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    Why?

    -I can feel you near me.
    Even though you’re far away.
    I can feel you, i can feel you baby.
    It’s not supposed to feel this way.
    I need you, i need you more and more each day.
    Tell me
    Are you and me still together?
    Tell me.
    If we can last forever?-

    Shane stepped out of the classroom. Ashley was still sorting herself out. But she felt it would be better if she left now, she didn’t want the hassel of the girl trying to make friends with her, or wanting another meeting. She headed down the corridor, and over to the classroom Jenny had entered earlier. Jenny was sat in there alone. Shane entered.
    “Hey…What happened?” Shane asked slowly, as she held the door open for her friend.
    Jenny shrugged. “Not sure yet. Get a letter i guess….Where did you go? I had to wait in here because you’d dissapered.”
    “Erm…I went for a walk, to clear my head. And got lost…” Shane mutted, with an unconvincing smile.
    Jenny nodded and headed down the corridor. Shane followed, suddenly hearing a familiar ring tone sound in her ears. She gasped slightly, and grabbed her phone and stared at the number…. It was Carmen.
    She sighed slightly, and cancelled the call. She wasn’t ready to talk with Carmen just yet. And she wondered, if there would ever be a time to talk too Carmen again after the deed she had done. Jenny stared at her strangely.
    “Shane? Whos that?”
    She shrugged. “Carmen…But i don’t want to talk with her right now.”
    With the look in Shane’s eye, Jenny didn’t bother questioning her.

    -It’s not supposed to hurt this way.
    I need you, i need you more and more each day.
    Tell me.-

    Through the rest of the day, Shane sat alone inside her room. She didn’t feel like talking too anyone. She didn’t feel she deserved too. She sighed slightly, and stared at the photo in her hand. It was a photo of her and Carmen…
    The door opened, and before she bothered to look who it was, she thurst the photo in her draw and then turned round to address the intruder.
    “Carmen!” Shane said, her voice full of surprise.
    Carmen nodded, and leaned against the door frame. “You didn’t answer my calls…”
    Shane stared at the floor, she couldn’t bare to look her in the eye. Instead she shurgged. “I don’t have much battery on it…I did try and contact you. Why did it take so long for you to reply?”
    “My family…” Carmen sighed. “They’re pushing me to meet this guy…And i have no excuses left. Shane, i don’t know what to do.”
    Shane tensed slightly. She was never any good with sympathising. “Tell them about us?”
    Carmen shook her head. “How can i? They will dis-own me. And i love my family.”
    “Well. If we’re ment to be together forever. Then you need to tell them some day, don’t you?” Shane mutted slowly.
    “I guess…But now is not that right time…” Carmen sighed.
    “And when is?”
    “Later.”
    “And how long will later be?”
    “I don’t know…” Carmen said. “It’s too stressfull.”
    “Look, the way i see it is. If you don’t tell them now, they will keep pushing you and pushing you until they push you away from me.” Shane mutted, clasping her hands together and shaking slightly.
    Carmen didn’t reply, she just stared at the ground hard. “I don’t know what to do…”
    Shane looked up into Carmens eyes and sighed. Carmen deserved so much better then herself. Maybe this man could look after her better then she could ever. And he probably wouldn’t cheat on her either. She sighed slightly, and fighting back tears, she mutted through a strained voice.
    “Maybe you should do as your family says.”
    Carmen looked up alarmed. “What? Are you joking?” Shane shook her head. “So thats it? You’re just going to give up on us?” Shane shrugged. “How can you do this to me? I love you Shane…” Shane ran a hand through her hair, biting her lip so the tears wouldn’t fall.
    “Just go…” Shane mutted slowly. “Go and get married or whatever. I don’t want you anymore…”
    Carmen didn’t care to let her emotions show, tears flew down her eyes, and she got ready to argue with Shane when Jenny entered and she stopped herself, not wanting to create a scene. Afterall, it was Jenny’s house.
    “Hey Jenny. Can you tell Shane she is fucked up!” Carmen shouted, and then walked out of the house. Slamming doors as she went.
    Shane looked up, tears almost falling. “Jenny…Don’t say a word…Not one word.”

    – Hey.
    Listen to what i say.
    Let’s play.
    Different games then we’re playing.-

    (Await Next Chapter People!)

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    Comments

    1. Intense. Shane really messed up BIGTIME, but she’s letting her guilt sabotage her and Carmen’s happiness (not that cheating on Carmen did much to help the situation). She can’t just push Carmen into a man; I mean, Carmen’s gay, there’s no way she could ever be happy with him. Anywho, I like the story so far. I can follow that you’re using separate paragraphs to distinguish between the narration and Shane’s thoughts, but you might want to separate the narration into different paragraphs as well and maybe italicize Shane’s thoughts (to distinguish from the rest of the story). Just a suggestion, no biggie. I’ll be waiting for the next chapter! :)

    2. Like the part with Carmen stiring alot of drama, but Shane cheating on Carmen can elevate that part out. It is unbelievably parent force hand in marriage it is 2005.

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