing. Absolutely ***** beautiful.
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(122 votes, average: 3.42 out of 5)
No this isn’t over and now it time to fight and win Tina back. This is so emotion and amazing chapter, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
Thank you to all who have commented. I truly treasure all comments.
Wayout – please do NOT apologize for what you wrote here, or in the other story. This story is meant to be unsettling. It’s not particularly flattering to Bette. I did write it to be “provocative” (so to speak).
For those seeking more, this was intended as a one-off (two-off?) what if. Well, part 8 was. Part 8.5 occurred because I thought more did need to be said.
Again, Thank you all (and I hope some of you see this comment.)
I certanly hope this isn’t ove. please post more. :D
Great writing, you have described their thoughts so well, powerful stuff. I like the different POVs. Please post more of this.
WOW that was an amazingly different POV. Your writing is just brilliant,please post soon.
Very nice read…Bette..coming to her senses….Please post soon…:)
Good writing..please more.
Fantastic!! This line is perfect: “I love her so much. How can I love her so wrong?” Excellent. I do feel a fool for my comments on the previous chapter, but I guess that’s the idea of looking at life from different points of view. You definitely posted in the right order, too. These stories are so good. Thank you!