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    Why, Bette? (Part 6)

    Story written on July 5, 2004 by PortiaOnly.
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    TiBette look toward the future.

     

    Bette closed the book and walked down the hall to the bedroom.  One long day plus two beers, and a need to hide from reality turned out to be the ideal formula for sleep.   She fell onto the bed and was out within seconds. 

     

    Bette slept soundly, turning in her sleep only once.  She turned and punched her pillow as she moved from her back to her side.  Behind the closed lids, Tina could see Bette’s rapid eye movement.  It was 1:15 in the morning and it had been a long evening and night, but Tina was glad to be home.  When she arrived, she saw slices of apple that had gone brown and hardened slivers of cheese on a small cheese plate on the table next to the chair.  She walked into the bedroom to find Bette asleep, still dressed in pants and white top, an almost empty bottle of beer on the nightstand.  She looked adorable curled up in their new bed. 

     

    Tina tiptoed to the dresser and found a lime green, T-shirt material DKNY nightgown for bed.  Slowly, she closed the bedroom door and walked across the hall to the bathroom.  She showered, washed her hair, and tapped some Giorgio Armani’s ‘Emporio She’ on her pulse points.  Bette loved the fragrance and Tina laughed when she recalled how Bette followed her around the room telling her how good she smelled when they were awaiting guests for their ‘sperm-catching’ party. 

     

    Before going back to the bedroom, Tina stopped off in the kitchen and got out the bottle of wine.  She nodded her approval when she saw that Bette had chilled the expensive bottle they’d been holding onto for the right occasion.  She sliced an apple, too and placed it, the bottle and corkscrew, and two glasses on a tray.  Gingerly, she made her way back to the bedroom and set the tray on the nightstand.  The streetlight from outside gave off just enough illumination for her to see what she was doing, but kept the room ostensibly dark and romantic.  She climbed in beside Bette and knelt next to her.  The new mattress barely moved as Tina straddled Bette’s body.  She leaned down and kissed her cheek.

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    3. I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.

    6. Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!

    8. PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…

    9. Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
      Brava!!

    10. This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)

    11. u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.

    12. Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.

    15. Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks

    17. Just find out your story….
      Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
      I’m gonna read all your stories!
      Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!

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