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When You Least Expect It – Chapter 19
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“Who is it?” She asked timidly as she peeked through the peephole. She instantly recognized the man from a previous time he had left Bette and Tina’s house, knowing him to be Angie’s biological father.
“It’s Kevin. Angie’s dad”
Figuring he had simply mixed up the schedule he had with Tina, Lucy opened the door in an effort to explain it to him.
“Hi, um Tina and Bette aren’t here. I think you might have your day with Angie mixed up”
He seemed genuinely surprised at her words, his eyebrows raised in shock. “Tina didn’t call you? She said she would call”
With a shake of his head, he reached inside his pants to retrieve his phone leaving Lucy with a confused expression on her face.
“Call me for what?”
Kevin glanced up from his phone and pointed a finger at her, “You’re Lucy right? Yeah, Tina said she would call you to say that I was going to take Angie for the night. I’m gonna be out of town next week on the days I usually spend with Angie so Tina suggested that I could take her now”
It was a story that was believable enough but the teenager felt as though something was off especially given the fact that when she checked her phone for missed messages, she had none. Tina would never have forgotten to mention such an important piece of information.
She gripped the doorknob and squeezed tight.
Seeing the wheels turning inside Lucy’s head, Kevin held up his phone. “I could call her if you want, you know if it would make you feel better”
With a breath of relief she nodded and watched as Kevin scrolled through his phone before bringing it up to his ear.
“I hope she doesn’t get mad. I know she‘s at an important party-oh hey, Tina”
Lucy bit on her thumbnail at the mention of Tina being upset. She truly liked Tina and would hate to be the reason for her bad mood. Lucy just wanted proof to Kevin’s claim, hoping that it wouldn’t jeopardize her babysitting Angie in the future.
“… no, she’s right here” Kevin met Lucy’s gaze, a look of pity flashing across his face. “It’s not her fault, she had no idea. She said she didn’t get a call or text from you”
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Hi! Thank you for the chapter and glad you feel better now!
So, after ending chapter like that i hope you fix it in next chapet. Yeah?
And about Kevin – bad, bad choise he did.
Waiting impatiently for the next!
I am very happy you are nursed back to health Liah!!!
You definately know how to build up the a chapter, a lot of hot and steamy love between Bette &Tina to end up with a big bang!
It was expected that Kevin would take Angie and i think he tries to win Tina back by making her choose between her daughter and him and Bette.
I find him disgusting and a totally ass, a utter shame for the human race.
Please, i beg you to update soon and make this nightmare go away and let Angie return save to her mother and Bette.
I’ve been checking every now and then to see if you posted. So happy to log in and see that you did. Even happier, that you’re feeling better! Yay.
Liah, I love your stories but I’m sooooo sick of this Kevin. He’s just an ass. What doesn’t he understand? Please fall from the face of the Earth, Kevin. Go. Away. Lol
I know that Bette and Tina will go full on primal to protect baby Angie. I’m hoping that they will have a happy ending. It stings when they have turmoil. Can’t wait for you to update.
This wasn’t a cliff hanger because I was expecting it!
Doesn’t make it any easier to handle though!
Glad you are feeling better.
I really hate Kevin and hope you will post soon and get rid of him in your own talented way!
Thanks for the post.
SG
There’s NO intensity in lovin’ like Tibette intensity!!!! Dios Mio!!!
And then there’ keven. Lawdd dont let Tina get a hold of him!!!!
Great chapter, thank you!
But i hope on the next part Kevin will get what he deserves – jail for a long-long time!
So happy you are feeling better. OMG hot chapter! I hope Kevin gets what he deserves…a long time in jail on kidnapping charges. If he was stupid enough to throw a beer bottle through a restaurant window he is probably driving his own car and will be tracked down by police quickly! What a jerk! PPS
OMG…my heart is breaking right now for poor Tina, THAT DAMN KEVIN…he has got to go!!!!! Jealousy is one thing but to take your child, that barely knows you from her mother’s home without permission out of spite is just plain as EVIL!!! He is going to pay for this dearly because to me that is indeed kidnapping. Please update soon.
I know Tina did not know that he was that unstable or she would not have let him come around Angie. Bette is going to lose it for sure, she LOVE Angie so much too!
All the great sexy time in the limo in the beginning of the chapter, just shocked me for the ending. I knew something was up when you started telling us how good of a babysitter Lucy is… :) All my happy vibes dashed after seeing what CrayCray Kevin plotted. DumbAzz, you can’t make somebody WANT YOU. He needs to go just DIE…just DIE!.
But first get sweet Angie back HOME to Bette and Tina!
Waiting on the edge of my seat! (good writing will do that :))
Well, it was so expected, of course that son of a ….. took her ! what a piece of work !
I’m glad you’re feeling better and you’re forgiven for the time between chapters. I had a lumbar spine surgery like 10 days ago and man is it hard to re accustomed yourself with new habits, physio and all !
Anyway, I hope to read you soon !
Well thank you for a chapter that went from 0 to 60 in the limo.. then down shifted so fast with kevins stupidity.. not sure it was planned but the girl opened the door .. have to say shes not a good babysitter…worried more about Tina being upset with her than to make double sure things where right with Angie. And the hundreds of dollars should have been a tip off.. kids these day lol..
anyway.. not sure how much trouble he will get in. Some states favor the dad no matter what..if his name is on birth certificate he has rights.. sorry hope he’s just taking her to him mom because he’s not interested in Angie anyways just wants to prove his manliness to Tina. And this really helped.. Not!.. lol