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While You Are Sleeping…
My fingers go lower as I let my fingertips graze the hair that nestles that sacred place I liked to visit.
I heard the noise you made in your sleep, that combination of a sigh and a groan…, it made me smile, it made my eyes slowly close and it made me take a deep breath…
It also made my head spin…, that noise you made always sent shivers down my spine…, it made the hairs on the back of my neck stand on end, it made me bring my shoulder blades together to ease that shiver and it made me clench my upper thighs to appease that ache that had begun to slowly burn within me.
Did you know that you do this to me while you are sleeping…?
Did you know that you don’t even need to be awake to have a profound affect on my senses and my body…?
Do you know? I’m sure you do…, because in the past when you have awoken to my kisses, you have touched me and that slow, sleepy smile has appeared on your lips as you feel the effect you’ve had on me…
It’s a different affect that you have on me when you are awake and aware of my exploration, that’s two way because of the things you do to me in return…
But this…, to do this when you are sleeping seems almost wrong because you have no say in what I am doing to you…, there is just me and your sleeping body to devour…
I know that your body reacts…, I can feel it reacting under my touch. I can feel how as my fingers linger over certain spots that your body moves slightly, just the merest movement that tells me you’ve felt my fingertips upon you…
And for me…, it’s the whole body reaction…
But not just the body…, it’s the mind too…, that powerful thing called the mind…
Your sleeping body sends my mind into places that it doesn’t always go when we are both awake…
I kiss the back of your neck as my hand travels lower, the combination of kissing you and touching you…, god there is nothing on this earth that compares…
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Oh…..that was sooooo good.
Okay that was beyond hot!!!!!!!!!
Jo, OMG!!!! That was so erotic and sensual. To here the word Fuck come for Tina’s mouth I mean Damn. Thanks Jo
Wow! you really know how to rock a shorty.
wow, that was beautifully written and so erotic, they had not even kissed. Please do a follow up…
Wow Wow Wow Wow Wow!!! : 0 *Thud* And imagine…nothing even happened yet!
holy hell woman! I love your writing… the imagery so beautifully crafted while also being incredibly freakin’ hot!!
What an amazing, sensual journey on the body of the Loved One ! Thank you, and also thank your Muse for such a vivid inspiration :-)))
damn, i shouldn’t have read it before bed
Excellent as always Mate! Wow…just wow! Thanks JT! LOL!
My goodness, Jo. That was the most amazingly HOT and oh so sensuous chapter that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. It was inded a great pleasure and you once again gave us a glimpse into the writer that is Ms. JoBadge. You are freaking fabulous. All those words and no one had any sex at all. I don’t have enough words to tell you how very much I enjoyed this. It was superb.
Incredibly sexy, sensual, hot, erotic, etc!!!!!!
Ahhhhh even better the second time, loved it…the way your words makes me use my imagination are amazing. It was sensual, beautiful and erotic. Thanks to The SD LOL. xx
Yep that is what Bette was doing. She was getting herself in the right postition to do just that “Fuck”.
Hey JB! I think this one needs to be a two-off or maybe even a three-off! LOL! You are such an amazing writer.
Yay! More reason to avoid doing work for a bit. LOL
Well, and good morning to you to!! Now that I’m awake, fully, it’s off to get the kids up and off to school…tks Jo!!
Wow that was good. I can’t really say why but until I reach the part about the clearness of the sleeping one’s hair, I was convinced that it was Tina awake and Bette sleeping…
Damn that was hot and they didn’t even do anything! :O
Geez Jo, how’s a girl supposed to get any sleep around here?
The mind, the imagination are sometimes more erotic, more sensual than the physical act itself..they are a powerful tool indeed..as you have so perfectly shown….it was edgy,& it was bloody hot!lol….
damn woman, this was hott as hell!!!! and to think no sex. rmao. And yes hearing Tina say the words fuck is one of the many huge turn ons. Then again the hotness that is Laurel aka Tina should be deemed illegal for the hotness that she is and exudes!!!!
Sitting here at my desk and I realize I’m not breathing. Damn, for nothing really happening that was amazingly hot. I don’t know if I can handle it when Tina is fully awake.
Amazing hot and sensual.
Wow Jo! your way with words is amazing!
Yess this was fabulous. I couldn’t help thinking while I as reading this what My encounter if put in a similar situation would be. Dogs panting in a rythmn that would wake me, I see my partner and begin to kiss my way down her body only to have dog hair stop me. then when I finally get to the point where Tina says FUCK, mine would wave me away thinking I was in fact the dog. Your vision is much better. Thanks J
Jwet you had me LMAO at your comment!This was amazing Jo, just…..WOW!!! *thud*. I think its time for a cold shower now. Thanks Jo.
Ah baby – this is lovely! But skirts?! I’ll let that one slide! lol I love it and I’m honoured! xx
My goodness, your partner is one lucky woman!