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Why, Bette? (Part 6)
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Bette shrugged. “I’m not sure. Everybody seemed to have a good time here the other week at the pool party, but there’s still this tension. I guess I feel abandoned by them. I understand why they might take sides and certainly why they’d choose to stick with you, but it’s still strange. I mean they know that what I did was so out of character that something must have been going on with me. Right? So, for them to just forget about me hurts. The only one who reached out at all was Shane and then she backed off. Alice. Alice and I have known each other for a long time and for her to completely ignore me…”
“Well, that’s definitely because of me. I mean I went to her first. She pretty much had to take sides since I was living with her. And Dana couldn’t very well go against Alice. That would probably put a strain in whatever they’ve got going. What about Kit?”
“Kit’s too busy with Ivan,” Bette said with disdain.
“Ivan’s okay. You should get to know her.”
“I’d rather not.”
“Bette, your sister seems very happy.”
“It is nonsensical, Tee. Kit is a straight woman. She has been straight all of her life. All this time she’s known about me, she never said, ‘you know I’ve wondered what it might be like to be with a woman.’ She’s never experimented, never expressed a desire to, and you can be assured the opportunities have been abundant.”
“You don’t know what she’s fantasized about. Maybe Ivan is just what Kit’s been wanting.”
“My sister has given me far more detail than I’ve ever wanted on her sexual exploits,” Bette began as the buzzer went off for her coffee. She walked over and pulled the now filled cup from the pad. She poured cream into the cup “Believe me, Kit was into zee ***** and zee *****,” she said imitating her artist friend who couldn’t quite grasp the idea of artificial insemination, preferring instead the traditional means of conception between a man and a woman.
Tina laughed. Bette walked over to the table and sat next to Tina. “Maybe Ivan knows exactly how to take care of her in just that way, too,” Tina suggested with a smile.
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Portia, your story is pure genius. Congrats on finishing, and I so look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.
Portia just read your series excellent!!
Please write some more. Wonderful series.
I have been patiently waiting for your new chapter, wow was I blown away. I just Loved how you told your story with so much love along with the heartache that a couple feels with infidelity. It is the most intimate betrayle ones partner can do. It opens up so many doubts which you have explored thru your story along with ” we all have our own stories of our childhood” you also explored that thru your story which tells a lot how one’s behavior is in a relationship. I hope that you write more for us readers to enjoy. Thank-you very much.
This series was amazing!!!!
Portia, I just hope that my We are Family! Series comes out a fraction as good as this series was. You’re good, write some more, please! :D
Such detail, such intensity, such love…you just let it all out with full humility…I hope you find time to give us a deeper look into your delicious imagination…I’m a true Portia fan forever!!!
excelent story
PortiaOnly, you did an astonoshing work…really truly amazing…i think it’s the best confrontation between bette and candace that i read – ” fucking is not a relationship”…really cool and strong…too bad you finished…
Portia–This series has been so incredibly well done. Your final chapters were well worth the wait. Hope that we can look forward to more great work from your talented self.
Brava!!
This is a great and captivating fanfic!! Are you sure it is the end? There are still loose ends like Bette not wanting to discuss her mother with the therapist yet, couple counseling (is it over?), hot love-making on the night of exchanging rings…you know :)
u r an amazing writer . u truly moved me and made it all seem so real . thank u for your creativity . i only wish the writers and the producers of TLW r able to create such truth, deepth, insight, dignity, and determination to rebuild their characters broken trust.
Portia, you are an incredible writer with amazing talent. This was written so beautifully, I was moved to tears on more than one occasion. Thank you so much for sharing your gifts with us. I eagerly await your next story.
Thank you for the final chapter. This story tops my list…
Great work!
I’ve greatly enjoyed you story.You’ve done a great job making us feel all the emotiona that Bette&Tina feel or felt.
Portia – I loved your tory – I printed the whole thing out & read it like a novel – you write so fluidly and handle powerful emotion and angst so well and then wrap it all up neatly – what more could we ask for – a good meaty read – I admire greatly the ability to get into the head of a character – I can’t write for Toffee – but I read avidly. Please do create more of this quality – I’ll start your next story & keep looking out for your name. Thanks
Bravo! Very well done! Your descriptions were fantastic. I will keep an eye out for more of your work.
Just find out your story….
Woah, you are gooood!! Words can not describe the feelings and thoughts that keeps running through my body, heart and mind everytime I read the lines of emotions between B&T!
I’m gonna read all your stories!
Please, keep up the good thing going and THANK YOU PORTIA, for sharing!!!