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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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Bette smiled.
Tina moved her legs and kneeled beside Bette so she could more easily reach the nightstand. “First, we should toast our new bed, hmmm? It looks good, don’t you think?”
“I love it, Tee. Good choice.” Bette sat up and leaned against the headboard. “I have to go to the bathroom. I’ll be right back.”
“Okay.” She held the bottle. “I’ll get this open.”
Bette leapt from the bed, moving rather quickly for someone who had been dead to the world a few minutes ago.
When she returned, a sole candle burned on the dresser, the bottle had been opened, and two glasses poured. Bette grabbed another bite of apple hoping the taste would weaken the minty flavor lingering in her mouth. She wanted to enjoy this wine to its fullest. Tina was leaning against one of the two headboards looking quite alert and ready to play.
“Hi, baby,” Bette said. “You know, this is what I kind of had planned for you when you got home. I wanted to be waiting for you in bed, the wine, the glasses, the music…”
“Do you want music?” Tina started to rise.
Bette shook her head. “Uh-uh. Just you, right there.” Bette crawled into bed and straddled Tina. She picked up one glass and handed it to Tina and then grabbed the other for herself.
“To our new bed, may you know nothing but good times.”
“To good times,” Tina echoed.
They clinked glasses and drank the wine.
“My god, are we dead?” Bette exclaimed. “That is heavenly.”
Tina smacked her lips. “It tastes like…well, extraordinary.”
“Are we being just the tiniest bit hedonistic to be here together on this new bed, sipping some fine wine at two in the morning? We’re so decadent.” Bette said the word ‘decadent’ in a way that made it sound like three separate words. “Shouldn’t we be asleep?”
“The last thing I’m interested in is sleeping, babe.”
“That makes two of us.” Bette gulped one last time from her glass and reached across to place it back on the table. She took Tina’s, too and was preparing to devour her when Tina flipped Bette onto her back and she was on top and held her down by the wrists.
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!