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While You Are Sleeping…
Do you know that your sleeping body has that power over me…?
I kiss you gently, but one kiss turns into so many tiny kisses that I shower across your neck and into your hair line…, I run my tongue gently across the fine hair on your neck.
I bring my fingers to your hair and move the longer strands to one side, allowing a clear access for my lips to devour more of you.
I feel your head move, stretching forward to unconsciously give me more skin to consume with my lips…, and consume I do…
I run my tongue across your skin, gently, firmly, tasting that sweetness that is just you.
How can you taste so sweet while you are sleeping…, and you always taste the same, your skin has that mesmerising taste no matter what time of day that I taste it, whether you have just showered or not…, I feel my taste buds aroused by not only your flavour, but your aroma too…
My nose takes in the exoticness as my tongue savours you…
You are a lethal combination of all things that arouse my five senses…
As my lips continue the journey across your skin my hand snakes it way gently along your thigh, fingertip touches of your soft skin, easing their way to that soft sensitive place behind your knee…,the one that makes you giggle when you are awake…
You have so many sensitive places for me to touch when you are sleeping and you know how I will take full advantage…
Your calves are so sexy…, firm and feminine, sexy and sleek…, I cup them in my hand as your shoulders come together with what I know to be that erotic shiver that passes through you…
But your ankles, you know how I love them to be resting on my shoulders as I prepare to relish in your centre…, but before I do, I like to kiss them, to kiss that soft area at the back of your ankle, but for now my finger touches that softness, I circle the pointy bone before tracing my nails down to your foot…
I move back up your legs slowly taking in the shapeliness, remembering how it feels to have them wrapped around me, pulling me closer to you…, can we ever get closer than we are…?
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Oh…..that was sooooo good.
Okay that was beyond hot!!!!!!!!!
Jo, OMG!!!! That was so erotic and sensual. To here the word Fuck come for Tina’s mouth I mean Damn. Thanks Jo
Wow! you really know how to rock a shorty.
wow, that was beautifully written and so erotic, they had not even kissed. Please do a follow up…
Wow Wow Wow Wow Wow!!! : 0 *Thud* And imagine…nothing even happened yet!
holy hell woman! I love your writing… the imagery so beautifully crafted while also being incredibly freakin’ hot!!
What an amazing, sensual journey on the body of the Loved One ! Thank you, and also thank your Muse for such a vivid inspiration :-)))
damn, i shouldn’t have read it before bed
Excellent as always Mate! Wow…just wow! Thanks JT! LOL!
My goodness, Jo. That was the most amazingly HOT and oh so sensuous chapter that I have ever had the pleasure of reading. It was inded a great pleasure and you once again gave us a glimpse into the writer that is Ms. JoBadge. You are freaking fabulous. All those words and no one had any sex at all. I don’t have enough words to tell you how very much I enjoyed this. It was superb.
Incredibly sexy, sensual, hot, erotic, etc!!!!!!
Ahhhhh even better the second time, loved it…the way your words makes me use my imagination are amazing. It was sensual, beautiful and erotic. Thanks to The SD LOL. xx
Yep that is what Bette was doing. She was getting herself in the right postition to do just that “Fuck”.
Hey JB! I think this one needs to be a two-off or maybe even a three-off! LOL! You are such an amazing writer.
Yay! More reason to avoid doing work for a bit. LOL
Well, and good morning to you to!! Now that I’m awake, fully, it’s off to get the kids up and off to school…tks Jo!!
Wow that was good. I can’t really say why but until I reach the part about the clearness of the sleeping one’s hair, I was convinced that it was Tina awake and Bette sleeping…
Damn that was hot and they didn’t even do anything! :O
Geez Jo, how’s a girl supposed to get any sleep around here?
The mind, the imagination are sometimes more erotic, more sensual than the physical act itself..they are a powerful tool indeed..as you have so perfectly shown….it was edgy,& it was bloody hot!lol….
damn woman, this was hott as hell!!!! and to think no sex. rmao. And yes hearing Tina say the words fuck is one of the many huge turn ons. Then again the hotness that is Laurel aka Tina should be deemed illegal for the hotness that she is and exudes!!!!
Sitting here at my desk and I realize I’m not breathing. Damn, for nothing really happening that was amazingly hot. I don’t know if I can handle it when Tina is fully awake.
Amazing hot and sensual.
Wow Jo! your way with words is amazing!
Yess this was fabulous. I couldn’t help thinking while I as reading this what My encounter if put in a similar situation would be. Dogs panting in a rythmn that would wake me, I see my partner and begin to kiss my way down her body only to have dog hair stop me. then when I finally get to the point where Tina says FUCK, mine would wave me away thinking I was in fact the dog. Your vision is much better. Thanks J
Jwet you had me LMAO at your comment!This was amazing Jo, just…..WOW!!! *thud*. I think its time for a cold shower now. Thanks Jo.
Ah baby – this is lovely! But skirts?! I’ll let that one slide! lol I love it and I’m honoured! xx
My goodness, your partner is one lucky woman!