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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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“Baby, I’m home,” she whispered.
Bette moved her head and moaned sleepily. “Tee?”
“Umm, yes.”
Bette tried to turn, but she was trapped between Tina’s thighs. “What are you doing?” she asked groggily.
“Letting you know I’m home.”
Bette took her time, holding Tina’s waist as she lifted her enough to turn onto her back. Tina leaned down and kissed her hello. “Do you know what time it is?”
“No, eleven? Twelve?” Bette looked up at her.
“It’s quarter to two.”
“You’re just getting home?”
“No.” Tina reached across the bed to the nightstand and plucked an apple slice from the plate. “Bite, beer breath.” Bette munched the apple while Tina continued. “I’ve been home half an hour. Showered, brought you a little snack.”
“Put on ‘Emporio She’. You know what that does to me.” Bette pulled Tina down for a proper kiss.
“Tell me.”
“It makes me crazy for you.” Bette reached for her again, but Tina pulled back.
“Ah, you are awake.”
“I am that.”
“You look so good in our new bed in your little outfit.”
“Tina, what took so long?” Bette wanted to find out what had happened and ease her mind.
“The kid fell on his head. He had to have tests, x-rays, but before all that, we had to wait our turn. It took forever. Then when we finally finished at 11:30, I had to spend an hour convincing his mother that he was going to be fine. This sort of job I’ll be leaving to Oscar from now on.”
“You were there for hours. I was worried that…that you were…” Bette bit her lip and didn’t finish her thought.
“You knew where I was, babe.” Tina looked down at her. She saw something in Bette’s eyes—fear, sadness. “Are you doing okay?”
“I just wanted you here tonight and thought you forgot our plans.”
“How could I forget? If I hadn’t been concerned about the kid’s noggin, I would have just sent him home and let his mother deal with it.” Tina stared into Bette’s eyes. “I know it’s late, but can I make it up to you now?”
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!